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This is amazing. Hope you can update more and hopefully he has a relationship/good relationship with his mother, Kaguya.
I'm loving this author, I'm a fan of you're novels. So fed up with goody mc's, was looking for something dark. Hope you update in bulk author.
I mean... How do I say this. The writing is very childish. That's about the best way to describe it. The system is there just for there to be a system, it isn't well developed or explained. The english could use improvement. The mc's motivations don't make sense considering he knows the future. The author wants the mc to be both a good guy and a bad guy. It doesn't get enough updates either.
This is amazing. Hope you can update more and hopefully he has a relationship/good relationship with his mother, Kaguya.
I'm loving this author, I'm a fan of you're novels. So fed up with goody mc's, was looking for something dark. Hope you update in bulk author.
I mean... How do I say this. The writing is very childish. That's about the best way to describe it. The system is there just for there to be a system, it isn't well developed or explained. The english could use improvement. The mc's motivations don't make sense considering he knows the future. The author wants the mc to be both a good guy and a bad guy. It doesn't get enough updates either.