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Dr_Shallot

With that explanation on what kind of story this is, I feel like you focused so heavily on making the character good, that the world building is atrocious. No one feels invested in the characters because nothing he's been doing or facing is relatable in any way, and there's nothing about him that we can emphasize or sympathize with. Also, for a story about a Multiversal Chat Group, there is a significant lack of chat group or any chat interactions as the plot progresses forward. We spend over 5-6 chapters reading about the MC and his self-glaze and the glaze others give him, he feels like an enlightened Andrew Tate. The way you describe him, is the way George describes Andrew Tate, it's like you fell in love with your own story and this is the only way to express it. Why haven't you changed? Why are you happy with mediocrity? Do you think so lowly of yourself that you can't even imagine trying harder?

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Celebron

Depois eu volto aqui 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

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Tyler_Crofford

love the book just caught up on the chapters released i honstley can't wait for more ecspicall with rinko and the rest of the girls from my first girlfriend is a gal anime my only qestion is after this and dxd and mabey going back to some worlds will there be any more worlds the mc goes to like musoka tensa or solo leveling or others

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LiberiumK

I have no words to describe this abomination. I am not even go there, just RUN! You’re welcome!

2mth
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Hyroster

Pretty good start and most categories of writing are decent, the only issue I have is when the MC becomes handsome and by that I mean so much so that after about the 4th chapter every other chapter is about how handsome he is or how much girls blush when they stare at him. I have nothing against handsomeness but it adds no substance when its mentioned for 9 chapters straight with no development or regular usage of the actual chat group

3mth
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purnamagil

bro this is very good, just some moments are very stiff and lack of feeling what the characters suggest, but I'm positive about this novel, so why is the update so long?

3mth
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Enryu09

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Rimuru_gamer

Bro can you add esdeath and kurumi and Artoria in the group chat and make them part of the mc harem

3mth
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Mr_Okuro

Honestly, I wasn't expecting much, but I was pleasantly surprised. I really liked the character development, but the development of the harem is somewhat forced and strange.

3mth
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C114y
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So far the e story is decent, and world building is ok, enjoying how the story is some what holding towards the original storyline they are using but am enjoying the creative spin to each and how the author is integrating the MC and other into the story them self, only thing that could be made better, is when the group members travel to the new world that the main host character gain the same information as the rest so that their is no possible slips (for example DXD world if their memories do not match it mostly would not be hard for the old monsters that have been around since the beginning to not see thru the inconsistency’s )and the best way to integrate it would be have the chat system do a update while also adding new characters and worlds to the story

3mth
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God_Is_Yaoi

OH MY GOD!!!!!!! I actually thought this was dropped and stopped reading it before i became attached, Thank you for continuing this 😊😊😊🥰😍😍🌟😘

3mth
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DaoistKPC3gH

I like the story and how it captures the essence of the characters and their stories, and follows them naturally and the interactions with other characters.

4mth
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Pocket_AI

Too much repetitive info. If there is a girl in the chapter you will see AT LEAST ten or more times mentioning how handsome mc is. I got it. There is no need to say that again and again. 10% or so of ALL text is saying how beautiful he is.

