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Nice, please continued on your wonderful work. Have a great and wonderful day writer’s…..
What just happened? I was fully invested in the story and the characters journey. I loved the bleak, yet hopeful atmosphere of it. Along with the willingness to go to dark places exploring loss and despair in the face of overwhelming odds. Then BOOM the shifts from well paced to faster than light. All the build up, set up, pacing, character building etc. All of it thrown to the way side to finish the novel in like 10 chapters. With so much looked over and unexplored. Basically all three levels of The Tower are skipped over (especially the 2nd that isn't even mentioned) after so much build up and struggle getting there. Then the set up Nemesis of the first part of the novel (basically set up to be a reoccurring obstacle) disappears never mentioned. Did the MC get revenge? IDK! Same with the GOETIA System users. All for an ending that could've been great if we saw the Journey to that point. However we got to experience the first quarter then got snap shots of the rest. If I was to rate this up to chapter 247 everything would have been three stars or above, that rush to the end though soured the whole experience.
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An extremely good novel while it lasted, however for some reason the author rushed it's completion wayyyy to much, and now it's ruined for me so in my opinion it was at least 4.3 star and now bcz of the end it's 3.8 star
Was actually an amazing story. Unfortunately, the author decided to skip past the majority of the story and right to the end.
Story is going great so far but the amount of “he” is way too much. Its confusing if your trying to talk about the Mc or someone else
I really liked the idea of the story, and leveling system, but the MC was just slightly too innocent for me, for example he defeated this murderous cult member, and decided to let them live because of his morals,
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First time reading a book from this author and I have to say I was not disappointed! This Author deserves accolades for this well done work, I was sucked into an amazing story that left me craving more!!! The only dings I have are: 1) That the ending felt extremely rushed this story could've easily been 2,000+ chapters and I would've enjoyed every single one. AND 2) The Prologue could have been more fleshed out. I mean even the after story could've been it's own Novel tbh.
i have read the whole thing and it is awsome although in the first bit he is quite stupid but the rest is awesome i just wish there was an alternative ending where all is same as now but he can chose certain people who will remember armageddon and how he saved everyone
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Truly a Great Webnovel, although it can be extremely heartbreaking what happens to the MC's fellow Friends. Despite all that if you push through, you will be kinda rewarded.
Delz I love this book and I hope you can animate this! All in all, besides some confusion in the later chapters (won't say where)wonderful!
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
The novel has a really interesting premise good character and the development seems to be going in a good direction but it just starts of slow. The title and synopsis give false expectations to what the novel starts off with making it kind of boring if it’s what you’r expecting
ust read this beauty and I have to admit it’s prett frickin good. I also checked out his othe book and man it’s the best thing in the app right now
Great story so far, only complaint is main characters perspective is written as “he” and it gets very confusing in fights and conversations to understand who is doing/saying what. As of chapter 86 into it
**SPOILER ALERT*** great book, has a great story but unfortunately is not one of my taste. As every good story the MC is a dumb and weak person in the beginning but then he turns hella smart and god like power, just kidding, Mc stays dumb as in the beginning he learn a lot with traumatic experiences but still fall for the same things he did before and he is still weak maybe a little bit stronger then ordinary players. The system doesn't make much sense him being an assassin that can't kill lol, funny think cause the class was chosen the ones best for the person, then he gets his own system that is the sage system 🤔, I thought the MC was an assassin, if you think this math doesn't add up don't hurry cause the MC has a sub class😎 a martial fighter 🤔 taekwondo at that, yeah I don't get it too. Story doesn't go to fast and don't go too slow it's pretty well paced except for the MC that is still lvl 20 when monsters began to appear. As I said this is a pretty good book but I couldn't put my attention on, when you read it or you gonna like it and it's gonna be one of the best stories you ever read or you not gonna like it and stop at 50% of the book.
