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story is good upto heaven control realm after that it gets boring as story goes on chu ran(male lead) characterization gets worst(helps all female characters he meets but there is only one female lead upto now) and boring(too saintlye.g he wont even kill the villan who trys kill his family and friends)Story development too repeated strength development is not good from heaven control realmfemale leads too messy
Don't fall for the title. MC has nothing to do with the word intelligent. He got a A.I like calculative power and only uses it for martial arts.More like he only got martial arts in his mind and doesn't care about anything else.It's even more worse than the recent system novels with cowardly MCs. And MC doesn't even progress with his cultivation.
For a mc which a super brain, he gotta be the dumbest dude around. He's always jumping into the dumbest and most dangerous situation ever without good reason. It's like he knows he got plot armor and constantly jumping into enemy strong holds.
It's not bad overall. The protagonist isn't a coward, but he is a bit stupid and useless, even with cheats. His strength seems to vary greatly and you never know if he'll stomp someone or struggle against someone, even if the cultivation level is the same. The protagonist starts out at the Overlord Body realm, which is basically just a step above complete beginner. After 160 chapters... he is still in the same realm, while his enemies for the last 130 chapters have been in a higher realm. Does this mean that he'll realize that he needs to start cultivating seriously? No, not at all. He's still spending all his time doing unimportant things. In a 160 chapters, this is basically what has happened: He got the analytical ability, he practices techniques (Doesn't cultivate), he joined a tournament and now he wants to apply to an academy and continue his school life. Yes, that's all that happened in nearly 200 chapters. That should tell you how slow this novel is.
15 Chapters in , I regret time spent . Poor character and world building , lack of basic logic in mc , who literally has some “cheat analysis system”
The authors skills are good. Its just that he is very greedy and stretches the story very long.
good concept but too much non sense repetitive way of writing just to prolong some events.. like trash talking to opponents.. enemy would repeat same words like are you ready to die.. so annoying bs
died from cringe when some random enemy said no balls to the MC and he activated a 10/20% death button just to get stronger now, and after he pushed it again I dropped it, really really cringy, cant you just wait a week and be twice stronger than him???? just why, literally 0 IQ
What a stupid protagonist. Risks his life in a tournament. Does what a kidnapper says instead of calling the police. There is a whole galaxy but he risks his life for one specific method in one specific school. Stupid moron.
Main character is so naive, and doesn’t question anything. People take advtange of him and he willingly will help people that betray/go back on their word.
So many things to pick on but this is your below average novel. Has an AI but didn't even learn other things to at least have theory on how things should be but no he focused on martial arts even though it won't take him a day to learn other things like for example how to operate machines so that he could at least help If you want an MC who actually uses his AI cheat then I suggest you read Star Ranked Hunter, one of the top tier novels, I don't know if you will be able to find it here but just search on google Star Ranked Hunter
MC is an idiot, doesn't question why people will pay a ton of money to him just for him to play a VR game despite him wanting to hide his brain AI. Just giving away his secrets for free. Dropped at chapter 124 (right after this majorly stupid move).
alright, no real surprises. bit of a Mary Sue MC as he'll make a breakthrough then next chapter have some new threat which his breakthrough happens to perfectly counter. no real issue with the writing, but the translator doesn't seem to understand the n't suffix (so the above sentence would be written: the translator does seem to understand the suffix) it's not that big of an issue, but when you have to work out what is actually written in the middle of a scene, it's very annoying. this is a problem for doesn't couldn't wouldn't shouldn't etc.
Another CHINA number 1,china is supreme,chinese race is superior novel. japan/Europe and america are nothing but slave nation. for jesus Christ chinese people move on. what happen in wwII is part of the war don't blame japan to anything bad happen in your country is not their fault that you are weak in that time. i thought you are strong with exaggerated history like "romance of the 3 kingdom" like war lord lu bu kill 50million soldier. really? 50million?
