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It’s great, the updates suck but very talented webnovel writer. So let’s try to get them to wright more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ignore all the reveiws on the 5 wishes, they just want to boundless MC that can wipe out the entire omniverse in an instant. The wishes aren't that bad, nor are they to good. He's already a version of superman, so he with have no problem living in the world. And he set up countermeasure against himself incase something like injustice supes happend. And yes he added aliens to the world, or I would just get boring because everyone would be a one hit. The MC did wish to have Lois and gave her powers to protect herself. This isn't nesasarily a good wish bad wish, but atleast it isn't something stupid like a nerf.
Until Chapter 3, it was alright. Author pulls a dues ex machina and rewrites reality for mc.
Deadass almost “coughed up blood” reading those wishes…. Oh they are PAINNNNNNN INDUCING, I don’t remember the last time I have felt this way right at the start of a story so congratulations author….
I liked it, it's not for everyone so if you don't like it just leave and don't whine that you don't like even when you keep reading it.
.................................................................................................................................................. i dont know why people hate this its good just has bad update time ..................................................................................................................................................
Ok ngl this is a really good fic I’ll I hope that you don ’t stop making this fic it’ s been great so pls don’t stop[img=update][img=update][img=update]
I couldn't give it a really high rating cause There's not a lot there to rate so anyway it kind of got away from you when You started to do more DC universe than the boys and Kind of lost interest in that
Horrendous. I don't have a problem with Hero MCs, but imagine being so selfless, that you literally wish yourself to be erased from existence, just so a stronger superman exists in The Boys world. It's just so stupid.
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a dumb mc is an understatement. If he really wanted louis thaen he should have gone to dc but no he had to ruin it by bringing her here. maybe it is my personal opinion because I never liked louis at all. she is too annoying for me. Again this is my personal opinion.
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Prologue- HOW TO WASTE YOUR 5 WISHES……🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
The story is not designed for readers in my opinion. It is basically a wish fulfillment Self-insert book. There is no innovation in the story as the author just inserts some elements ( Clark, his spaceship, and Lois ) into the world of the Boys. The author didn't even give a new name to his character which might be his wish but it looks like the author is too lazy. I would have preferred if the author had added something of his creation to the plot except the story itself. The story itself is also highly unbalanced. I know very well that Kryptonians can be very OP characters as I also right fanfic using them but in this fiction, it feels like everything delivers itself to the M.C. of the story. He doesn't have to do anything hard for it. The plot armor can literally be felt in the story which is not good at all. In the end, I like to say that while I wouldn't recommend someone to read it, I would still hope that the author still writes the story as improvement comes with practice.
Idea was only thing good about this novel Dont waste your time its absolute trash Trash Trash Trash Super trash Omega trash Super man trash Wryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Ho hoooo Nigerundayooooooooooooo
Nice fanfic can't wait for the next chapter[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=fp][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The wishes he makes are dumb beyond belief, instead of giving himself the ability to do the things he wishes for other super heroes from DC to come and do his work, for his goal. Waste of wishes, and naive MC , don’t read if you like strong, merciless, independent MC
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Good story, I like the boys and Superman, it’s a story I’ve wanted to see done and this fulfills my want somewhat, it’s not perfect but it’s a lot better than the ratings say My main gripe with this story is the pacing, I feel like it could have done with a few extra chapters focusing on side characters, like Batman saving some people or Atlantis becoming more known in the world, reaction stuff like the average person reacting to what superman did and so on This type of side stuff could be added at a later date so if the author really wanted to he could do that. I like the design choices, the writing quality is good, stability’s decent, the story development is interesting and it’s just the world background where this story falls short
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awesome story about superman in the Boys universe and how I love it when superman vs homelander like a battle of death or justice league like don't kill
only thing I hate about this story is the wishes I hate wish storys. 😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐
La idea es buena solo que muy mal ejecutada. El protagonista en medio estupido, lo de los deseos con 1 bastaba ser Superman. El resto del los deseos son una perdida. Ningun personaje tiene desarrollo
I’ll be real I respect the time and effort the author put into this book but I think the way you introduced the elements into the story of the The Boys could’ve been better. I have no problem with the elements you chose like Lois and stuff like the wishes cause frankly it’s your story and your free to do whatever you want but if you established the background as a merge of multiple verses like Marvel, DC and The Boys and then made the main character basically Superman I think it would’ve been easier for readers to accept. Especially since it was a “wish” rather than just a reality he had to accept.I’m just giving constructive criticism I don’t want to bash your story.Respectfully if I were you I’d take the concept and rewrite it as in my opinion creativity is hard to find on this app and I think your story can be a gem.
