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Can you please continue this book? I see to much potential that I wish to see perfected for this book to go to waste.
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This is my creation so I'm going to put a review and I know my fanfic isn't perfect and you guys can tell me what I can make better if you know which part is not good
Can you please continue this book? I see to much potential that I wish to see perfected for this book to go to waste.
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This is my creation so I'm going to put a review and I know my fanfic isn't perfect and you guys can tell me what I can make better if you know which part is not good