..........................nsnrjdnnsjwknfnnxnsnjskdbfnjxsns.zjfnnd Yyxih a tdigxig oh hocoufigxigxiyouvohchlckgxkgxjgxig o ychodiycoj jocohxih
Really can't figure out how such a promising plot can be screwed up so badly... I was so excited in the beginning when his cheat was revealed, and thought, worst case, it'll be a standard xianxia plot. Never could I imagine that the MC would be characterized so badly. Playing around with lolis, random fights that seem like they've been written on a whim, unnecessary conflicts because MC acts like it's beneath him to explain circumstances properly. Especially chapters 365-370, why couldn't he just show the dean how he modifies a technique by requesting one that's not in the library and doing it on the spot. Instead, the author just had to escalate this to another meaningless conflict. Sincerely request the author to improve the novel while they can. Try and take reference from the ones that succeeded with similar cheats (Warlock of the Magus World kind of novels). Just a suggestion from my part.
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It's a pretty good story overall but I dislike the fact that it's often slow paced and takes a lot of chapters before explaining information. Other than that, the development of the strenght of the character isn't really consistent or these kind of things since there is basically 100 chapters where he does random stuff around and then there's 1 chapter where he becomes 10 times stronger instantly instead of consistently improving. It's also annoying how it's mentioned every single chapter that the character will never breakthrough to the bla bla bla or he lost because they underestimated him or whatever and it becomes quite repeatitive a the end. It is still quite supportable and if you ignore that it's a pretty good novel compared to other I've read on the website.
A 100+ chapters and mc was still in 1st cultivation realm, most of the chapters was wasted because of unnecessary and repetitive information like how does body will achieve something like that, how can I control my internal breathing more freely yada yada, author focusing on word count literally destroyed this story haiist
If you read the mtl translations of this you would realize that this book is a bomber. with over seventeen thousand chapters everything is explained and the world building is extremely completed and almost everything seems like a plot hole until you read for at least another one hundred chapters. I regret finishing it in two weeks because now I'll have to find something to red that lives up to this. 10/10 would recomend
Lack of imagination leads to shallow writing quality and the author only cares about word count. The only good thing about this work is how easily it makes you sleep.
Master Of Martial Arts Has An Advanced Optical Brain is a story about Chu Nan, a completely mediocre student who decided to become below-average due to useless pride/stubbornness. Luckily, God (the author) decided to save him by giving him an "advanced optical brain". This allows him to have very high calculative skills and a the ability to process this information extremely fast. I think I am genuinely becoming sick of reading Chinese novels in general. It's very obvious that there is a very severe lack of talented authors that write xianxia/xuanhua. Translation quality is mediocre. Theres many mistakes especially at the end of chapters. (3/5 stars) Story development makes it very apparent that the author only wants word count, nothing else matters. This novel incorporates two of the most annoying writing "techniques" that you'll find in these novels. First, repeating the same information from a different point of view, often taking up an entire chapter. The second is how every time the main character does anything, we are forced to suffer and read some random reaction of some random irrelevant special-ed kid who exists solely to insult the main character. Aside from all that, this story is rather directionless. The only goal is for the main character to get to a higher-tier academy. What awful and cliche settings. We go from school arc to tournament arc to another school arc. Seriously? Character design is awful as well. I feel like it's a waste to write another long-paragraph. We have the same cliche annoying characters as every other martial arts novel. (2/5 stars) World background is also abysmal. In sixty chapters, I don't even think that the author has mentioned the main character's family aside from saying he comes from a family of farmers. Aside from that, barely anything has been properly described. We are suddenly in a school arc with the main character making many improvements, and then thrown into a drawn-out tournament arc. In sixty chapters, aside from introducing more useless and cliche characters, as well as providing a very superficial understanding of the world, we know next to nothing. Very poor attempt. (1/5 stars) Overall, it's yet another novel where the author solely cares for word count. The only positives in this novel are solely coincidences that I doubt the author meant to happen in the first place. I give this novel 2.4 stars out of 5.
is there a romance? ......................................................................................................................................