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aight im on chapter 22 rn and uhhh just asking the name of the novel has 'Dual System' so far, from what I've seen he has only one :/ just asking
very well fleshed out story building and characters. the main character goes from weak hikkikimori gamer to godlike multi class fighter. speaking of god- the god of this world declared all mankind a failure and grants them apocalypse to clean up his mess. Tossing in rejects from other worlds to help with the slaughter and maybe refine out a few jems. he gives out an angel system to provide level-ups and a class or two. Our hero throws away his antisocial behavior to team up with and make some dear friends and increase in power. only to lose them all horrificly to a group of demon worshipers who got a demons system. This finally allows him to break free of the angel system, develop his own powerful system--and actually kill people. New friends are made but God doesn't think they are challenged enough so more powerful angels are sent to kill more of them. As his power and resentment grows it looks like someday he will rise up and kill the god that turned his back on them.
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So far it’s a cool story but it does not make any sense to me. God shows up and says that humans are too sinful and deserve to be destroyed, so first point that confuses me is that not everyone is sinful and he’s punishing even the innocent ones which doesn’t seem very benevolent to me like he claims. And second he does not punish the behavior that he claims is why humanity is a failure. As long as you get strong enough you can do whatever you want, which makes the story confusing, silly, and annoying. Regardless I’m very interested in reading it, I just wish the reasonings were different
Time of writting review: 130 chapters in. 1. Writing quality: Thus far, I havnt noticed any jarring errors. Author has a good sense of grammer, and the way he writes is very descriptive. I can truely picture whats happening in the moment when I read. 2. Story development: I feel like the story isn't moving too fast or too slow. We have time to grow attached to characters, and the state of the world. Yet the story continues forward bringing change, not growing stale. 3. Character design: Alot of the characters feel unique in their own way, whether its personality or powers. The MC is not static, he develops his personality at a good pace and grows. (unlike a certain novel I dropped where the Mc is still hyper innocent and niave 700 chapters in... yeah that got old lol). 4. Updating stability: No complaints here, so far author releases a good 1-2 chapters a day which is pretty impressive. 5: World background: I just wanna say, wow! I have read alot of novels, and can't quite recall a premise like this. I am very fond of the lore/background that has been built up, and can't wait to see the secrets that the mc unveils late in the story. (Sure there are *some* elements in the story that have been introduced in other novels, but this is a refreshing blend) Definitely a very unique system novel. I would recommend you read this, as it is criminally under rated.
As I’m writing this morning have only made through 6 chapters. I’m really trying to stick with it, but the MC seems soo bipolar that I’m having a hard time getting past it. The system tells him how to equip his class and weapons, but he chooses to pick up a brick to throw at the monster….. The story starts with him playing a game, trying to show he is a seasoned gamer, even had his loot stolen because he was too slow, and then when he defeats a monster and loot drops he asked the system what good is this loot? You just killed your first monster!! Loot is loot! Oh and then 2 months later his chatting with his system, trying to show us he is pro at this now The system calls him “master” and he asks the system to show him his status… “Yo system show me my status pronto…” Okay cool thanks for showing that he is a pro now, then the next moment he is fighting a monster, he sees the monster is getting closer but doesn’t move like his class “Assasin” Instead he decides to stand and hold out his arms and cast a shield spell… his “Mana” or energy is being drained, the system continuously asks if he should use his ability but he refuses saying his got this, he will do it on his own… But he just stands there until his Mana is depleted….didn’t even doge or try to circle it. Just remained there with his blue scarf fluttering in the wind…but luckily when his shield was dispelled die to lack of Mana a young heroin comes and saves him and the leaves. The MC is then there calling out her name like he knows her, just watch me so and so I shall prove to you that I am going to be someone. You don’t know her, she doesn’t know you, she didn’t insult you, she saved your life… it wasn’t like you had a fighting chance… you were going to commit suicide refusing to listen to your system that calls you Master… I can’t tell if he is mentally unstable or just mental…
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I am still in volume one (chapter 35) and I don't like the main character's actions. I understand his reason for saving people. I just hope he doesn't save and involve himself in everyone's problems. Other than that, he's pretty relaxed, relatable, and nice. I also love the first two side characters and the fighting scenes. Very descriptive and easy to imagine. One question will there be one female lead or harem?
