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Only one but big problem: Too much detail ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
dude there are 2 people with the same names, so it's kind of confusing what this author is doing.... , focused more on the female character than the male. if you want to read it's good and bad, if you like female protagonist it's all yours
This is pretty fire Author-kun, keep up the good work bro. I enjoy the many references in your novel, not to mention, the grammar and dialogue are both well written.
Love the fic, the grammar is awesome and the MC is not an idiot, keep it up author!
It’s really fun to read if you want something to read I would definitely recommend this.
The story is interesting, although the fact of not describing the protagonist's face is strange, I suppose that only makes it more unique......
a bunch of nonsense floating in a ton of water ... the chapters are big, yes, but remove the water and this nonsense will fit in 1-2 chapters ..
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I like the story so far. review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review
Great so far, really hope this story continues :) ..................................................................------------------------------------------------------------------
SPOILERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Spoiler de révélation Only one but big problem: Too much detail ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
dude there are 2 people with the same names, so it's kind of confusing what this author is doing.... , focused more on the female character than the male. if you want to read it's good and bad, if you like female protagonist it's all yours
This is pretty fire Author-kun, keep up the good work bro. I enjoy the many references in your novel, not to mention, the grammar and dialogue are both well written.
Love the fic, the grammar is awesome and the MC is not an idiot, keep it up author!
It’s really fun to read if you want something to read I would definitely recommend this.
The story is interesting, although the fact of not describing the protagonist's face is strange, I suppose that only makes it more unique......
a bunch of nonsense floating in a ton of water ... the chapters are big, yes, but remove the water and this nonsense will fit in 1-2 chapters ..
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I like the story so far. review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review review
Great so far, really hope this story continues :) ..................................................................------------------------------------------------------------------
SPOILERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Spoiler de révélation