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I love this book, to be honest. This is a must-read book and I wish readers will find this the soonest. Everything about it– is superb. I hope the Author will continue this book in the future. One of the best, for sure. ❤
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I love this story is interesting am looking forward for more please ❣️💕
This is a must-read. Excellent description. The plot is also interesting. The title is intriguing and the synopsis is beautifully written and I recommend it
The language in which the stories are being written is very lucid. I am wishing more upcoming twist and turns. The character names are quite interesting. Unusual unfolding of events. Kudos to the writer!
packs weirdo mystery to unveil book is good it has many secrets and the characters are strong and the story is great till now cant wait to read more chapters
Great book! But why is the updates so long? There’s really a six day maybe more between chapters. I thought there’s daily updates. Can you explain this for because I don’t understand.
Interesting work so far, I loved how you explained all of the terms at the first chapter. It really put me through a lot of things. Great work with your characters as well. I loved them all.
Wow! This story is amazing. Author did a great job pouring action, drama, and suspense. You can feel what character is feeling when reading. I definitely going to read this one. Good job Author!!
Need new chapters. I want two read more of this incredible book. Best writing. love the book en there plots. female lead is perfect. alpha king is perfect two.
Hello and an honest review from me, it's actually an interesting read and I enjoyed the storyline very much, so keep up the great work, author👍🏻✨
This is an absolute must-read story. An excellent plot, beautifully designed characters, good grammar, and descriptive writing. This story is captivating, and I will definitely return for more. Author, keep up the good work.
Your typical werewolf story, aside from her not being one that is. I'm a sucker for outcasts though. It looks like it will bean enjoyable read
Love how the author build the world and explained it thoroughly. It has such an excellent details which helped a lot when reading and understanding the conflicts.
Definitely looking out for more from this book. Its must read from me and waiting for more adventure in this awesome book. Really love the character dvpt. Good job author.
Too much love for this book,kudos to the Author keep up the good work, very interesting,the characters are easy to like and the bad guy is hated,I recommend this book
When I say review, it's actually an honest review of what I read about the plot, theme, synopsis, and even the first 3 chapters. First, I have a problem with the punctuation. It's disturbing to see punctuations not placed to their right places. Added to that is the capitalization of every sentence. E.g. "Thank you," Ashton said. [This sentence comprised of the correct punctuation and capitalization] Second, the synopsis can be written better and well. I understand you wanted to say that the female is not allowed to have a mate, but it can be worded and executed well. For it to be more smoothly readable, be careful with the organization of words. Try to read it again and again. If it sound clear and comprehensible, it's all set. Third, the market of Webnovel doesn't cater vague titles even if it has the catchy word on it i.e., Alpha, CEO, Billionaire or even system. I suggest, if you can do for your future works, to be definite of the title. Be straightforward! Fourth, you can opt to have more detailed and attractive cover to intrigue the readers. In that way, they would make it to the synopsis and the first chapter as well. Last, the first chapter shouldn't start with the information about a pack. You could add this ingredient inside the chapters for it to be executed and informed the readers well. Don't spoon feed readers with information RIGHT at the beginning. Might as well take up a lot of time and effort to have a good writing, but yours is already unique. A little tweak and you're good to go!
I'm also writing a werewolf book for the first time so this can help me learn a lot about wolves and their system and plus, it's freaking cool. Looking forward to the climax!
This artwork should be more famous than that i love the development of the story and also the introduction of the main character was brilliant . Continue i will support this artwork
Beautiful story ❤ Great job author. I like the book so wwell, thank you dear author for such a nice book. Though the chapter were locked at the chapter nnine. But it was worth reading. Good luck author. I highly recommend the book for other readers. (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(｡♥‿♥｡)(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(♥ω♥*)(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(♥ω♥*)(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(♥ω♥*)
Absolutely adore this story. I literally just want to keep on reading, without any end. The grammar can use some work, using capital letters at the beginning of sentences and punctuation marks is needed. But I can't complain to much, because I'm literally hooked to the plot. Really good storyline.
I can't stop reading, the story plot flows so way to read. The characters are well-designed and likable. The story has a very interesting plot and the author's grammatical structure was well blended. I can't help but picture the story background in my head. nice work author.
So far so good.. Everything is written and explained so well.. I like the main character sm!! I truly admire author's writing style! Great work author!
I like this story. It has good writing and gets exciting after chapter 3. Thank you for the contexts you have put! Also how to kill a certain wolf name stella?
I invite all readers to give this beautiful book a chance. It is wonderful how the plot unfolds without boring me. The grammar is also spectacular, I congratulate the author.
I really am enjoying this book! Love the chemistry between addy and Ryan is great, taking it slow, making it more genuine. Only thing is I wished there were more updates. It’s very hard to follow a book if only updated with one to two chapters a week.
I am fan of this story and its hooked me on. Well written chapters and the well- rounded characters that brings the emotion to the readers. Loving it
Everyone, this is a must-read. Excellent description. The plot is also interesting. The title is intriguing, and the synopsis is beautifully written. The grammar was also excellent. I'm excited to read more.
I have to be honest. This type of genre really isn't my cup of tea, but somehow, as I reading it, you managed to make me go on and read further. It's a good story.