Ukraine : "Vladimir- Kun please be gentle ". Vladimir-kun : "sorry Ukraine-chan ,I can't hold back anymore" . *squirts the entire 2nd Guards Motor Rifle Division into Kyev *
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Everything about this novel is pretty great. I’d have to say it’ s a top tier novel including great grammer and everything else you could want. If this does not win 1st place, something is rigged
Just read this beauty and I have to admit it’s prett frickin good. I also checked out his othe book and man it’s the best thing in the app right now
Everything is great so far . Plus it’s a harem, what more do I have to say. Even more the girls actually have a personality which is rare among this genre
The cover is really good. The writing quality is also directly on point. The mc seemed so relatable, man. Life's actually boring. When the God mentioned being failure, I was like what if something like this happens with me one day? It was like a umm, lesson I would say.
My boy delz dropping another absolute banger. This made me as rock hard as his last novel. Hopefully he continues to write these for the rest of his life so I never run out of material. 10/10 would read again.
I think that the book is really good. It has a nice pace and I enjoyed reading it. .................................................................................................................................
When I saw Delz released a new novel, I already knew what to expect. Starting off, the pacing is perfect(not to slow or not to fast, it is right in the middle), and the grammar is A1. Reading novels with choppy grammar is horrible, and really ruins the reading process( for me at least), so reading a novel with great grammar is super refreshing. The characters, systems/powers, and enemies are very engaging early on. When you finish reading this, I recom mend you readers to check out Garden of the Abyss, another one of Delz’s novels. Be warned readers, only read Gareden of the Abyss if you enjoy peak fiction;). All in all I’m ready to see the the future of AOANN!
Nice, please continued on your wonderful work. Have a great and wonderful day writer’s…..
What just happened? I was fully invested in the story and the characters journey. I loved the bleak, yet hopeful atmosphere of it. Along with the willingness to go to dark places exploring loss and despair in the face of overwhelming odds. Then BOOM the shifts from well paced to faster than light. All the build up, set up, pacing, character building etc. All of it thrown to the way side to finish the novel in like 10 chapters. With so much looked over and unexplored. Basically all three levels of The Tower are skipped over (especially the 2nd that isn't even mentioned) after so much build up and struggle getting there. Then the set up Nemesis of the first part of the novel (basically set up to be a reoccurring obstacle) disappears never mentioned. Did the MC get revenge? IDK! Same with the GOETIA System users. All for an ending that could've been great if we saw the Journey to that point. However we got to experience the first quarter then got snap shots of the rest. If I was to rate this up to chapter 247 everything would have been three stars or above, that rush to the end though soured the whole experience.
Spoiler de révélation An extremely good novel while it lasted, however for some reason the author rushed it's completion wayyyy to much, and now it's ruined for me so in my opinion it was at least 4.3 star and now bcz of the end it's 3.8 star
Was actually an amazing story. Unfortunately, the author decided to skip past the majority of the story and right to the end.
Story is going great so far but the amount of “he” is way too much. Its confusing if your trying to talk about the Mc or someone else
I really liked the idea of the story, and leveling system, but the MC was just slightly too innocent for me, for example he defeated this murderous cult member, and decided to let them live because of his morals,
Spoiler de révélation First time reading a book from this author and I have to say I was not disappointed! This Author deserves accolades for this well done work, I was sucked into an amazing story that left me craving more!!! The only dings I have are: 1) That the ending felt extremely rushed this story could've easily been 2,000+ chapters and I would've enjoyed every single one. AND 2) The Prologue could have been more fleshed out. I mean even the after story could've been it's own Novel tbh.
i have read the whole thing and it is awsome although in the first bit he is quite stupid but the rest is awesome i just wish there was an alternative ending where all is same as now but he can chose certain people who will remember armageddon and how he saved everyone
Spoiler de révélation Truly a Great Webnovel, although it can be extremely heartbreaking what happens to the MC's fellow Friends. Despite all that if you push through, you will be kinda rewarded.
