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A good work from the author. The qorld building is interesting and the characters are all worth a read. The interactions between the leads is sweet. I will definitely recommend it to others . The overall pace of the story is good and it's an intriguing work . Much love author . ❤
Truth to be told, this is my first time to write a review for a novel. Seriously this novel is very very good. I have read multiple novels (cultivation, historical, ABO, crime,..).But this is very unique. I can't pinpoint where it is unique but I can assure you will definitely like this . Character setting, background or how their strength is increased gradually or how the storyline goes everything is intriguing. I have no words to praise this novel. I am very satisfied. thank the author for this novel. Can you also give scenes of Yang Xu and Murong feng more often. I really like to see them often. The only thing that is very frustrating is that i want daily updates. I know the author also needs time but if it is daily updates I'll be very happy. Finally thank you Author for giving me such a gem.❤️❤️❤️
I give this a 5/5 because of the impressive writing skill. This is a great story! It has the perfect amount of story development without any unnecessary drama. In the end, this story is very much worth reading!
i usually have difficulties remembering characters, especially when there are too many introduced. but this novel is a breath of fresh air in terms of world building,properly paced stroyline and progression, and very interesting concept of time. as humans whose average life is about 70 (?) the concept of living and doing one thing for thousands of years if very peculiar but interesting (and dare i say, exciting!). good work author-san!
Update plsssssss🙏🙏🥹🥹 tagalog nalang siguro comment ko. nagdudugo ilong ko eh😅😅Sobra sobra sobrang ganda ng story. Yung landian, hindi cringe 😅 yung dialogue ng bagat character, bumabagay sa binigay na pagkatao ng bawat isa. Sa iba kasing author, basta mapadami lang ang word count, hindi na tumutugma sa charatcteryung mga sinasabi. basta maganda, sana mapatapos ko💜♥️💙
Hi it's me the artist person, I wanted to ask if you have insta because I have the sketch of the cover and need feedback if the outfits and hair is right and shi like that. Love your book btw
Such a good novel, I can't stop reading. The world building is really interesting and unique. 👍👍
I love everything about the story and I can't really finish it cause I'm broke!
Can someone with Rainbow hearts can give me Coins 🙏🙏♥️♥️💜💙 i'm new here in webnovel. I dont have money to top up💙💜♥️💜💙 plsssssss🙏🙏🙏🙏
I love the beginning and the plotline. the character development is superb and not rushed. There is no excess of information. the explanation of the world is easy to understand to even people who are new to cultivation fics.
you are one of the best writers i have come across on WN. The attention you give to every character and how they relate is amazing. I also love the way you write its so unique, your work is not over loaded with words that are difficult to read you use simple English but also capture to readers' attention to keep wanting more.
Author when are you going to have a free chapter event 😭😭I don't have enough money to afford more paid chapters🤣😫
Newly started reading this book and I must say I am already invested! Looking forward to read more of it! Good luck dear author!
I give 5 stars if you tell me who the seme is, and by god! hope Yu Nianzhen is the seme I give 5 stars if you tell me who the seme is, and by god! hope Yu Nianzhen is the seme I give 5 stars if you tell me who the seme is, and by god! hope Yu Nianzhen is the seme
It's an exciting beginning, though I don't read this genre, but this is entertaining to read. Minor error of grammar spotted, but did not affect the running of the story.
I usually do not swing by the LGBTQ genre, but due to the historical theme and amazing character development, I am hooked. Looking forward to the other chapters as I am right now done with about 25+ chaps.
I have read so my books of this genre but this is so beautiful! It is written from another dimension entirely. The characters are so loveable. I wish to see more of 'Little Saint Yu!'
Really enjoyed reading the first couple of chapters so far! It's quite thrilling, entertaining, and it builds on the character development slowly. There are some points where I feel too confused about the background of the characters but overall it's a good read, and the writing is fun and there are a lot of unexpected moments that really cause a reaction from the reader, and that shows the skill of the author! Well done.
l love this novel, characters are well described. lt's easy to understand everything because it's well elaborated, l can't put my phone down to be sincere, l'll recommend it to anyone who loves BL.[img=update]
The author has a good writing skills... the story can easily understand and the discription is very vivid.... the story is very captivating and detailed ☺️☺️☺️☺️
first of all, I love how the writer write the story, it has a clean & simple word yet the story was easy to understand, the writer can express their character perfectly! keep it up!
Good read love it the grammar is okay, the characters too keep the excellent work Author and looking forward to many more updates, 💯💯💯💯💯💯great work!!
It's a nice read, I like how simple it is and the realistic factors incorporated into the story. There needs to be some changes here and there when it comes to dialogue and more description would be nice, otherwise, this story is good.
The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.
Great writing skill from the author and the premise is very interesting. Looking forward to future chapters!! Please keep up the good work!!
I love this, i've read many cultivation bls with the characters more on lovey-dovey stuff but this one has the two main leads growing stronger together as well as their love.... And their deaths in the last life hahahaha killed me.
