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Unreadable. There's machine translation and then there's... whatever this is. The horribly cliched story doesn't do it any favors either. I couldn't make it past chapter 3.
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At first you may find the story repitive. The author is doing so since the character has to go through the same thing over and over again too. Sometimes you may feel like your life is going in circles. This is a journey of one person's journey to proving his innocence. He has to conquer many things just as many as I have I assume you have too. While I was reading the story I was going to stop reading it and leave it. Now I'm reviewing it in hopes that I can convince you to read it and not to give up at least till chapter 19. So go ahead give it a try I am certain that you are going to enjoy this journey as much as I love it so far . A journey is the adventure the destination is just the stop over to the next journey. Put on your walking gear. Take some notes you may find out that you may need the information
Is something new and different so I like it. EXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXP
a very bad translation with change of name race and gender between sentence, more than that the author just give name to thing without introducing them. there is no World or cultivation systeme introduction within the first 20th chapter and you just need to know that the mc is the greatest genius of all time thanks to the systeme
Как понять сильный персонаж или слабый? Никто не знает, все повествование "бум" и "бам" и "какой он сильный!". Вообще не понятно ничего, ни каким образом его предали, ни как работает система в некоторые моменты. Просто мусор
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so bad, translation is trash, powerlevel trash everything is trash.................. . .....................................................
The story so far seems quite interesting but the quality of translation is good enough to make the many errors in gender, choice of words, measurements and meaning (!) especially jarring! If they are able to increase the quality of translation or more probably of the editing, I would probably enjoy reading it…
Bad translation and too cliche. ............................................................................................................
Wow. Name changes every chapter. The MC sometimes acts like a transmigrant, sometimes a native. Some sentences wholly make no sense. Translations sucks, and MC doesn’t even know if the original body of his actually committed the crime.
First chapters I thought it would be good but a few chapters later the translator can't even tell the mc gender and the power level is F*cked Sometimes the mc is Strong sometimes he is weak From my opinion it's not worth reading but i will try to finish it to chapter 40
pretty normal Chinese cultivation story involving transmigrated person, low quality translation and edit. I suggest you don't read this novel.
Mentioned a lot of shes instead of hes Got me confused on the gender of the main character No explanation on the cultivation tiers or even the ranks
This needs to get picked. Flaws: -Poor worldbuilding -The cultivation realms have not been explained yet (CH 19) -Story is shallow -Slightly wonky translations, still very understandable though. I’ve read far worse, this is very much tolerable. Merits: -Fun read. -Better than most of the stuff that gets picked nowadays. -Decently conceptualised system. Overally I’d give this a 3/5 it I’m giving it a 5 cuz I want it to get picked.
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looking on the bright side, I managed to read up to chapter 12, anything beyond that I would become an amoeba..............................................
worst novel ever ............, ..............................................................................................m.mmmm..........
so many grammatical errors. In every chapters, either weight classification changed i.e. pounds, Jun , carries and once time to Freaking Kilometer. Story seems good but lacking the grandiose the author wants to convey.
Not what i hoped ...................................... ....................................................................................
Translation is garbage, names and genders keep changing, the story is unoriginal and has been done to death, i honestly don't understand how anyone still reads this sort of garbage, we've had a novel like this every week for the past year.
The clichè banished young master again? Come on! We need new setting!!!!!! It would have been good if he lived as a young master and bully others on daily basis instead
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Unreadable. There's machine translation and then there's... whatever this is. The horribly cliched story doesn't do it any favors either. I couldn't make it past chapter 3.
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At first you may find the story repitive. The author is doing so since the character has to go through the same thing over and over again too. Sometimes you may feel like your life is going in circles. This is a journey of one person's journey to proving his innocence. He has to conquer many things just as many as I have I assume you have too. While I was reading the story I was going to stop reading it and leave it. Now I'm reviewing it in hopes that I can convince you to read it and not to give up at least till chapter 19. So go ahead give it a try I am certain that you are going to enjoy this journey as much as I love it so far . A journey is the adventure the destination is just the stop over to the next journey. Put on your walking gear. Take some notes you may find out that you may need the information
Is something new and different so I like it. EXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXPEXP
a very bad translation with change of name race and gender between sentence, more than that the author just give name to thing without introducing them. there is no World or cultivation systeme introduction within the first 20th chapter and you just need to know that the mc is the greatest genius of all time thanks to the systeme
Как понять сильный персонаж или слабый? Никто не знает, все повествование "бум" и "бам" и "какой он сильный!". Вообще не понятно ничего, ни каким образом его предали, ни как работает система в некоторые моменты. Просто мусор
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so bad, translation is trash, powerlevel trash everything is trash.................. . .....................................................
The story so far seems quite interesting but the quality of translation is good enough to make the many errors in gender, choice of words, measurements and meaning (!) especially jarring! If they are able to increase the quality of translation or more probably of the editing, I would probably enjoy reading it…
Bad translation and too cliche. ............................................................................................................
Wow. Name changes every chapter. The MC sometimes acts like a transmigrant, sometimes a native. Some sentences wholly make no sense. Translations sucks, and MC doesn’t even know if the original body of his actually committed the crime.
First chapters I thought it would be good but a few chapters later the translator can't even tell the mc gender and the power level is F*cked Sometimes the mc is Strong sometimes he is weak From my opinion it's not worth reading but i will try to finish it to chapter 40
pretty normal Chinese cultivation story involving transmigrated person, low quality translation and edit. I suggest you don't read this novel.
Mentioned a lot of shes instead of hes Got me confused on the gender of the main character No explanation on the cultivation tiers or even the ranks
This needs to get picked. Flaws: -Poor worldbuilding -The cultivation realms have not been explained yet (CH 19) -Story is shallow -Slightly wonky translations, still very understandable though. I’ve read far worse, this is very much tolerable. Merits: -Fun read. -Better than most of the stuff that gets picked nowadays. -Decently conceptualised system. Overally I’d give this a 3/5 it I’m giving it a 5 cuz I want it to get picked.
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looking on the bright side, I managed to read up to chapter 12, anything beyond that I would become an amoeba..............................................
worst novel ever ............, ..............................................................................................m.mmmm..........
so many grammatical errors. In every chapters, either weight classification changed i.e. pounds, Jun , carries and once time to Freaking Kilometer. Story seems good but lacking the grandiose the author wants to convey.
Not what i hoped ...................................... ....................................................................................
Translation is garbage, names and genders keep changing, the story is unoriginal and has been done to death, i honestly don't understand how anyone still reads this sort of garbage, we've had a novel like this every week for the past year.
The clichè banished young master again? Come on! We need new setting!!!!!! It would have been good if he lived as a young master and bully others on daily basis instead
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