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Not going to lie I love a great mafia romance book <3 Your writing is similar to my own, you reveal the characters and the world slowly adding piece by piece rather than at once. You have me hooked on the first chapter!
A really great mafia story especially, But the writing quality of the author on this story is more than top notch. Great job author
first of all I'll give 5 stars 🤝 secondly I need to download a dictionary and thirdly the selection of words is excellent.The title of the story 👍 the storyline 🙌 and the words selection 💯🤝. This deserves so many collections.... best of luck 😩🦋❤
t’s been long time since I read mafia romance novel. So far, I loved Lai’s character. I like how you describe the story. No complaints till now. I would love to keep reading. Already in my collection.
I've read 4 chapters and I'm conflicted. It's excellent writing, but, I'm confused on the heavy emphasis on Lai. It seems like the man at the beginning was the mafia ceo? That doesn't detract any high marks though. I'm just wondering why the the quick intro.
This work is artistic and compels the reader to finish it. Well written the only issue I had was the switching of the point of views of the characters, but it was done clearly enough. Mysterious too, a total delight readers will definitely consume this! :)
The level of writing in this book is simply excellent, demonstrating the author's mastery of language and storytelling. Every sentence is elegant and beautifully crafted, painting vivid pictures of the characters and their world. But it's not just the quality of the writing that makes this novel so engaging. The story flows so naturally that I found myself unable to put it down. The plot is well-paced and expertly constructed, with just the right amount of tension and suspense to keep me on the edge of my seat.
Nothing except excellent writing, descriptions, and anything else comes to mind. I believe that it well-written and has the power to captivate readers. It felt like reading a scene from a movie because of all the time and location changes, and I find that to be confusing. The first chapter does a fantastic job of establishing the type of story I would anticipate given the summary.
I love the pacing of the story, fluid and descriptive. Even if it is a slow burn romance, I like how the characters are designed. We can see through the plot, their struggles and unique features. The author made a great work on detailing her characters. It is a very addicting story! [img=recommend]
Kinda searching for a good Mafia story for a long time and I feel I finally found it in this book. The MC, Lai, is a strong, self-driven and optimistic young lady despite the condition of her family. I like how the author can convoy this to the reader in just first 3 chapters! This gonna be a hella (and fun) of a ride!
I love Mafia stories and this author did a wonderful job with this popular genre. The grammar is perfection and the story has an amazing flow. I'm honestly not a big of fan of slow-burns but the author nicely makes sure there's no space for boredom while reading this. Keep up the good work!! [img=recommend]
I love how the main points required to imagine the scene are well written. It's easy to get into the character's emotions and feel what they feel. I'm looking forward to where the story goes. Apart from minor sentences that could have been written better, its perfect!
Mafia... intriguing.... So, here is a story that will keep you on your feet, I know because It kept mine. I love it.... Keep it coming author. 🥰🥰🥰
Wow the FMC seems so kind and cool, saving the MC and giving first aid without wasting any time. Can't wait how the romance between them is going to develop. I am looking forward for more updates :D
I am very excited to read what happens next here! I love all of the characters so far and I hope Wen finds someone who will be good for her! 😆
Love it! Great romance and amazing story so far! .................................................................................. ..........
Definitely worth reading whether if you like CEO Romance stuff or Another Romance – this one in fact has a good start. Hopes to the rise of every good aspect in the next chapters!
I love your novel, very well written and the story is interesting! .................................................................... .................
Mafia CEO's treasure? Tell me, could there be a better catching title? Beautiful and attractive, that really did catch my attention, and then, I wanted more... Each chapter with new adventures to go, this is a yes for me!
I have to admit I am a sucker for a mafia story. I love this one . It has really good clear descriptions of the characters and of the events. For example, the rolling of the eyes at her mothers comments. I have added it to my library and looking forward to updates.
Really enjoying this story so far! Not much to complain about the writing, I love the way the author writes. The FL is so sweet and lovable! Mr CEO is a bit more mysterious for now but I guess we will find out soon more about him! I’m looking forward to reading more of this cool story! And seeing what romance might develop between them hehehehe
The novel is well written. Descriptions of characters and settings are really good. With 4 chapters written at the time of writing(? I may have miscounted) the story isn't too far along but is developing well. I'd recommend to anyone interested.
I would definitely recommend this novel if you enjoy this type of genre. the author gives you an in-depth description on what's happening in the world and scene. I'll change my score when there's more things to go off of. anyway your definitely off on a great start.
Aah took me quite a handy time to come up with a review... I love romance novels, and this one is really going to be one of my favorites! The author have its way to express the emotion and the description just makes it even more better, loveable characters...I feel like I can really connect to it. Overall really really amazing work, hope to see more chapters! keep doin' what you do because you are so awesome at it.