Leí esta novela hace un tiempo, tengo que decir que es muy buena, les recomiendo mucho que la lean, el protagonista tiene una buena personalidad, la construcción del mundo es muy buena, la novia también es muy buena, y la trama también es atrapante. los villanos también son muy bien construidos, y las explicaciones y ciencias ficción son muy estables. el final también es un 8/10. muy bueno.
I really hate this MC. Because of the plot armor, we see him being underestimated in every fight. And because of this, he never fight with his full strenght at the start. As soon as the MC start to loose, the plot armor kick in and the antagonist strats talking or he finally uses his brain and uses his cheat at its fullest. The MC should have been dead a long time ago.
this is one of those novels where a decent story is ruined by horrible writing quality, inconsistencies and toxic masculinity of the author. The story is about a guy who lives around a 1000 years into the future and humanity has expanded into space, discovered the cultivation of martial arts and expanded into space. The main character, Chu Nan, somehow gets a super analytical ability that allows him to get very precise real time information about his actions and that of his opponents. He uses this ability to become stronger despite being judged to be too old. It is clear that the author barely planned the novel and as a result there is very little preparation for the next step. Add to that that it is not uncommon for some chapters to reveal things about what the mc is doing in previous chapters. For instance Chu Nan gets beaten into a coma and his body is severely injured. The chapter describing how he woke up and how he recovered his body is described over several chapters. During these chapters Chu Nan's parents are never mentioned but several chapters later you discover that he has parents, that they went to visit him when he was in a coma and when he woke up and that he even has a sister. Not only did it take the novel around 150 chapters to even mention that he has parents that are still alive but that he also has a sister (almost as if the author finally realized that Chu Nan also has a family). And there are several similar situations where the author suddenly realized that what he wrote earlier doesn't make sense and than starts to backtrack to fill in the blanks, these are signs of a badly planned storyline and the low quality reparations done to cover this up. The world building is almost as bad as the writing quality. A lot of things that in real life we know how it works are explained in a way that doesn't make sense and are based on a very simplistic view of how the world works. And it's not like they suddenly became part of fantasy and therefor it's logical they don't make sense anymore. For instance the authors understanding of muscle growth is completely wrong but doctors and athletes do know how this works and it is completely different from the explanation in the novel. When you work out you go over the limit of what your muscles can handle and you slightly tear your muscles, this is also called muscle pain and most people know this feeling well bc they experience it the day after, sometimes a few hours, after an intensive workout. The muscle pain goes away because your muscles are repairing themselves and in the proces of repairing themselves they make the muscles stronger, bigger, longer, etc. In other words muscle growth comes when you rest after overusing them. The author is working under the assumption that muscles grow by overusing them and he ignores the influence of rest. There are several similar situations where the author assumes how something works and based the story on that. I also strongly suspect that the author originally planned to write a story with a more traditional Xianxia world building but somehow decided to change his plans. Too many times is a collection of planets referred to as a country and most planets only have one or two big cities. The total population of humans from Earth is around 20 billion but that seems to me far too little given how many planets are under the control of the Earth Federation. In multiple situations I have noticed that the scales at which things happen are in conflict with each other. For instance one of the strongest martial arts techniques in the real world can produce the same kind of power that a person in the novel with a 3rd level overlord body can achieve. I know the author didn't want the difference between normal humans and overlord bodies to be too big but because the author failed to do a proper research he failed in his objective because now the people in the novel that should be stronger than people in real life aren't stronger. The story itself is neither innovative or original but it has potential to be not bad (if the writing quality was better it would have been a good story to fill your time with)
MC is trash. ...................................................................................................................................
