3Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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It surprisingly started differently. He transmigrated to just when the villain was born. The writing quality is average, not boring, not exciting either. There are grammatical errors that aren't that much of a big deal. So far, it's better than those rushed novels in this platform. The writing is also like that of wattpad style. I don't usually encounter a novel with mixture of first person pov and omniscient pov. I'll update this review in the following chapters.
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It surprisingly started differently. He transmigrated to just when the villain was born. The writing quality is average, not boring, not exciting either. There are grammatical errors that aren't that much of a big deal. So far, it's better than those rushed novels in this platform. The writing is also like that of wattpad style. I don't usually encounter a novel with mixture of first person pov and omniscient pov. I'll update this review in the following chapters.
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