4mth
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Niroloc_X

un excelente libro bastante entretenido que te dejara siempre con ganas de mas

4mth
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Lizrock

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Gold_Phoenix777

No es una mala historia pero me aburrió un poco. Llegue hasta el capitulo 155 y lo dejo ahí. Voy a tratar de hacer la critica lo mas constructiva posible. Primero con respecto al MC, la personalidad está bien hecha aunque no me gusta mucho su desarrollo, en un momento es un humano normal y unos capítulos después tiene un Cuerpo Divino y está al nivel de Tatsuya, le diste demasiado poder desde el principio, su relación con los demás personajes está bien. La elección de los miembros del chat no me gustó, excepto por Aika, también me hubiera gustado que en lugar de Erika y CC, se hubieran agregado otros personajes al azar del Multiverso al grupo, ellas no aportan mucho, en las conversaciones del chat parece que solo Aika aporta chistes y humor y los demás se quedan callados o la ignoran, Desde mi punto de vista son todos personajes OP en sus historias sin mucho margen de mejora(en el caso de Satoru, lo digo por Momonga), me hubiera gustado algunos personajes mas expresivos para el grupo y que pudieran crecer con el MC de a poco. Tampoco me llamaron la atención los mundos de los personajes(aunque DXD si me gusta mucho, Overlord y Irregular at Magic High School no me interesan mucho para fanfictions porque el MC en ambas ya está muy por encima del nivel de la trama, es como ir a One Punch y ayudar a Saitama), en el caso de Irregular at Magic High School solo siguió el canon con Yuuji reemplazando o acompañando a Tatsuya en la mitad de las luchas pero es lo mismo del anime. El de Code Geass me lo salté directamente porque no me gusta la serie ni vi el anime. En cuanto al mundo original del MC, me gustan los animes que uniste en ese mundo y la relación del MC con sus personajes. Otra cosa que te recomiendo actualizar es el capitulo auxiliar donde muestra a los personajes, solo se muestra hasta antes de su primer viaje a otro mundo. También podrías agregar algo como un Estado para poder ver las habilidades o niveles de los personajes porque no está muy claro(no digo que lo tengas que actualizar en cada capitulo pero después de volver de otros mundos y abrir las recompensas, sería útil saber las habilidades y capacidades del MC). En cuanto a la escritura, no puedo decir mucho ya que el ingles no es mi primer idioma, pero hay muchas escenas repetidas donde te olvidas algunas cosas que ya pasaron. Por ultimo en cuanto a los niveles de poder, ya dije un poco antes, pero las recompensas son demasiado ridículas, no solo obtienen demasiado poder de repente sino que incluso parece que lo pueden controlar perfectamente desde el principio. Como dije al principio traté de hacer esta critica lo mas constructiva posible como lector, no soy de esos lectores que se ponen a insultar al autor solo porque no les gusta una historia.

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WhiteXlaw

First of all, reading this was too taxing and tiring. There is little to none plot progression compared to huge chunks of words. You'd expect that it would be a smooth reading because of how descriptive the author was, but the majority of the exposition was all about the MC's appearance to the point that you'd ended up asking yourself whether the author was compensating for something or not. And too much blushing for some reason. Blushing is fine, but not to the point that it would destroy the immersion of reading. And the lack of development of MC's personality, too focused on his appearance that the author had forgotten to also properly progress Yuuji's personality. Envisioning the MC was like watching a doormat MC from your typical anime that has Beta MCs. It's fine to be genuinely nice, but not to the point of readers thinking if the MC's head was full of flowers and petals. Remove the repetitive expositions and scenes, the pacing would be fine, but because we kept spending reading how ungodly the MC's looks was, the pacing feels terribly slow. I legitimately skipped some chapters and was surprised the author is still emphasizing Yuuji's appearance. Like, what the heck? Too much glazing. Overall, if the author would focus on MC's character development, be done with his MC worshipping tendencies, and actually progress both the plot and the "should-be" main theme of the story, which is the chat group, this has the potential to be great.

4mth
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Birlly9876543210

No es mala la historia, los elementos que obtiene del chap tampoco pero... el protagonista y su novia principal(aika ) son un poco insoportables en comportamiento.. se que el protagonista viene de un mundo hentai, pero tambien es un trasmigrante almenos deberia tener autocontrol conla parte inferior de su cuerpo, con su nivel de poder no deberia ser dificil...ahora aika esa mujer es demasiado pervertida en serio le lleva mas a la depravacion al protagonista(esa es mi opinion hay mas con referente a aika pero me canse...que dios quiera con esta historia.)

5mth
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mcdinglefart

up to ch 10 and still no plot development and information about missions, multiverse, chat group, or whatsoever and instead the author repetitively described how handsome and mc is good at everything... how the girl screamed 'kya!!' whenever they saw him... I'm done...

5mth
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Yoh3t
LV 4 Badge

Until this present moment, I am trying to understand the need for the fact that the author of this fic has to mention "the epitome" of the protagonist's beauty in each chapter (which is always mentioned, without exception), or the ambiguity that the author leads us to think about two points: who is the real protagonist (whether it is Oc or Aika Kiryu), or who the Hárem belongs to. I don't know if the author is narcissistic, or he is gay (given many points in the fic that made me see this), therefore, I wish the author would stop talking about the protagonist's beauty, and focus more on the plot, thus enriching the story. narrative. Ps: An honorable mention is that the author revives the group chat in the fic, as it is becoming obsolete. Or even create some extra chapters to show the situation of the world after the "protagonist's" visit.

