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I just discovered this story but I love it already. Everything is set up so nicely and I just love how everyone just tried to ignore their responsibilities
Read only 8 chapters but this already feels like something I want to continue reading forward. I cannot wait for the 'plot' to happen and you should as well.
I don't usually write reviews for only 4 chapters but I really need to write this to tell you all how great this story is. The build-up is really good and it's really fast paced. The tension is set up straight and I really like the characters this far.
Excited to work on this with you and help you improve. I know there is alot planned for this story and I can tell that we will be having a lot of fun with this as well.
The author here with the shameless review. I tried to make this story as interesting as possible and all your response is greatly appreciated. Also, Power stones, comments, and reviews are greatly appreciated from your side. I will update as constantly as I can but Life may get in the way. (More like my job). But I will do my best not to disappoint you all.
Love it! Such an intruiging plot, full of action, dangers and feelings! The MC is a strong rebel despite being an omega, which I absolutely adore! And I cannot wait to read about the mystery that has befallen the Sentinents and poses a threat to such a powerful race. The split persona of the ML is also very interesting, it will be fun to see his cold side fall in love with MC. Or will his childhood memory be more dominant and take over? The descriptions of their omega/alpha sides are really well done and enrich the story, adding a second layer of meaning to the protagonists‘ behaviour, it‘s really satisfying to read for any omegaverse fan (🔥). It makes me so happy to have this combined with an adventurous sci-fi story! Read it! It‘s a rare gem to find ☺️
I just discovered this story but I love it already. Everything is set up so nicely and I just love how everyone just tried to ignore their responsibilities
Read only 8 chapters but this already feels like something I want to continue reading forward. I cannot wait for the 'plot' to happen and you should as well.
I don't usually write reviews for only 4 chapters but I really need to write this to tell you all how great this story is. The build-up is really good and it's really fast paced. The tension is set up straight and I really like the characters this far.
Excited to work on this with you and help you improve. I know there is alot planned for this story and I can tell that we will be having a lot of fun with this as well.
The author here with the shameless review. I tried to make this story as interesting as possible and all your response is greatly appreciated. Also, Power stones, comments, and reviews are greatly appreciated from your side. I will update as constantly as I can but Life may get in the way. (More like my job). But I will do my best not to disappoint you all.
Love it! Such an intruiging plot, full of action, dangers and feelings! The MC is a strong rebel despite being an omega, which I absolutely adore! And I cannot wait to read about the mystery that has befallen the Sentinents and poses a threat to such a powerful race. The split persona of the ML is also very interesting, it will be fun to see his cold side fall in love with MC. Or will his childhood memory be more dominant and take over? The descriptions of their omega/alpha sides are really well done and enrich the story, adding a second layer of meaning to the protagonists‘ behaviour, it‘s really satisfying to read for any omegaverse fan (🔥). It makes me so happy to have this combined with an adventurous sci-fi story! Read it! It‘s a rare gem to find ☺️