Delz I love this book and I hope you can animate this! All in all, besides some confusion in the later chapters (won't say where)wonderful!
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
The novel has a really interesting premise good character and the development seems to be going in a good direction but it just starts of slow. The title and synopsis give false expectations to what the novel starts off with making it kind of boring if it’s what you’r expecting
ust read this beauty and I have to admit it’s prett frickin good. I also checked out his othe book and man it’s the best thing in the app right now
Great story so far, only complaint is main characters perspective is written as “he” and it gets very confusing in fights and conversations to understand who is doing/saying what. As of chapter 86 into it
**SPOILER ALERT*** great book, has a great story but unfortunately is not one of my taste. As every good story the MC is a dumb and weak person in the beginning but then he turns hella smart and god like power, just kidding, Mc stays dumb as in the beginning he learn a lot with traumatic experiences but still fall for the same things he did before and he is still weak maybe a little bit stronger then ordinary players. The system doesn't make much sense him being an assassin that can't kill lol, funny think cause the class was chosen the ones best for the person, then he gets his own system that is the sage system 🤔, I thought the MC was an assassin, if you think this math doesn't add up don't hurry cause the MC has a sub class😎 a martial fighter 🤔 taekwondo at that, yeah I don't get it too. Story doesn't go to fast and don't go too slow it's pretty well paced except for the MC that is still lvl 20 when monsters began to appear. As I said this is a pretty good book but I couldn't put my attention on, when you read it or you gonna like it and it's gonna be one of the best stories you ever read or you not gonna like it and stop at 50% of the book.
Spoiler de révélation aight im on chapter 22 rn and uhhh just asking the name of the novel has 'Dual System' so far, from what I've seen he has only one :/ just asking
very well fleshed out story building and characters. the main character goes from weak hikkikimori gamer to godlike multi class fighter. speaking of god- the god of this world declared all mankind a failure and grants them apocalypse to clean up his mess. Tossing in rejects from other worlds to help with the slaughter and maybe refine out a few jems. he gives out an angel system to provide level-ups and a class or two. Our hero throws away his antisocial behavior to team up with and make some dear friends and increase in power. only to lose them all horrificly to a group of demon worshipers who got a demons system. This finally allows him to break free of the angel system, develop his own powerful system--and actually kill people. New friends are made but God doesn't think they are challenged enough so more powerful angels are sent to kill more of them. As his power and resentment grows it looks like someday he will rise up and kill the god that turned his back on them.
Spoiler de révélation So far it’s a cool story but it does not make any sense to me. God shows up and says that humans are too sinful and deserve to be destroyed, so first point that confuses me is that not everyone is sinful and he’s punishing even the innocent ones which doesn’t seem very benevolent to me like he claims. And second he does not punish the behavior that he claims is why humanity is a failure. As long as you get strong enough you can do whatever you want, which makes the story confusing, silly, and annoying. Regardless I’m very interested in reading it, I just wish the reasonings were different
Time of writting review: 130 chapters in. 1. Writing quality: Thus far, I havnt noticed any jarring errors. Author has a good sense of grammer, and the way he writes is very descriptive. I can truely picture whats happening in the moment when I read. 2. Story development: I feel like the story isn't moving too fast or too slow. We have time to grow attached to characters, and the state of the world. Yet the story continues forward bringing change, not growing stale. 3. Character design: Alot of the characters feel unique in their own way, whether its personality or powers. The MC is not static, he develops his personality at a good pace and grows. (unlike a certain novel I dropped where the Mc is still hyper innocent and niave 700 chapters in... yeah that got old lol). 4. Updating stability: No complaints here, so far author releases a good 1-2 chapters a day which is pretty impressive. 5: World background: I just wanna say, wow! I have read alot of novels, and can't quite recall a premise like this. I am very fond of the lore/background that has been built up, and can't wait to see the secrets that the mc unveils late in the story. (Sure there are *some* elements in the story that have been introduced in other novels, but this is a refreshing blend) Definitely a very unique system novel. I would recommend you read this, as it is criminally under rated.