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Niroloc_X

Una excelente historia que te dejara con ganas de mas. 👍

5mth
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Theory18

can you add new picture? i can't open the old picture

5mth
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Zeref_642

I think I have seen at least 10 different authors/translators upload this exact same story.

5mth
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omnioutergod

when will he claim mira and will he have rias and akeno and Kuroka I also a have a question what will the mc background be in dxd hopefully not human maybe devil or angel maybe a god or even a dragon and what's after the dxd quest will chat group add members of higher different worlds

6mth
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F_Angel_D

I don't know about anyone else, but I personally like the story, though there are some grammar errors. I've read way worse stories than this. That looks like a person with 10-year-old grammar skills, so to anyone who is seeing this comment, I would recommend reading it first before brushing. It off. Because for me, a good story is one that I can understand first and foremost, and after that is the plot and so on. But I think we can all agree that as readers, we have our individual preferences in reading stories..... So yeah, to anyone who finds this comment, please read it first. If you like, then NICE, just point out the errors so the next chap can be improved, no need to hate. But if you don't like the story then you don't, just find another one; there is no use in complaining about what's already written.

6mth
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SHADOWS_69

the story is really slow specially the beginning and the first few chapters are boring but if you continue reading it gets good. (but not everyone is gonna like it) a pretty good story if you can take the slow pace of the story and its inconsistencies.

6mth
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Urbelt

I realy enjoy this fic. Hopefully author won't drop it.

6mth
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Jeremy_5108

Muy bueno,espero y continúes con la historia

6mth
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NeaCambelt

Au début on nous dit que tatsuya a dit à miyuki le chat groupe et après chapitre 50 le MC dit que tatsuya veux dire à miyuka le tchat groupe

7mth
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Dr_Shallot

With that explanation on what kind of story this is, I feel like you focused so heavily on making the character good, that the world building is atrocious. No one feels invested in the characters because nothing he's been doing or facing is relatable in any way, and there's nothing about him that we can emphasize or sympathize with. Also, for a story about a Multiversal Chat Group, there is a significant lack of chat group or any chat interactions as the plot progresses forward. We spend over 5-6 chapters reading about the MC and his self-glaze and the glaze others give him, he feels like an enlightened Andrew Tate. The way you describe him, is the way George describes Andrew Tate, it's like you fell in love with your own story and this is the only way to express it. Why haven't you changed? Why are you happy with mediocrity? Do you think so lowly of yourself that you can't even imagine trying harder?

18d
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Celebron

Depois eu volto aqui 😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀

1mth
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Tyler_Crofford

love the book just caught up on the chapters released i honstley can't wait for more ecspicall with rinko and the rest of the girls from my first girlfriend is a gal anime my only qestion is after this and dxd and mabey going back to some worlds will there be any more worlds the mc goes to like musoka tensa or solo leveling or others

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LiberiumK

I have no words to describe this abomination. I am not even go there, just RUN! You’re welcome!

2mth
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Hyroster

Pretty good start and most categories of writing are decent, the only issue I have is when the MC becomes handsome and by that I mean so much so that after about the 4th chapter every other chapter is about how handsome he is or how much girls blush when they stare at him. I have nothing against handsomeness but it adds no substance when its mentioned for 9 chapters straight with no development or regular usage of the actual chat group

3mth
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purnamagil

bro this is very good, just some moments are very stiff and lack of feeling what the characters suggest, but I'm positive about this novel, so why is the update so long?

3mth
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Enryu09

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Rimuru_gamer

Bro can you add esdeath and kurumi and Artoria in the group chat and make them part of the mc harem

3mth
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Mr_Okuro

Honestly, I wasn't expecting much, but I was pleasantly surprised. I really liked the character development, but the development of the harem is somewhat forced and strange.

