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Mc is a fuctard , what's so important about so that you are willing to see your wife suffer for three years , and grammar is horrible . But please few chapters so that I will have many companions who have suffered reading it
Very poorly written, grammatical errors throughout. It was very difficult to truly enjoy, even though it’s just the beginning.
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Mc is a fuctard , what's so important about so that you are willing to see your wife suffer for three years , and grammar is horrible . But please few chapters so that I will have many companions who have suffered reading it
Very poorly written, grammatical errors throughout. It was very difficult to truly enjoy, even though it’s just the beginning.