As I’m writing this morning have only made through 6 chapters. I’m really trying to stick with it, but the MC seems soo bipolar that I’m having a hard time getting past it. The system tells him how to equip his class and weapons, but he chooses to pick up a brick to throw at the monster….. The story starts with him playing a game, trying to show he is a seasoned gamer, even had his loot stolen because he was too slow, and then when he defeats a monster and loot drops he asked the system what good is this loot? You just killed your first monster!! Loot is loot! Oh and then 2 months later his chatting with his system, trying to show us he is pro at this now The system calls him “master” and he asks the system to show him his status… “Yo system show me my status pronto…” Okay cool thanks for showing that he is a pro now, then the next moment he is fighting a monster, he sees the monster is getting closer but doesn’t move like his class “Assasin” Instead he decides to stand and hold out his arms and cast a shield spell… his “Mana” or energy is being drained, the system continuously asks if he should use his ability but he refuses saying his got this, he will do it on his own… But he just stands there until his Mana is depleted….didn’t even doge or try to circle it. Just remained there with his blue scarf fluttering in the wind…but luckily when his shield was dispelled die to lack of Mana a young heroin comes and saves him and the leaves. The MC is then there calling out her name like he knows her, just watch me so and so I shall prove to you that I am going to be someone. You don’t know her, she doesn’t know you, she didn’t insult you, she saved your life… it wasn’t like you had a fighting chance… you were going to commit suicide refusing to listen to your system that calls you Master… I can’t tell if he is mentally unstable or just mental…
Spoiler de révélation I am still in volume one (chapter 35) and I don't like the main character's actions. I understand his reason for saving people. I just hope he doesn't save and involve himself in everyone's problems. Other than that, he's pretty relaxed, relatable, and nice. I also love the first two side characters and the fighting scenes. Very descriptive and easy to imagine. One question will there be one female lead or harem?
Ukraine : "Vladimir- Kun please be gentle ". Vladimir-kun : "sorry Ukraine-chan ,I can't hold back anymore" . *squirts the entire 2nd Guards Motor Rifle Division into Kyev *
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Everything about this novel is pretty great. I’d have to say it’ s a top tier novel including great grammer and everything else you could want. If this does not win 1st place, something is rigged
Just read this beauty and I have to admit it’s prett frickin good. I also checked out his othe book and man it’s the best thing in the app right now
Everything is great so far . Plus it’s a harem, what more do I have to say. Even more the girls actually have a personality which is rare among this genre
The cover is really good. The writing quality is also directly on point. The mc seemed so relatable, man. Life's actually boring. When the God mentioned being failure, I was like what if something like this happens with me one day? It was like a umm, lesson I would say.
My boy delz dropping another absolute banger. This made me as rock hard as his last novel. Hopefully he continues to write these for the rest of his life so I never run out of material. 10/10 would read again.
I think that the book is really good. It has a nice pace and I enjoyed reading it. .................................................................................................................................
When I saw Delz released a new novel, I already knew what to expect. Starting off, the pacing is perfect(not to slow or not to fast, it is right in the middle), and the grammar is A1. Reading novels with choppy grammar is horrible, and really ruins the reading process( for me at least), so reading a novel with great grammar is super refreshing. The characters, systems/powers, and enemies are very engaging early on. When you finish reading this, I recom mend you readers to check out Garden of the Abyss, another one of Delz’s novels. Be warned readers, only read Gareden of the Abyss if you enjoy peak fiction;). All in all I’m ready to see the the future of AOANN!