3mth
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C114y
LV 14 Badge

So far the e story is decent, and world building is ok, enjoying how the story is some what holding towards the original storyline they are using but am enjoying the creative spin to each and how the author is integrating the MC and other into the story them self, only thing that could be made better, is when the group members travel to the new world that the main host character gain the same information as the rest so that their is no possible slips (for example DXD world if their memories do not match it mostly would not be hard for the old monsters that have been around since the beginning to not see thru the inconsistency’s )and the best way to integrate it would be have the chat system do a update while also adding new characters and worlds to the story

3mth
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God_Is_Yaoi

OH MY GOD!!!!!!! I actually thought this was dropped and stopped reading it before i became attached, Thank you for continuing this 😊😊😊🥰😍😍🌟😘

3mth
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DaoistKPC3gH

I like the story and how it captures the essence of the characters and their stories, and follows them naturally and the interactions with other characters.

4mth
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Pocket_AI

Too much repetitive info. If there is a girl in the chapter you will see AT LEAST ten or more times mentioning how handsome mc is. I got it. There is no need to say that again and again. 10% or so of ALL text is saying how beautiful he is.

4mth
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Niroloc_X

un excelente libro bastante entretenido que te dejara siempre con ganas de mas

4mth
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Lizrock

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4mth
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Gold_Phoenix777

No es una mala historia pero me aburrió un poco. Llegue hasta el capitulo 155 y lo dejo ahí. Voy a tratar de hacer la critica lo mas constructiva posible. Primero con respecto al MC, la personalidad está bien hecha aunque no me gusta mucho su desarrollo, en un momento es un humano normal y unos capítulos después tiene un Cuerpo Divino y está al nivel de Tatsuya, le diste demasiado poder desde el principio, su relación con los demás personajes está bien. La elección de los miembros del chat no me gustó, excepto por Aika, también me hubiera gustado que en lugar de Erika y CC, se hubieran agregado otros personajes al azar del Multiverso al grupo, ellas no aportan mucho, en las conversaciones del chat parece que solo Aika aporta chistes y humor y los demás se quedan callados o la ignoran, Desde mi punto de vista son todos personajes OP en sus historias sin mucho margen de mejora(en el caso de Satoru, lo digo por Momonga), me hubiera gustado algunos personajes mas expresivos para el grupo y que pudieran crecer con el MC de a poco. Tampoco me llamaron la atención los mundos de los personajes(aunque DXD si me gusta mucho, Overlord y Irregular at Magic High School no me interesan mucho para fanfictions porque el MC en ambas ya está muy por encima del nivel de la trama, es como ir a One Punch y ayudar a Saitama), en el caso de Irregular at Magic High School solo siguió el canon con Yuuji reemplazando o acompañando a Tatsuya en la mitad de las luchas pero es lo mismo del anime. El de Code Geass me lo salté directamente porque no me gusta la serie ni vi el anime. En cuanto al mundo original del MC, me gustan los animes que uniste en ese mundo y la relación del MC con sus personajes. Otra cosa que te recomiendo actualizar es el capitulo auxiliar donde muestra a los personajes, solo se muestra hasta antes de su primer viaje a otro mundo. También podrías agregar algo como un Estado para poder ver las habilidades o niveles de los personajes porque no está muy claro(no digo que lo tengas que actualizar en cada capitulo pero después de volver de otros mundos y abrir las recompensas, sería útil saber las habilidades y capacidades del MC). En cuanto a la escritura, no puedo decir mucho ya que el ingles no es mi primer idioma, pero hay muchas escenas repetidas donde te olvidas algunas cosas que ya pasaron. Por ultimo en cuanto a los niveles de poder, ya dije un poco antes, pero las recompensas son demasiado ridículas, no solo obtienen demasiado poder de repente sino que incluso parece que lo pueden controlar perfectamente desde el principio. Como dije al principio traté de hacer esta critica lo mas constructiva posible como lector, no soy de esos lectores que se ponen a insultar al autor solo porque no les gusta una historia.