The translation quality at certain parts are absolutely horrible and completely ruin the immersion, chapter 32 with the "Why didn't I see anyone from the earth federation in the game yesterday" part, it's supposed to say why did he only see earth federation and not any other countries instead the translator did the opposite and it confuses the hell out of me when reading, good thing I auto correct stuff when reading as I've been in the dao of mtl for over a year but it's still irritating as hell
story is good upto heaven control realm after that it gets boring as story goes on chu ran(male lead) characterization gets worst(helps all female characters he meets but there is only one female lead upto now) and boring(too saintlye.g he wont even kill the villan who trys kill his family and friends)Story development too repeated strength development is not good from heaven control realmfemale leads too messy
Don't fall for the title. MC has nothing to do with the word intelligent. He got a A.I like calculative power and only uses it for martial arts.More like he only got martial arts in his mind and doesn't care about anything else.It's even more worse than the recent system novels with cowardly MCs. And MC doesn't even progress with his cultivation.
For a mc which a super brain, he gotta be the dumbest dude around. He's always jumping into the dumbest and most dangerous situation ever without good reason. It's like he knows he got plot armor and constantly jumping into enemy strong holds.
It's not bad overall. The protagonist isn't a coward, but he is a bit stupid and useless, even with cheats. His strength seems to vary greatly and you never know if he'll stomp someone or struggle against someone, even if the cultivation level is the same. The protagonist starts out at the Overlord Body realm, which is basically just a step above complete beginner. After 160 chapters... he is still in the same realm, while his enemies for the last 130 chapters have been in a higher realm. Does this mean that he'll realize that he needs to start cultivating seriously? No, not at all. He's still spending all his time doing unimportant things. In a 160 chapters, this is basically what has happened: He got the analytical ability, he practices techniques (Doesn't cultivate), he joined a tournament and now he wants to apply to an academy and continue his school life. Yes, that's all that happened in nearly 200 chapters. That should tell you how slow this novel is.
15 Chapters in , I regret time spent . Poor character and world building , lack of basic logic in mc , who literally has some “cheat analysis system”
The authors skills are good. Its just that he is very greedy and stretches the story very long.
good concept but too much non sense repetitive way of writing just to prolong some events.. like trash talking to opponents.. enemy would repeat same words like are you ready to die.. so annoying bs
died from cringe when some random enemy said no balls to the MC and he activated a 10/20% death button just to get stronger now, and after he pushed it again I dropped it, really really cringy, cant you just wait a week and be twice stronger than him???? just why, literally 0 IQ
What a stupid protagonist. Risks his life in a tournament. Does what a kidnapper says instead of calling the police. There is a whole galaxy but he risks his life for one specific method in one specific school. Stupid moron.
Main character is so naive, and doesn’t question anything. People take advtange of him and he willingly will help people that betray/go back on their word.
So many things to pick on but this is your below average novel. Has an AI but didn't even learn other things to at least have theory on how things should be but no he focused on martial arts even though it won't take him a day to learn other things like for example how to operate machines so that he could at least help If you want an MC who actually uses his AI cheat then I suggest you read Star Ranked Hunter, one of the top tier novels, I don't know if you will be able to find it here but just search on google Star Ranked Hunter
MC is an idiot, doesn't question why people will pay a ton of money to him just for him to play a VR game despite him wanting to hide his brain AI. Just giving away his secrets for free. Dropped at chapter 124 (right after this majorly stupid move).
alright, no real surprises. bit of a Mary Sue MC as he'll make a breakthrough then next chapter have some new threat which his breakthrough happens to perfectly counter. no real issue with the writing, but the translator doesn't seem to understand the n't suffix (so the above sentence would be written: the translator does seem to understand the suffix) it's not that big of an issue, but when you have to work out what is actually written in the middle of a scene, it's very annoying. this is a problem for doesn't couldn't wouldn't shouldn't etc.
Another CHINA number 1,china is supreme,chinese race is superior novel. japan/Europe and america are nothing but slave nation. for jesus Christ chinese people move on. what happen in wwII is part of the war don't blame japan to anything bad happen in your country is not their fault that you are weak in that time. i thought you are strong with exaggerated history like "romance of the 3 kingdom" like war lord lu bu kill 50million soldier. really? 50million?
