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You really like Scott, huh? Well, I applaud you for being different in that regard, but at this point, he has more of a role than the MC himself. This isn't my cup of tea, Scott, the king of the mutants....
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this is one of the best fanfic out there, but its update is so slow it took 1 year for 30 chapters it's kind of sad +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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Quite good so far, grammar is good, progression is good, interaction makes sense
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This is really good. I love it. If you came here to check out whether It's worth reading, trust me, it is.
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Try imagining writing a book we’re the main character is in marvel [Comics] with all of dc’s powers ( I mean all the powers ,people, magic he can Assimilate all of them into himself <SLOWLY>) the ending of all of DC into one man. That person will be overpowered but that person will be in the Marvel Comic which got as much overpowered people
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Hulk make happy, not good at reviews, so in summary, I like this story a lot cause I like Hulk. Don't care what anyone else thinks, I'm too immature to care, Hulk is great, this is a great story with plot relating to comics that isn't talked about often. love it.
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excellent story I like how it has developed so far keep doing it and it will do you good
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Though only at 8 chapters, I think this is a incredible piece of work and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
I really like the story I don’t see any stories about hiro Kala so I hope to see more chapters keep up your doing great
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You really like Scott, huh? Well, I applaud you for being different in that regard, but at this point, he has more of a role than the MC himself. This isn't my cup of tea, Scott, the king of the mutants....
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this is one of the best fanfic out there, but its update is so slow it took 1 year for 30 chapters it's kind of sad +++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
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Stupid.................................................................................................................................................................................
Quite good so far, grammar is good, progression is good, interaction makes sense
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This is really good. I love it. If you came here to check out whether It's worth reading, trust me, it is.
No pase del " primer cap " ............,..............,..............,..............,...........,..............,..............,..............,..
Try imagining writing a book we’re the main character is in marvel [Comics] with all of dc’s powers ( I mean all the powers ,people, magic he can Assimilate all of them into himself <SLOWLY>) the ending of all of DC into one man. That person will be overpowered but that person will be in the Marvel Comic which got as much overpowered people
nice...........................................................................................................................................................
Spoiler de révélation Hulk make happy, not good at reviews, so in summary, I like this story a lot cause I like Hulk. Don't care what anyone else thinks, I'm too immature to care, Hulk is great, this is a great story with plot relating to comics that isn't talked about often. love it.
Spoiler de révélation excellent story I like how it has developed so far keep doing it and it will do you good
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Though only at 8 chapters, I think this is a incredible piece of work and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far 😊👍
I really like the story I don’t see any stories about hiro Kala so I hope to see more chapters keep up your doing great