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WhiteXlaw

First of all, reading this was too taxing and tiring. There is little to none plot progression compared to huge chunks of words. You'd expect that it would be a smooth reading because of how descriptive the author was, but the majority of the exposition was all about the MC's appearance to the point that you'd ended up asking yourself whether the author was compensating for something or not. And too much blushing for some reason. Blushing is fine, but not to the point that it would destroy the immersion of reading. And the lack of development of MC's personality, too focused on his appearance that the author had forgotten to also properly progress Yuuji's personality. Envisioning the MC was like watching a doormat MC from your typical anime that has Beta MCs. It's fine to be genuinely nice, but not to the point of readers thinking if the MC's head was full of flowers and petals. Remove the repetitive expositions and scenes, the pacing would be fine, but because we kept spending reading how ungodly the MC's looks was, the pacing feels terribly slow. I legitimately skipped some chapters and was surprised the author is still emphasizing Yuuji's appearance. Like, what the heck? Too much glazing. Overall, if the author would focus on MC's character development, be done with his MC worshipping tendencies, and actually progress both the plot and the "should-be" main theme of the story, which is the chat group, this has the potential to be great.

4mth
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Birlly9876543210

No es mala la historia, los elementos que obtiene del chap tampoco pero... el protagonista y su novia principal(aika ) son un poco insoportables en comportamiento.. se que el protagonista viene de un mundo hentai, pero tambien es un trasmigrante almenos deberia tener autocontrol conla parte inferior de su cuerpo, con su nivel de poder no deberia ser dificil...ahora aika esa mujer es demasiado pervertida en serio le lleva mas a la depravacion al protagonista(esa es mi opinion hay mas con referente a aika pero me canse...que dios quiera con esta historia.)

5mth
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mcdinglefart

up to ch 10 and still no plot development and information about missions, multiverse, chat group, or whatsoever and instead the author repetitively described how handsome and mc is good at everything... how the girl screamed 'kya!!' whenever they saw him... I'm done...

5mth
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Yoh3t
LV 4 Badge

Until this present moment, I am trying to understand the need for the fact that the author of this fic has to mention "the epitome" of the protagonist's beauty in each chapter (which is always mentioned, without exception), or the ambiguity that the author leads us to think about two points: who is the real protagonist (whether it is Oc or Aika Kiryu), or who the Hárem belongs to. I don't know if the author is narcissistic, or he is gay (given many points in the fic that made me see this), therefore, I wish the author would stop talking about the protagonist's beauty, and focus more on the plot, thus enriching the story. narrative. Ps: An honorable mention is that the author revives the group chat in the fic, as it is becoming obsolete. Or even create some extra chapters to show the situation of the world after the "protagonist's" visit.

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Niroloc_X

Una excelente historia que te dejara con ganas de mas. 👍

5mth
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Theory18

can you add new picture? i can't open the old picture

5mth
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Zeref_642

I think I have seen at least 10 different authors/translators upload this exact same story.

5mth
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omnioutergod

when will he claim mira and will he have rias and akeno and Kuroka I also a have a question what will the mc background be in dxd hopefully not human maybe devil or angel maybe a god or even a dragon and what's after the dxd quest will chat group add members of higher different worlds

6mth
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F_Angel_D

I don't know about anyone else, but I personally like the story, though there are some grammar errors. I've read way worse stories than this. That looks like a person with 10-year-old grammar skills, so to anyone who is seeing this comment, I would recommend reading it first before brushing. It off. Because for me, a good story is one that I can understand first and foremost, and after that is the plot and so on. But I think we can all agree that as readers, we have our individual preferences in reading stories..... So yeah, to anyone who finds this comment, please read it first. If you like, then NICE, just point out the errors so the next chap can be improved, no need to hate. But if you don't like the story then you don't, just find another one; there is no use in complaining about what's already written.

6mth
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SHADOWS_69

the story is really slow specially the beginning and the first few chapters are boring but if you continue reading it gets good. (but not everyone is gonna like it) a pretty good story if you can take the slow pace of the story and its inconsistencies.

6mth
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Urbelt

I realy enjoy this fic. Hopefully author won't drop it.

6mth
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Jeremy_5108

Muy bueno,espero y continúes con la historia

6mth
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NeaCambelt

Au début on nous dit que tatsuya a dit à miyuki le chat groupe et après chapitre 50 le MC dit que tatsuya veux dire à miyuka le tchat groupe

7mth
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