..........................nsnrjdnnsjwknfnnxnsnjskdbfnjxsns.zjfnnd Yyxih a tdigxig oh hocoufigxigxiyouvohchlckgxkgxjgxig o ychodiycoj jocohxih
Really can't figure out how such a promising plot can be screwed up so badly... I was so excited in the beginning when his cheat was revealed, and thought, worst case, it'll be a standard xianxia plot. Never could I imagine that the MC would be characterized so badly. Playing around with lolis, random fights that seem like they've been written on a whim, unnecessary conflicts because MC acts like it's beneath him to explain circumstances properly. Especially chapters 365-370, why couldn't he just show the dean how he modifies a technique by requesting one that's not in the library and doing it on the spot. Instead, the author just had to escalate this to another meaningless conflict. Sincerely request the author to improve the novel while they can. Try and take reference from the ones that succeeded with similar cheats (Warlock of the Magus World kind of novels). Just a suggestion from my part.
Spoiler de révélation It's a pretty good story overall but I dislike the fact that it's often slow paced and takes a lot of chapters before explaining information. Other than that, the development of the strenght of the character isn't really consistent or these kind of things since there is basically 100 chapters where he does random stuff around and then there's 1 chapter where he becomes 10 times stronger instantly instead of consistently improving. It's also annoying how it's mentioned every single chapter that the character will never breakthrough to the bla bla bla or he lost because they underestimated him or whatever and it becomes quite repeatitive a the end. It is still quite supportable and if you ignore that it's a pretty good novel compared to other I've read on the website.
A 100+ chapters and mc was still in 1st cultivation realm, most of the chapters was wasted because of unnecessary and repetitive information like how does body will achieve something like that, how can I control my internal breathing more freely yada yada, author focusing on word count literally destroyed this story haiist
If you read the mtl translations of this you would realize that this book is a bomber. with over seventeen thousand chapters everything is explained and the world building is extremely completed and almost everything seems like a plot hole until you read for at least another one hundred chapters. I regret finishing it in two weeks because now I'll have to find something to red that lives up to this. 10/10 would recomend
Lack of imagination leads to shallow writing quality and the author only cares about word count. The only good thing about this work is how easily it makes you sleep.
Master Of Martial Arts Has An Advanced Optical Brain is a story about Chu Nan, a completely mediocre student who decided to become below-average due to useless pride/stubbornness. Luckily, God (the author) decided to save him by giving him an "advanced optical brain". This allows him to have very high calculative skills and a the ability to process this information extremely fast. I think I am genuinely becoming sick of reading Chinese novels in general. It's very obvious that there is a very severe lack of talented authors that write xianxia/xuanhua. Translation quality is mediocre. Theres many mistakes especially at the end of chapters. (3/5 stars) Story development makes it very apparent that the author only wants word count, nothing else matters. This novel incorporates two of the most annoying writing "techniques" that you'll find in these novels. First, repeating the same information from a different point of view, often taking up an entire chapter. The second is how every time the main character does anything, we are forced to suffer and read some random reaction of some random irrelevant special-ed kid who exists solely to insult the main character. Aside from all that, this story is rather directionless. The only goal is for the main character to get to a higher-tier academy. What awful and cliche settings. We go from school arc to tournament arc to another school arc. Seriously? Character design is awful as well. I feel like it's a waste to write another long-paragraph. We have the same cliche annoying characters as every other martial arts novel. (2/5 stars) World background is also abysmal. In sixty chapters, I don't even think that the author has mentioned the main character's family aside from saying he comes from a family of farmers. Aside from that, barely anything has been properly described. We are suddenly in a school arc with the main character making many improvements, and then thrown into a drawn-out tournament arc. In sixty chapters, aside from introducing more useless and cliche characters, as well as providing a very superficial understanding of the world, we know next to nothing. Very poor attempt. (1/5 stars) Overall, it's yet another novel where the author solely cares for word count. The only positives in this novel are solely coincidences that I doubt the author meant to happen in the first place. I give this novel 2.4 stars out of 5.
is there a romance? ......................................................................................................................................