Hey! First of all, I’d liked to say that I really enjoy your story! The characters are well written. I love the banter between them. It’s very playful. The story itself is interesting. Im excited to read more. Keep it up😊
I love this book, to be honest. This is a must-read book and I wish readers will find this the soonest. Everything about it– is superb. I hope the Author will continue this book in the future. One of the best, for sure. ❤
Spoiler de révélation I love this story is interesting am looking forward for more please ❣️💕
This is a must-read. Excellent description. The plot is also interesting. The title is intriguing and the synopsis is beautifully written and I recommend it
The language in which the stories are being written is very lucid. I am wishing more upcoming twist and turns. The character names are quite interesting. Unusual unfolding of events. Kudos to the writer!
packs weirdo mystery to unveil book is good it has many secrets and the characters are strong and the story is great till now cant wait to read more chapters
Great book! But why is the updates so long? There’s really a six day maybe more between chapters. I thought there’s daily updates. Can you explain this for because I don’t understand.
Interesting work so far, I loved how you explained all of the terms at the first chapter. It really put me through a lot of things. Great work with your characters as well. I loved them all.
Wow! This story is amazing. Author did a great job pouring action, drama, and suspense. You can feel what character is feeling when reading. I definitely going to read this one. Good job Author!!
Need new chapters. I want two read more of this incredible book. Best writing. love the book en there plots. female lead is perfect. alpha king is perfect two.
Hello and an honest review from me, it's actually an interesting read and I enjoyed the storyline very much, so keep up the great work, author👍🏻✨
This is an absolute must-read story. An excellent plot, beautifully designed characters, good grammar, and descriptive writing. This story is captivating, and I will definitely return for more. Author, keep up the good work.
Your typical werewolf story, aside from her not being one that is. I'm a sucker for outcasts though. It looks like it will bean enjoyable read
Love how the author build the world and explained it thoroughly. It has such an excellent details which helped a lot when reading and understanding the conflicts.
Definitely looking out for more from this book. Its must read from me and waiting for more adventure in this awesome book. Really love the character dvpt. Good job author.
Too much love for this book,kudos to the Author keep up the good work, very interesting,the characters are easy to like and the bad guy is hated,I recommend this book
When I say review, it's actually an honest review of what I read about the plot, theme, synopsis, and even the first 3 chapters. First, I have a problem with the punctuation. It's disturbing to see punctuations not placed to their right places. Added to that is the capitalization of every sentence. E.g. "Thank you," Ashton said. [This sentence comprised of the correct punctuation and capitalization] Second, the synopsis can be written better and well. I understand you wanted to say that the female is not allowed to have a mate, but it can be worded and executed well. For it to be more smoothly readable, be careful with the organization of words. Try to read it again and again. If it sound clear and comprehensible, it's all set. Third, the market of Webnovel doesn't cater vague titles even if it has the catchy word on it i.e., Alpha, CEO, Billionaire or even system. I suggest, if you can do for your future works, to be definite of the title. Be straightforward! Fourth, you can opt to have more detailed and attractive cover to intrigue the readers. In that way, they would make it to the synopsis and the first chapter as well. Last, the first chapter shouldn't start with the information about a pack. You could add this ingredient inside the chapters for it to be executed and informed the readers well. Don't spoon feed readers with information RIGHT at the beginning. Might as well take up a lot of time and effort to have a good writing, but yours is already unique. A little tweak and you're good to go!
I'm also writing a werewolf book for the first time so this can help me learn a lot about wolves and their system and plus, it's freaking cool. Looking forward to the climax!
This artwork should be more famous than that i love the development of the story and also the introduction of the main character was brilliant . Continue i will support this artwork
Beautiful story ❤ Great job author. I like the book so wwell, thank you dear author for such a nice book. Though the chapter were locked at the chapter nnine. But it was worth reading. Good luck author. I highly recommend the book for other readers. (◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(｡♥‿♥｡)(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(♥ω♥*)(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(♥ω♥*)(◍•ᴗ•◍)❤(♥ω♥*)
Absolutely adore this story. I literally just want to keep on reading, without any end. The grammar can use some work, using capital letters at the beginning of sentences and punctuation marks is needed. But I can't complain to much, because I'm literally hooked to the plot. Really good storyline.
I can't stop reading, the story plot flows so way to read. The characters are well-designed and likable. The story has a very interesting plot and the author's grammatical structure was well blended. I can't help but picture the story background in my head. nice work author.
So far so good.. Everything is written and explained so well.. I like the main character sm!! I truly admire author's writing style! Great work author!
I like this story. It has good writing and gets exciting after chapter 3. Thank you for the contexts you have put! Also how to kill a certain wolf name stella?
I invite all readers to give this beautiful book a chance. It is wonderful how the plot unfolds without boring me. The grammar is also spectacular, I congratulate the author.
I really am enjoying this book! Love the chemistry between addy and Ryan is great, taking it slow, making it more genuine. Only thing is I wished there were more updates. It’s very hard to follow a book if only updated with one to two chapters a week.
I am fan of this story and its hooked me on. Well written chapters and the well- rounded characters that brings the emotion to the readers. Loving it
Everyone, this is a must-read. Excellent description. The plot is also interesting. The title is intriguing, and the synopsis is beautifully written. The grammar was also excellent. I'm excited to read more.
I have to be honest. This type of genre really isn't my cup of tea, but somehow, as I reading it, you managed to make me go on and read further. It's a good story.
Hey! First of all, I’d liked to say that I really enjoy your story! The characters are well written. I love the banter between them. It’s very playful. The story itself is interesting. Im excited to read more. Keep it up😊
Overall not bad. Keeps you interested for more.