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hmmm.... I didn't like MC personality. he resembles CN MC too much, too toxic. if it's translated works then it's understandable, but if not.... yeah. everything except MC personality is solid 4 stars at minimum though.
I thought the plot was interesting and the story is decent. unique enough to catch my interest and Boruto hasn't been fleshed out much in fanfics. The story hits a snag with the MCs personality. He's a really bad brother and it just leaves a bad taste in your mouth. it might be done as some kind of comic relief but it falls terribly flat. It doesn't make sense either because only a neglected, self absorbed child would act that way, thats not normal brother dynamic, and he hasn't been mistreated. there are holes in the story already but that can be overlooked honestly. Also, the MC seems a bit arrogant and too sure of himself as well. Killing tigers without a second thought, days after showing up in that world. and how can a Wooden training sword channel and project Chakra without at least exploding?
finalllllllly the king is coming back ............... ................... .................... .......................... ....................
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awesome novel its great but just the absolute worst in the amount of chapters like you wait a whole month and then there's like one chapter and now there hasn't been one for over 2 months awesome potential and a good book but just I will die of old age before it gets finished if it ever does it might be dropped for all I know
Please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop! sir please don't drop this novel, its so good! the way the plot created is better! please add more chapter sir!
c'ets pourri les perso sont sans personnalité et le mc est un mechant de 3 eme zone c une perte de temps dqskodqsodkodqsdkosdoqksdqsokdqokqdqdds
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five stars for trying to make Boruto readable but unfortunately Boring Naruto is simple boring Naruto... I honestly hate the 140 letter requirement
So, updates are rare, but the plot is interesting. The characters aren't particularly revealed, but that's not what I'm here. The world is only conoha, nothing more. Errors... Couple
I'm really enjoying this, I just hope the author doesn't drop this story like the previous one and actually finishes this one, the chapters that are already out have been amazing, i hope it carries on like that. Question: Will there be romance?
I like the story a lot please don't drop it .....................................................................................................
I’ve been wondering if you letting them know that The otsutsuki wants to kill Law and that he was a God killer and you letting your family knows that you are law, then what happens if The otutsuki do not know law??
The story is interesting since the MC comes from the Nara clan. My only opinion is that currently the MC is to battle oriented while the template itself for Law is that he's a doctor, so i hope the MC become more knowledgeable in healing ninjutsu and not to arrogant (since currently the following chapter the MC are to arrogrant) and can be low down a bit or explain to other character why he behave like that. Other that than it's good. I hope in seeing more update and the progress of the story
Great story—couldn’t put it down! Can’t wait for the next book. Loved it! Loved the characters. Loved the plot. Love this author. Another great book by a great author. I can’t wait to read the next book. So good I’ll probably read it again!
I really like this fanfic and the fact that u use the power of trafalgar is rlly good (sorry for the English it's not my first language)pls continue this fanfic
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Book.was ok but not like first book...mc bully character is too much ..he act like leader but not bully . ..and more about template Only short story
I'm not going to lie it's a good concept the writing is great it's honestly just a really good book the only problem I have is this just not for me if you're looking at this and you're wondering if you should give it a try I'd say at least give it a try I think you might like it
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Good,continue this story,Thankss for the chapter............... ........👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍..Thank you👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I like what you did. But there is no fanfic of boruto because the serie is garbage and a waste of time compared to Naruto... But i love your history.
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hmmm.... I didn't like MC personality. he resembles CN MC too much, too toxic. if it's translated works then it's understandable, but if not.... yeah. everything except MC personality is solid 4 stars at minimum though.
I thought the plot was interesting and the story is decent. unique enough to catch my interest and Boruto hasn't been fleshed out much in fanfics. The story hits a snag with the MCs personality. He's a really bad brother and it just leaves a bad taste in your mouth. it might be done as some kind of comic relief but it falls terribly flat. It doesn't make sense either because only a neglected, self absorbed child would act that way, thats not normal brother dynamic, and he hasn't been mistreated. there are holes in the story already but that can be overlooked honestly. Also, the MC seems a bit arrogant and too sure of himself as well. Killing tigers without a second thought, days after showing up in that world. and how can a Wooden training sword channel and project Chakra without at least exploding?
finalllllllly the king is coming back ............... ................... .................... .......................... ....................
Soooooooooooooooooo good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good Please update please please update
just one word to say author :: marvelous [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap] [img=faceslap]
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awesome novel its great but just the absolute worst in the amount of chapters like you wait a whole month and then there's like one chapter and now there hasn't been one for over 2 months awesome potential and a good book but just I will die of old age before it gets finished if it ever does it might be dropped for all I know
Please don't drop, please don't drop, please don't drop! sir please don't drop this novel, its so good! the way the plot created is better! please add more chapter sir!
c'ets pourri les perso sont sans personnalité et le mc est un mechant de 3 eme zone c une perte de temps dqskodqsodkodqsdkosdoqksdqsokdqokqdqdds
good novel and interesting story hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahhaahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaahahahahahaha
five stars for trying to make Boruto readable but unfortunately Boring Naruto is simple boring Naruto... I honestly hate the 140 letter requirement
So, updates are rare, but the plot is interesting. The characters aren't particularly revealed, but that's not what I'm here. The world is only conoha, nothing more. Errors... Couple
I'm really enjoying this, I just hope the author doesn't drop this story like the previous one and actually finishes this one, the chapters that are already out have been amazing, i hope it carries on like that. Question: Will there be romance?
I like the story a lot please don't drop it .....................................................................................................
I’ve been wondering if you letting them know that The otsutsuki wants to kill Law and that he was a God killer and you letting your family knows that you are law, then what happens if The otutsuki do not know law??
The story is interesting since the MC comes from the Nara clan. My only opinion is that currently the MC is to battle oriented while the template itself for Law is that he's a doctor, so i hope the MC become more knowledgeable in healing ninjutsu and not to arrogant (since currently the following chapter the MC are to arrogrant) and can be low down a bit or explain to other character why he behave like that. Other that than it's good. I hope in seeing more update and the progress of the story
Great story—couldn’t put it down! Can’t wait for the next book. Loved it! Loved the characters. Loved the plot. Love this author. Another great book by a great author. I can’t wait to read the next book. So good I’ll probably read it again!
I really like this fanfic and the fact that u use the power of trafalgar is rlly good (sorry for the English it's not my first language)pls continue this fanfic
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Book.was ok but not like first book...mc bully character is too much ..he act like leader but not bully . ..and more about template Only short story
I'm not going to lie it's a good concept the writing is great it's honestly just a really good book the only problem I have is this just not for me if you're looking at this and you're wondering if you should give it a try I'd say at least give it a try I think you might like it
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Good,continue this story,Thankss for the chapter............... ........👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍..Thank you👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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I like what you did. But there is no fanfic of boruto because the serie is garbage and a waste of time compared to Naruto... But i love your history.
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