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Plot is gold, although he needs to go through NTR. But we get a much better Issei than the original and warning genderbent Vali.
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great nove. love how its going. You can really feel the sadness and hatred. but I could never see Asia betraying anyone With her personality
I have to say I love this fan fic the author has done something totally different keep up the great work The reason it is different the author doesn’t just copy the show which some people do thanks for your great story
thanks for making one of the best DXD fanfictions out there. I really love the concept of the story that you have made. I can't wait to see what you have instore for the readers next
The story is awesome good character development and the way the stkry went is fantastic however the story begins to go down once Trahexia is killed he went to shield hero and was nerfed to the point its not even funny alot of plot holes as well he went from heavenly dragon king to nerfed weak pretty mich low class devil power in the shield hero regardless of his power being locked he should still be able to steam roll through everything but the power levels r so off to make a plot
Plot is gold, although he needs to go through NTR. But we get a much better Issei than the original and warning genderbent Vali.
Spoiler de révélation Very good.................................................................................................................................................
great nove. love how its going. You can really feel the sadness and hatred. but I could never see Asia betraying anyone With her personality
I have to say I love this fan fic the author has done something totally different keep up the great work The reason it is different the author doesn’t just copy the show which some people do thanks for your great story
thanks for making one of the best DXD fanfictions out there. I really love the concept of the story that you have made. I can't wait to see what you have instore for the readers next
The story is awesome good character development and the way the stkry went is fantastic however the story begins to go down once Trahexia is killed he went to shield hero and was nerfed to the point its not even funny alot of plot holes as well he went from heavenly dragon king to nerfed weak pretty mich low class devil power in the shield hero regardless of his power being locked he should still be able to steam roll through everything but the power levels r so off to make a plot