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I don't remember very well but I think I have read this story on the HP fanfiction website. are you the real author ? or are you just copy pasting the story here... I think there was a scene in the next few chapter s of harry with Susan in the bathroom during the quidditch World Cup.
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I don't remember very well but I think I have read this story on the HP fanfiction website. are you the real author ? or are you just copy pasting the story here... I think there was a scene in the next few chapter s of harry with Susan in the bathroom during the quidditch World Cup.
muito bom, eu acho incrível como mais pessoas não conhecem esse livro