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The grammer in this novel is really good and i understand everything happening really well. The mc is very interesting and we as a reader are seeing him grow from being a simp. The lore and world building is unique and leaves you with many mysteries
I must say I really like the story development. I think the mc is not inherently evil, the way he was raised is evil, not experiencing the love of his parents and no friends. If he was rescued before all that he won't be thinking the way he is now but yeah the world is truly broken...actually there's no evil and good. Bruh I'm allergic to pure goodness without anything in exchange lol, that's absurd. I like how the mc is evil hehehehe. Although, can i just ask if the romance is already cut off from him or there will be another? how will this end I'm excited to find out
Read this a while ago and decided to reread, only now realizing how much of what I remembered was just nostalgia. It’s not necessarily terrible, but a lot of the plot doesn’t make much sense, the mc is just edgy to the point it hurts, and the authors other novel is (imo) much better in basically every way. Only reason I might see myself attempting to finish this again is because I remember this guy shows up in the other novel.
Bro if you're reading this then PLEASE for the love of god STOP using lol and learn the proper usage of has and have , I'm still giving it a rating of four stars cause i guess i like the premise of the novel but please improve the writing quality cause I'm trying to ignore it for now hoping that it improves in the latter chapters.
Thanks for history. Very interesting. No, well, actually, this is what I wanted to see. I recommend it to everyone. I liked this story so much, it's a shame that it ended, but for the sake of it, I even wrote my first review.
Pretty good 8/10 i have read all 150 chapters and they are good its not the best novel but good one to read at your spare time. Other than that starsuper is kinda stupid he could have used better tech and united earth to create better world but didnt and just let humans do what ever they wanted
The author is cringe but this story was well made. I like this more than 'I will kill the author' because mc feels more realistic for some reason which is kinda weird considering he is a psycopath and stuff (I guess the dumb song chap 1 he did left me the wrong way about it). Overall though this was entertaining.
Very satisfying villain story with great buildup. But romance is lacking despite the tag with it. Well, it really is great knowing its's the authors's 1st work. But it really was fun reading it.[img=recommend]
I like this nove a lot but i don’t like that Sam didn’t made move on Kiara after all i don’t feel that anything happened at all regarding they relationship, he just choose some random Russian girls to sleep with and she just standing there why ? i should be her place !!, if you to go with route “she still love starboy so he late her be and didn’t force her” then why She didn’t ‘play’ with starboy after 300 years ? wired her behavior was very wired, she is basically dead in my eyes, Don’t get me wrong I like the fact that she is alive but if this all then she will be better in dead condition maybe you planing to use her in other novel
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It’s a decent novel for a beginner. Novel is too rushed and the ending is absolute garbage, but this can also be attributed to the writer wanting to wrap this novel as fast as possible and wanting to focus on his main book.
This is the most insane Novel I read in my life. Its literally perfect and the story progression is smooth and unlike most novel nothing is forced out in this novel. Its a bit dramatic to be exact like a movie, but that much is to be expected from any novel we come across nowadays. Overall it was my 3rd novel that I ever read completely, and I can say for sure its the best one I have come across as of yet. There are stories that overexaggerate the plot with more an more difficulties, but this novel stayed true to the plot until the end and I am glad to say it was the best novel I read as of this day. Not even his "I will kill the author" comes close to this masterpiece. But if you start with a biased heart then please don't comment trash because of national distinctions.
Finally, I finished it. Ok, so here's my review. I come here to read this novel because I like This author's other novel, "I will kill the Author" a lot and I heard that this novel's Protagonist is the main villain of that novel. But you know it's totally worth my time. He ll, Only last chap is enough to make it worth it. It will definitely be in my top 10 novel list. In the first 20 chap, MC is simple, and in Starting chapters Author uses the lol word in conservation a lot but after that, he gets better and the Author stops using lol. After the first few chaps the story, writing, and grammar will get better and better. Although the last few chaps namely 120 to 135 are a bit boring and confusing. But the Author improves a lot as the story goes on and stops giving those cringe names... At least He tried. Definitely one of the top authors on this App. You can tell how much I like it from I complete this in 2 days... 2 nights to be more accurate. But I have a Que here to Author. [Spoiler] Why didn't StarSuper destroy That Dragon fossil?? They have two things to protect, Fossil and a life branch. He can't destroy the latter for obvious reasons but if he destroyed the fossils he could focus solely on defending that live branch and stop Sam from another power-up and might be able to defeat him. Don't tell me he couldn't become for god's sake he can destroy a moon and there are some abilities that can literally reduce those fossils to atoms. Wow, I usually don't like writing reviews but I couldn't stop myself from writing this. Good job. 😉😉
hello, After reading the whole novel I want to ask something from the author. Is he really going to die in your other novel. Please can you tell me this.
“Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way when you criticize them, you are a mile away from them and you have their shoes.”
somethings rising and its not the shield hero as it is a Lol'ling simping little boy made by crawler. Also I got a better first novel than you! I finnaly won crawler"
A work of art indeed, it would be extremely interesting if there where some slice of life side stories to go along or something else not that the story has ended.
So, my one of the favourite Webnovel is finished. I really like this journey. I hope you will make a side stories as fan request to you. I reall love this novel.
It really give the feel of being villan , and it's really cool and exciting. The monologue of villan and his talks of taking wold is awesome too.
story is fantastic and the way it develops , I am quite bored of normal novels , this one is really exciting and mc is really good later on in the story
please stop saying lol when they talk. They're not texting its real life. at least do haha. that makes it so much better already.
Honestly I wish dis story was a lot longer but sadly this story will be coming to a end soon.the only problem I have with villain’s rising is the fact the plot wasn’t more detailed and honestly this seems a bit too rushed if u would to put I would say a good 3 yrs into this book it would be one of the best Webnovels on the platform
I originally found this on noveltop. I won't lie, I don't usually enjoy comedy... Not to mention I am extremely picky with the stories I choose to read. But this is one of the few times where I can safely say that I enjoy everything about this story, and I am extremely desperate for more.
Gotta say this story has really grown on me. Im pretty picky when it comes to villian mcs for sometimes its either complete psycopath or semi villian soy who doesn't really act as a villian or the "good" guys are worse to make the supposed villian mc justified. In this story the mc knows what he is doing and isn't ashamed of it. I would also recomend readers to read at chapter 25 to see if you want to continue to read or drop.
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Nice premise, reading about a villain definitely has tons of potential, but this isn't a villain, it's just an edgy powertrip fantasy. Also, "lol" has no place in a novel, especially not if ou want it taken seriously. The world background is good, the little we know of it anyways, seems like other planets are populated, and the whole hero vs villain dynamic has a lot of potential, as it always has. I'll be stopping here however, no point reading more when i already think the MC is pathetic, not because of his killing or his god complex, but because of how he talks, how he acts and many other things.
this novel is good and interesting you should read it once the author has not updated for many days I am afraid he dropped this book this novel are not like those thrash villan novels from other authors
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For a second there I forgot I'm a shameless author and it's my duty to review my book with a 5 star... *Ahem* Anyway, this will be a qna review so, ask your queries away dear readers.
The grammer in this novel is really good and i understand everything happening really well. The mc is very interesting and we as a reader are seeing him grow from being a simp. The lore and world building is unique and leaves you with many mysteries
I must say I really like the story development. I think the mc is not inherently evil, the way he was raised is evil, not experiencing the love of his parents and no friends. If he was rescued before all that he won't be thinking the way he is now but yeah the world is truly broken...actually there's no evil and good. Bruh I'm allergic to pure goodness without anything in exchange lol, that's absurd. I like how the mc is evil hehehehe. Although, can i just ask if the romance is already cut off from him or there will be another? how will this end I'm excited to find out
Read this a while ago and decided to reread, only now realizing how much of what I remembered was just nostalgia. It’s not necessarily terrible, but a lot of the plot doesn’t make much sense, the mc is just edgy to the point it hurts, and the authors other novel is (imo) much better in basically every way. Only reason I might see myself attempting to finish this again is because I remember this guy shows up in the other novel.
Bro if you're reading this then PLEASE for the love of god STOP using lol and learn the proper usage of has and have , I'm still giving it a rating of four stars cause i guess i like the premise of the novel but please improve the writing quality cause I'm trying to ignore it for now hoping that it improves in the latter chapters.
Thanks for history. Very interesting. No, well, actually, this is what I wanted to see. I recommend it to everyone. I liked this story so much, it's a shame that it ended, but for the sake of it, I even wrote my first review.
Pretty good 8/10 i have read all 150 chapters and they are good its not the best novel but good one to read at your spare time. Other than that starsuper is kinda stupid he could have used better tech and united earth to create better world but didnt and just let humans do what ever they wanted
The author is cringe but this story was well made. I like this more than 'I will kill the author' because mc feels more realistic for some reason which is kinda weird considering he is a psycopath and stuff (I guess the dumb song chap 1 he did left me the wrong way about it). Overall though this was entertaining.
Very satisfying villain story with great buildup. But romance is lacking despite the tag with it. Well, it really is great knowing its's the authors's 1st work. But it really was fun reading it.[img=recommend]
I like this nove a lot but i don’t like that Sam didn’t made move on Kiara after all i don’t feel that anything happened at all regarding they relationship, he just choose some random Russian girls to sleep with and she just standing there why ? i should be her place !!, if you to go with route “she still love starboy so he late her be and didn’t force her” then why She didn’t ‘play’ with starboy after 300 years ? wired her behavior was very wired, she is basically dead in my eyes, Don’t get me wrong I like the fact that she is alive but if this all then she will be better in dead condition maybe you planing to use her in other novel
Spoiler de révélation It’s a decent novel for a beginner. Novel is too rushed and the ending is absolute garbage, but this can also be attributed to the writer wanting to wrap this novel as fast as possible and wanting to focus on his main book.