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It’s great, the updates suck but very talented webnovel writer. So let’s try to get them to wright more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ignore all the reveiws on the 5 wishes, they just want to boundless MC that can wipe out the entire omniverse in an instant. The wishes aren't that bad, nor are they to good. He's already a version of superman, so he with have no problem living in the world. And he set up countermeasure against himself incase something like injustice supes happend. And yes he added aliens to the world, or I would just get boring because everyone would be a one hit. The MC did wish to have Lois and gave her powers to protect herself. This isn't nesasarily a good wish bad wish, but atleast it isn't something stupid like a nerf.
Until Chapter 3, it was alright. Author pulls a dues ex machina and rewrites reality for mc.
Deadass almost “coughed up blood” reading those wishes…. Oh they are PAINNNNNNN INDUCING, I don’t remember the last time I have felt this way right at the start of a story so congratulations author….
I liked it, it's not for everyone so if you don't like it just leave and don't whine that you don't like even when you keep reading it.
.................................................................................................................................................. i dont know why people hate this its good just has bad update time ..................................................................................................................................................
Ok ngl this is a really good fic I’ll I hope that you don ’t stop making this fic it’ s been great so pls don’t stop[img=update][img=update][img=update]
I couldn't give it a really high rating cause There's not a lot there to rate so anyway it kind of got away from you when You started to do more DC universe than the boys and Kind of lost interest in that
Horrendous. I don't have a problem with Hero MCs, but imagine being so selfless, that you literally wish yourself to be erased from existence, just so a stronger superman exists in The Boys world. It's just so stupid.
Bom !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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a dumb mc is an understatement. If he really wanted louis thaen he should have gone to dc but no he had to ruin it by bringing her here. maybe it is my personal opinion because I never liked louis at all. she is too annoying for me. Again this is my personal opinion.
Spoiler de révélation Prologue- HOW TO WASTE YOUR 5 WISHES……🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
The story is not designed for readers in my opinion. It is basically a wish fulfillment Self-insert book. There is no innovation in the story as the author just inserts some elements ( Clark, his spaceship, and Lois ) into the world of the Boys. The author didn't even give a new name to his character which might be his wish but it looks like the author is too lazy. I would have preferred if the author had added something of his creation to the plot except the story itself. The story itself is also highly unbalanced. I know very well that Kryptonians can be very OP characters as I also right fanfic using them but in this fiction, it feels like everything delivers itself to the M.C. of the story. He doesn't have to do anything hard for it. The plot armor can literally be felt in the story which is not good at all. In the end, I like to say that while I wouldn't recommend someone to read it, I would still hope that the author still writes the story as improvement comes with practice.
Idea was only thing good about this novel Dont waste your time its absolute trash Trash Trash Trash Super trash Omega trash Super man trash Wryyyyyyyyyyyyyyy Ho hoooo Nigerundayooooooooooooo
Nice fanfic can't wait for the next chapter[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=fp][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The wishes he makes are dumb beyond belief, instead of giving himself the ability to do the things he wishes for other super heroes from DC to come and do his work, for his goal. Waste of wishes, and naive MC , don’t read if you like strong, merciless, independent MC
Spoiler de révélation Good story, I like the boys and Superman, it’s a story I’ve wanted to see done and this fulfills my want somewhat, it’s not perfect but it’s a lot better than the ratings say My main gripe with this story is the pacing, I feel like it could have done with a few extra chapters focusing on side characters, like Batman saving some people or Atlantis becoming more known in the world, reaction stuff like the average person reacting to what superman did and so on This type of side stuff could be added at a later date so if the author really wanted to he could do that. I like the design choices, the writing quality is good, stability’s decent, the story development is interesting and it’s just the world background where this story falls short
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awesome story about superman in the Boys universe and how I love it when superman vs homelander like a battle of death or justice league like don't kill
only thing I hate about this story is the wishes I hate wish storys. 😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐😐
La idea es buena solo que muy mal ejecutada. El protagonista en medio estupido, lo de los deseos con 1 bastaba ser Superman. El resto del los deseos son una perdida. Ningun personaje tiene desarrollo
I’ll be real I respect the time and effort the author put into this book but I think the way you introduced the elements into the story of the The Boys could’ve been better. I have no problem with the elements you chose like Lois and stuff like the wishes cause frankly it’s your story and your free to do whatever you want but if you established the background as a merge of multiple verses like Marvel, DC and The Boys and then made the main character basically Superman I think it would’ve been easier for readers to accept. Especially since it was a “wish” rather than just a reality he had to accept.I’m just giving constructive criticism I don’t want to bash your story.Respectfully if I were you I’d take the concept and rewrite it as in my opinion creativity is hard to find on this app and I think your story can be a gem.