Young justice: Magics new champion

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yokedjaguar

It's basically a copy and paste of the original tv show like every other ff of young justice. If your gonna write something at least add your own flare. Not just a oc character that adds absolutely nothing to the plotline.

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Novel_Equilizer

The correct acronym should be : S - Wisdom of Solomon H - Strength of Hercules A - Stamina of Atlas Z - Power of Zeus A - Courage of Achilles M - Speed of Mercury

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Over_Lord_9904

Just to say it’s courage of Zeus not zabba. . .

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GodOfLight

It's basically a copy and paste of the original tv show like every other ff of young justice. If your gonna write something at least add your own flare. Not just a oc character that adds absolutely nothing to the plotline.

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TheTravelingDaoist

There’s not much to say. You doing great with this story. Keep it up. Bravo my friend, Bravo! Exceeded all expectations when I started reading

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LastGod

Even though it's a copy and paste, I would have given you more credit. If you had kept Shazam's power levels the same? Truthfully, you de powered or nerfed. This Shazam, while also saying he could be more powerful than the regular Shazam. The first time he fights when he fights twister. Instead of flying to where he is, he gets in a ship. That's slower than him. cause he's as strong as superman or he should be. Shazam is as strong as Superman, so he gets in a ship slowing him getting there and effectively nerf again. and getting thrown around by wind and stuff like that. Also, makes no sense. He's got the power of multiple gods. Wind created by a cyborg ain't gonna throw him around.

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Joaoterminus3110

don't stop with the story................ ....... ..........................................................