Leí esta novela hace un tiempo, tengo que decir que es muy buena, les recomiendo mucho que la lean, el protagonista tiene una buena personalidad, la construcción del mundo es muy buena, la novia también es muy buena, y la trama también es atrapante. los villanos también son muy bien construidos, y las explicaciones y ciencias ficción son muy estables. el final también es un 8/10. muy bueno.
I really hate this MC. Because of the plot armor, we see him being underestimated in every fight. And because of this, he never fight with his full strenght at the start. As soon as the MC start to loose, the plot armor kick in and the antagonist strats talking or he finally uses his brain and uses his cheat at its fullest. The MC should have been dead a long time ago.
this is one of those novels where a decent story is ruined by horrible writing quality, inconsistencies and toxic masculinity of the author. The story is about a guy who lives around a 1000 years into the future and humanity has expanded into space, discovered the cultivation of martial arts and expanded into space. The main character, Chu Nan, somehow gets a super analytical ability that allows him to get very precise real time information about his actions and that of his opponents. He uses this ability to become stronger despite being judged to be too old. It is clear that the author barely planned the novel and as a result there is very little preparation for the next step. Add to that that it is not uncommon for some chapters to reveal things about what the mc is doing in previous chapters. For instance Chu Nan gets beaten into a coma and his body is severely injured. The chapter describing how he woke up and how he recovered his body is described over several chapters. During these chapters Chu Nan's parents are never mentioned but several chapters later you discover that he has parents, that they went to visit him when he was in a coma and when he woke up and that he even has a sister. Not only did it take the novel around 150 chapters to even mention that he has parents that are still alive but that he also has a sister (almost as if the author finally realized that Chu Nan also has a family). And there are several similar situations where the author suddenly realized that what he wrote earlier doesn't make sense and than starts to backtrack to fill in the blanks, these are signs of a badly planned storyline and the low quality reparations done to cover this up. The world building is almost as bad as the writing quality. A lot of things that in real life we know how it works are explained in a way that doesn't make sense and are based on a very simplistic view of how the world works. And it's not like they suddenly became part of fantasy and therefor it's logical they don't make sense anymore. For instance the authors understanding of muscle growth is completely wrong but doctors and athletes do know how this works and it is completely different from the explanation in the novel. When you work out you go over the limit of what your muscles can handle and you slightly tear your muscles, this is also called muscle pain and most people know this feeling well bc they experience it the day after, sometimes a few hours, after an intensive workout. The muscle pain goes away because your muscles are repairing themselves and in the proces of repairing themselves they make the muscles stronger, bigger, longer, etc. In other words muscle growth comes when you rest after overusing them. The author is working under the assumption that muscles grow by overusing them and he ignores the influence of rest. There are several similar situations where the author assumes how something works and based the story on that. I also strongly suspect that the author originally planned to write a story with a more traditional Xianxia world building but somehow decided to change his plans. Too many times is a collection of planets referred to as a country and most planets only have one or two big cities. The total population of humans from Earth is around 20 billion but that seems to me far too little given how many planets are under the control of the Earth Federation. In multiple situations I have noticed that the scales at which things happen are in conflict with each other. For instance one of the strongest martial arts techniques in the real world can produce the same kind of power that a person in the novel with a 3rd level overlord body can achieve. I know the author didn't want the difference between normal humans and overlord bodies to be too big but because the author failed to do a proper research he failed in his objective because now the people in the novel that should be stronger than people in real life aren't stronger. The story itself is neither innovative or original but it has potential to be not bad (if the writing quality was better it would have been a good story to fill your time with)
MC is trash. ...................................................................................................................................
The translation quality at certain parts are absolutely horrible and completely ruin the immersion, chapter 32 with the "Why didn't I see anyone from the earth federation in the game yesterday" part, it's supposed to say why did he only see earth federation and not any other countries instead the translator did the opposite and it confuses the hell out of me when reading, good thing I auto correct stuff when reading as I've been in the dao of mtl for over a year but it's still irritating as hell