This is the most insane Novel I read in my life. Its literally perfect and the story progression is smooth and unlike most novel nothing is forced out in this novel. Its a bit dramatic to be exact like a movie, but that much is to be expected from any novel we come across nowadays. Overall it was my 3rd novel that I ever read completely, and I can say for sure its the best one I have come across as of yet. There are stories that overexaggerate the plot with more an more difficulties, but this novel stayed true to the plot until the end and I am glad to say it was the best novel I read as of this day. Not even his "I will kill the author" comes close to this masterpiece. But if you start with a biased heart then please don't comment trash because of national distinctions.
Finally, I finished it. Ok, so here's my review. I come here to read this novel because I like This author's other novel, "I will kill the Author" a lot and I heard that this novel's Protagonist is the main villain of that novel. But you know it's totally worth my time. He ll, Only last chap is enough to make it worth it. It will definitely be in my top 10 novel list. In the first 20 chap, MC is simple, and in Starting chapters Author uses the lol word in conservation a lot but after that, he gets better and the Author stops using lol. After the first few chaps the story, writing, and grammar will get better and better. Although the last few chaps namely 120 to 135 are a bit boring and confusing. But the Author improves a lot as the story goes on and stops giving those cringe names... At least He tried. Definitely one of the top authors on this App. You can tell how much I like it from I complete this in 2 days... 2 nights to be more accurate. But I have a Que here to Author. [Spoiler] Why didn't StarSuper destroy That Dragon fossil?? They have two things to protect, Fossil and a life branch. He can't destroy the latter for obvious reasons but if he destroyed the fossils he could focus solely on defending that live branch and stop Sam from another power-up and might be able to defeat him. Don't tell me he couldn't become for god's sake he can destroy a moon and there are some abilities that can literally reduce those fossils to atoms. Wow, I usually don't like writing reviews but I couldn't stop myself from writing this. Good job. 😉😉
hello, After reading the whole novel I want to ask something from the author. Is he really going to die in your other novel. Please can you tell me this.
“Before you criticize someone, you should walk a mile in their shoes. That way when you criticize them, you are a mile away from them and you have their shoes.”
somethings rising and its not the shield hero as it is a Lol'ling simping little boy made by crawler. Also I got a better first novel than you! I finnaly won crawler"
A work of art indeed, it would be extremely interesting if there where some slice of life side stories to go along or something else not that the story has ended.
So, my one of the favourite Webnovel is finished. I really like this journey. I hope you will make a side stories as fan request to you. I reall love this novel.
It really give the feel of being villan , and it's really cool and exciting. The monologue of villan and his talks of taking wold is awesome too.
story is fantastic and the way it develops , I am quite bored of normal novels , this one is really exciting and mc is really good later on in the story
please stop saying lol when they talk. They're not texting its real life. at least do haha. that makes it so much better already.
Honestly I wish dis story was a lot longer but sadly this story will be coming to a end soon.the only problem I have with villain’s rising is the fact the plot wasn’t more detailed and honestly this seems a bit too rushed if u would to put I would say a good 3 yrs into this book it would be one of the best Webnovels on the platform
I originally found this on noveltop. I won't lie, I don't usually enjoy comedy... Not to mention I am extremely picky with the stories I choose to read. But this is one of the few times where I can safely say that I enjoy everything about this story, and I am extremely desperate for more.
Gotta say this story has really grown on me. Im pretty picky when it comes to villian mcs for sometimes its either complete psycopath or semi villian soy who doesn't really act as a villian or the "good" guys are worse to make the supposed villian mc justified. In this story the mc knows what he is doing and isn't ashamed of it. I would also recomend readers to read at chapter 25 to see if you want to continue to read or drop.
Spoiler de révélation Nice premise, reading about a villain definitely has tons of potential, but this isn't a villain, it's just an edgy powertrip fantasy. Also, "lol" has no place in a novel, especially not if ou want it taken seriously. The world background is good, the little we know of it anyways, seems like other planets are populated, and the whole hero vs villain dynamic has a lot of potential, as it always has. I'll be stopping here however, no point reading more when i already think the MC is pathetic, not because of his killing or his god complex, but because of how he talks, how he acts and many other things.
this novel is good and interesting you should read it once the author has not updated for many days I am afraid he dropped this book this novel are not like those thrash villan novels from other authors
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For a second there I forgot I'm a shameless author and it's my duty to review my book with a 5 star... *Ahem* Anyway, this will be a qna review so, ask your queries away dear readers.