A good work from the author. The qorld building is interesting and the characters are all worth a read. The interactions between the leads is sweet. I will definitely recommend it to others . The overall pace of the story is good and it's an intriguing work . Much love author . ❤
Truth to be told, this is my first time to write a review for a novel. Seriously this novel is very very good. I have read multiple novels (cultivation, historical, ABO, crime,..).But this is very unique. I can't pinpoint where it is unique but I can assure you will definitely like this . Character setting, background or how their strength is increased gradually or how the storyline goes everything is intriguing. I have no words to praise this novel. I am very satisfied. thank the author for this novel. Can you also give scenes of Yang Xu and Murong feng more often. I really like to see them often. The only thing that is very frustrating is that i want daily updates. I know the author also needs time but if it is daily updates I'll be very happy. Finally thank you Author for giving me such a gem.❤️❤️❤️
I give this a 5/5 because of the impressive writing skill. This is a great story! It has the perfect amount of story development without any unnecessary drama. In the end, this story is very much worth reading!
i usually have difficulties remembering characters, especially when there are too many introduced. but this novel is a breath of fresh air in terms of world building,properly paced stroyline and progression, and very interesting concept of time. as humans whose average life is about 70 (?) the concept of living and doing one thing for thousands of years if very peculiar but interesting (and dare i say, exciting!). good work author-san!
Update plsssssss🙏🙏🥹🥹 tagalog nalang siguro comment ko. nagdudugo ilong ko eh😅😅Sobra sobra sobrang ganda ng story. Yung landian, hindi cringe 😅 yung dialogue ng bagat character, bumabagay sa binigay na pagkatao ng bawat isa. Sa iba kasing author, basta mapadami lang ang word count, hindi na tumutugma sa charatcteryung mga sinasabi. basta maganda, sana mapatapos ko💜♥️💙
Hi it's me the artist person, I wanted to ask if you have insta because I have the sketch of the cover and need feedback if the outfits and hair is right and shi like that. Love your book btw
Such a good novel, I can't stop reading. The world building is really interesting and unique. 👍👍
I love everything about the story and I can't really finish it cause I'm broke!
Can someone with Rainbow hearts can give me Coins 🙏🙏♥️♥️💜💙 i'm new here in webnovel. I dont have money to top up💙💜♥️💜💙 plsssssss🙏🙏🙏🙏
I love the beginning and the plotline. the character development is superb and not rushed. There is no excess of information. the explanation of the world is easy to understand to even people who are new to cultivation fics.
you are one of the best writers i have come across on WN. The attention you give to every character and how they relate is amazing. I also love the way you write its so unique, your work is not over loaded with words that are difficult to read you use simple English but also capture to readers' attention to keep wanting more.
Author when are you going to have a free chapter event 😭😭I don't have enough money to afford more paid chapters🤣😫
Newly started reading this book and I must say I am already invested! Looking forward to read more of it! Good luck dear author!
I give 5 stars if you tell me who the seme is, and by god! hope Yu Nianzhen is the seme I give 5 stars if you tell me who the seme is, and by god! hope Yu Nianzhen is the seme I give 5 stars if you tell me who the seme is, and by god! hope Yu Nianzhen is the seme
It's an exciting beginning, though I don't read this genre, but this is entertaining to read. Minor error of grammar spotted, but did not affect the running of the story.
I usually do not swing by the LGBTQ genre, but due to the historical theme and amazing character development, I am hooked. Looking forward to the other chapters as I am right now done with about 25+ chaps.
I have read so my books of this genre but this is so beautiful! It is written from another dimension entirely. The characters are so loveable. I wish to see more of 'Little Saint Yu!'
Really enjoyed reading the first couple of chapters so far! It's quite thrilling, entertaining, and it builds on the character development slowly. There are some points where I feel too confused about the background of the characters but overall it's a good read, and the writing is fun and there are a lot of unexpected moments that really cause a reaction from the reader, and that shows the skill of the author! Well done.
l love this novel, characters are well described. lt's easy to understand everything because it's well elaborated, l can't put my phone down to be sincere, l'll recommend it to anyone who loves BL.[img=update]
The author has a good writing skills... the story can easily understand and the discription is very vivid.... the story is very captivating and detailed ☺️☺️☺️☺️
first of all, I love how the writer write the story, it has a clean & simple word yet the story was easy to understand, the writer can express their character perfectly! keep it up!
Good read love it the grammar is okay, the characters too keep the excellent work Author and looking forward to many more updates, 💯💯💯💯💯💯great work!!
It's a nice read, I like how simple it is and the realistic factors incorporated into the story. There needs to be some changes here and there when it comes to dialogue and more description would be nice, otherwise, this story is good.
The author has a picture to portray through their words. And they do that well enough for the reader to understand the theme of it. The world created is admirable with an enjoyable storyline.
Great writing skill from the author and the premise is very interesting. Looking forward to future chapters!! Please keep up the good work!!
I love this, i've read many cultivation bls with the characters more on lovey-dovey stuff but this one has the two main leads growing stronger together as well as their love.... And their deaths in the last life hahahaha killed me.