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Wow.... what a great story! I love this story, from the character of the players in this story and the idea of the story. Keep the spirit for author updates!
OMG this really nice story! I read the blurb and add this book to my library soon, as I read it cause the story it's like make you on the rollercoaster! good job author!
The English version is really cool, I will keep reading and the story of Jingga and Arseni will always be in my heart. Author's spirit, keep going
Oh ini versi englishnya yaaa.. Wiii Hai aku datang kaaakk! Nih klo liat ceritanya kayaknya pengalaman banget wkwkwk. Seneng sih klo baca pernikahan yang penuh liku gini. Karena emang gak semua pernikahan itu indah2 kan? hehe
The first time I read the synopsis, it made me sad. I have to add this story to the library, the author is great at playing with my feelings.. I can't imagine how Jingga's life will be, who has to marry a man who killed both of his parents.
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It's so an interesting story. I love the way the author tells about the plot and characters. Keep it up, author. Fighting [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
a story that really intrigued me. The author of this story is so great, it makes me always look forward to his works[img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Seriously, I like this story, even though there is an Indonesian version but this one is no less interesting, just keep writing, okay! Already on the list🤗
Oh my god, a very interesting and curious story. I felt like I really got into the story the author created. The author's passion to create quality works 😘
Very interesting story about arranged marriage. There's nothing okay with aranged marriage. I hope you guys can be together forever. Cheers to the writer who has made such a great story 🥰🥰
More curious about the continuation of the story 💞💞 I always wait for the next story and hope for a happy ending 🥰🥰🥰 Keep spirit 💜💜💜
I really like stories about arranged marriage. I hope Jingga and Arseno are soul mates 🥰🥰🥰 Even though they past is very painful 😇😇 ☺☺☺
Wow 🥰🥰 Very good and interesting story. I will always wait for the sequel. Keep the spirit for the author to create amazing works 💪💪💪💪
this story is about arrange marriage, destiny is very painful, hopefully there will be a happy ending for Jingga. a dark story idea but wrapped in a light and well-written plot. the author is able to make the reader more curious in each chapter. good job.
Wow.... what a great story! I love this story, from the character of the players in this story and the idea of the story. Keep the spirit for author updates!
OMG this really nice story! I read the blurb and add this book to my library soon, as I read it cause the story it's like make you on the rollercoaster! good job author!
The English version is really cool, I will keep reading and the story of Jingga and Arseni will always be in my heart. Author's spirit, keep going
Oh ini versi englishnya yaaa.. Wiii Hai aku datang kaaakk! Nih klo liat ceritanya kayaknya pengalaman banget wkwkwk. Seneng sih klo baca pernikahan yang penuh liku gini. Karena emang gak semua pernikahan itu indah2 kan? hehe
The first time I read the synopsis, it made me sad. I have to add this story to the library, the author is great at playing with my feelings.. I can't imagine how Jingga's life will be, who has to marry a man who killed both of his parents.
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makin keren cerita author satu ini, up yang banyak thor ku tunggu cerita selanjutnya🥰[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
It's so an interesting story. I love the way the author tells about the plot and characters. Keep it up, author. Fighting [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
a story that really intrigued me. The author of this story is so great, it makes me always look forward to his works[img=update][img=update][img=update]
very interesting story. I'm really looking forward to the continuation[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Seriously, I like this story, even though there is an Indonesian version but this one is no less interesting, just keep writing, okay! Already on the list🤗
Oh my god, a very interesting and curious story. I felt like I really got into the story the author created. The author's passion to create quality works 😘
Very interesting story about arranged marriage. There's nothing okay with aranged marriage. I hope you guys can be together forever. Cheers to the writer who has made such a great story 🥰🥰
More curious about the continuation of the story 💞💞 I always wait for the next story and hope for a happy ending 🥰🥰🥰 Keep spirit 💜💜💜
I really like stories about arranged marriage. I hope Jingga and Arseno are soul mates 🥰🥰🥰 Even though they past is very painful 😇😇 ☺☺☺
Wow 🥰🥰 Very good and interesting story. I will always wait for the sequel. Keep the spirit for the author to create amazing works 💪💪💪💪
this story is about arrange marriage, destiny is very painful, hopefully there will be a happy ending for Jingga. a dark story idea but wrapped in a light and well-written plot. the author is able to make the reader more curious in each chapter. good job.