Not going to lie I love a great mafia romance book <3 Your writing is similar to my own, you reveal the characters and the world slowly adding piece by piece rather than at once. You have me hooked on the first chapter!
A really great mafia story especially, But the writing quality of the author on this story is more than top notch. Great job author
first of all I'll give 5 stars 🤝 secondly I need to download a dictionary and thirdly the selection of words is excellent.The title of the story 👍 the storyline 🙌 and the words selection 💯🤝. This deserves so many collections.... best of luck 😩🦋❤
t’s been long time since I read mafia romance novel. So far, I loved Lai’s character. I like how you describe the story. No complaints till now. I would love to keep reading. Already in my collection.
I've read 4 chapters and I'm conflicted. It's excellent writing, but, I'm confused on the heavy emphasis on Lai. It seems like the man at the beginning was the mafia ceo? That doesn't detract any high marks though. I'm just wondering why the the quick intro.
This work is artistic and compels the reader to finish it. Well written the only issue I had was the switching of the point of views of the characters, but it was done clearly enough. Mysterious too, a total delight readers will definitely consume this! :)
The level of writing in this book is simply excellent, demonstrating the author's mastery of language and storytelling. Every sentence is elegant and beautifully crafted, painting vivid pictures of the characters and their world. But it's not just the quality of the writing that makes this novel so engaging. The story flows so naturally that I found myself unable to put it down. The plot is well-paced and expertly constructed, with just the right amount of tension and suspense to keep me on the edge of my seat.
Nothing except excellent writing, descriptions, and anything else comes to mind. I believe that it well-written and has the power to captivate readers. It felt like reading a scene from a movie because of all the time and location changes, and I find that to be confusing. The first chapter does a fantastic job of establishing the type of story I would anticipate given the summary.
I love the pacing of the story, fluid and descriptive. Even if it is a slow burn romance, I like how the characters are designed. We can see through the plot, their struggles and unique features. The author made a great work on detailing her characters. It is a very addicting story! [img=recommend]
Kinda searching for a good Mafia story for a long time and I feel I finally found it in this book. The MC, Lai, is a strong, self-driven and optimistic young lady despite the condition of her family. I like how the author can convoy this to the reader in just first 3 chapters! This gonna be a hella (and fun) of a ride!
I love Mafia stories and this author did a wonderful job with this popular genre. The grammar is perfection and the story has an amazing flow. I'm honestly not a big of fan of slow-burns but the author nicely makes sure there's no space for boredom while reading this. Keep up the good work!! [img=recommend]
I love how the main points required to imagine the scene are well written. It's easy to get into the character's emotions and feel what they feel. I'm looking forward to where the story goes. Apart from minor sentences that could have been written better, its perfect!
Mafia... intriguing.... So, here is a story that will keep you on your feet, I know because It kept mine. I love it.... Keep it coming author. 🥰🥰🥰
Wow the FMC seems so kind and cool, saving the MC and giving first aid without wasting any time. Can't wait how the romance between them is going to develop. I am looking forward for more updates :D
I am very excited to read what happens next here! I love all of the characters so far and I hope Wen finds someone who will be good for her! 😆
Love it! Great romance and amazing story so far! .................................................................................. ..........
Definitely worth reading whether if you like CEO Romance stuff or Another Romance – this one in fact has a good start. Hopes to the rise of every good aspect in the next chapters!
I love your novel, very well written and the story is interesting! .................................................................... .................
Mafia CEO's treasure? Tell me, could there be a better catching title? Beautiful and attractive, that really did catch my attention, and then, I wanted more... Each chapter with new adventures to go, this is a yes for me!
I have to admit I am a sucker for a mafia story. I love this one . It has really good clear descriptions of the characters and of the events. For example, the rolling of the eyes at her mothers comments. I have added it to my library and looking forward to updates.
Really enjoying this story so far! Not much to complain about the writing, I love the way the author writes. The FL is so sweet and lovable! Mr CEO is a bit more mysterious for now but I guess we will find out soon more about him! I’m looking forward to reading more of this cool story! And seeing what romance might develop between them hehehehe
The novel is well written. Descriptions of characters and settings are really good. With 4 chapters written at the time of writing(? I may have miscounted) the story isn't too far along but is developing well. I'd recommend to anyone interested.
I would definitely recommend this novel if you enjoy this type of genre. the author gives you an in-depth description on what's happening in the world and scene. I'll change my score when there's more things to go off of. anyway your definitely off on a great start.
Aah took me quite a handy time to come up with a review... I love romance novels, and this one is really going to be one of my favorites! The author have its way to express the emotion and the description just makes it even more better, loveable characters...I feel like I can really connect to it. Overall really really amazing work, hope to see more chapters! keep doin' what you do because you are so awesome at it.