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alright this is my honest review so far. WQ: the author needs to have a proof reader come behind them and fix the plentiful amount of errors. SD: the story develops at a fast pace but to many side characters can make a story feel crowded, be careful author CD: I feel like the character design could use some work on further detailing features of them US: no issue with the updates WB: more could've gone into this but it's fairly covered (ish)
All i can say is that the book piqued my interest so i read it and everything good. the System building and the overall experience was very good and i hope to see more
good story, but any story on this site that updates a chapter per week is pointless to read because it will never end let's assume this story will have Between 500 to 1000 chapters, which normally is the average for these type of stories. it will take more than a decade for it to end. . one piece is enough
The story is good and I really like the concept but one thing I didn't like about the story is, I'm confused on who is who and the pov of the story changes very fast and there's no explanation on them. Also I'm very confused on the class.
system, harem, elf prince, reincarnated, already starting a new book, 1 chapter a week. ye without reading I know this isn't worth investing my time into, the only reason it's getting a bad review is that it's only "weekly recommend" from webnovels itself and I got a bad taste. listen, I'll tell you that most readers are not looking for another harem, or another system, or another reincarnation. it can have a system but why? you could reason the reincarnation on anything, this makes the story more interesting and adds some mystery if you want. oh the mc needs a guide in his path to power? then the story is not going to be as good as it can be, theres no point in anything when the system solves all problems. I see novels try to limit what a system can do instead of just getting rid of the idea of a system. and honestly there's probably some merit, some good ideas, some potential in these system novels but I've literally never in my life finished a system novel other than I'm really a superstar, and it does the system well enough that I forget it's technically a system novel. you could also do a system like the Oracle paths, like a sci-fi thing and it's cool, but a magical unexplained system that makes the Mc a slave to the path of missions and quests and whatever else is so lame and forgettable compared to maybe an ancient god looking for entertainment so it reincarnates some unfortunate soul, and that's if you have to have a reincarnation. sorry it's a long rant review, no hate to you author, I couldn't do what you do I only wish for better things to read, and hey I'll check out this novel and give a powestone since this review is kinda uncalled for
eu ia ler isso mas vi que escreve outras duas história, ugh... eu queria entender porque os autores sempre fazem isso, porque não terminei logo a primeira história e depois escrever outra? eu tenho certeza que cedo ou tarde você vai desistir por ficar sobrecarregado
I haven't even started reading it but in synopsis is stated that mc is an elf. I LOVE ELFS! But there are not many novels with elf mc so 5 stars just for that reason.
Good system. good starting, Lot of things right with this novel. I really liked the way that the characters were introduced
mhh what is there to say. its a nice read, the world development takes good solid steps progressively. the characters seem powerful i hope they get more in the plot line i will follow up on the book its rather good.
It's a very good book. The MC the isn't as perfect as I thought but it's still very interesting. I hope author picks up update speed again.
This is a very good story, love where the author is going with the story. Great job author keep it.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great attention to detail and awesome system!!!! The world-building is solid and I can see the effort put into every chapter. Thank you for the good read author, I'll be waiting for future chapters
A successful system implementation. World background is loaded very strongly in details. I think it is nice to add different races as allies of the good. I liked this one.
Amazing novel! Loving the start so far and how detailed it is, especially how it dives into the story and the *ahem, I shouldn't spoil stuff right away*. And also, the chapter titles are immaculate. Can't wait to read more, keep up the incredible work!
i am trying this out guys wish me luck ps:can someone recomend me novels where MC is a god and op
Okay readers, listen up. This is my third book an it's an WPC entry. Losing is no longer allowed. Ahem. So, you should leave a power stone and review after reading so I can get you even better content. What to expect in the book: Antihero MC: Ruthless, sadistic and merciless MC who will not let any of his enemies live. OP MC: Overpowered mc that trained and fought to acquire his power. Harem: C'mon, a true king must have-ahem-multiple women by his side.(Hope my parents never find this book) Okay, I hope y'all give this book a try!
का आनंद ले रहा था जब तक कि उसने लड़की को बचाना शुरू नहीं किया, फिर एक और लड़की आती है और वह उसके लिए पागल हो जाता है और साजिश वास्तव में उसके साथ मजबूर महसूस करती है जो बुरे लोगों को बचाती है जो उसे चोट पहुंचाना चाहते हैं लेकिन वह दूसरे को मारता है जैसे हम जानते हैं कि क्या
alright this is my honest review so far. WQ: the author needs to have a proof reader come behind them and fix the plentiful amount of errors. SD: the story develops at a fast pace but to many side characters can make a story feel crowded, be careful author CD: I feel like the character design could use some work on further detailing features of them US: no issue with the updates WB: more could've gone into this but it's fairly covered (ish)
All i can say is that the book piqued my interest so i read it and everything good. the System building and the overall experience was very good and i hope to see more
good story, but any story on this site that updates a chapter per week is pointless to read because it will never end let's assume this story will have Between 500 to 1000 chapters, which normally is the average for these type of stories. it will take more than a decade for it to end. . one piece is enough
The story is good and I really like the concept but one thing I didn't like about the story is, I'm confused on who is who and the pov of the story changes very fast and there's no explanation on them. Also I'm very confused on the class.
system, harem, elf prince, reincarnated, already starting a new book, 1 chapter a week. ye without reading I know this isn't worth investing my time into, the only reason it's getting a bad review is that it's only "weekly recommend" from webnovels itself and I got a bad taste. listen, I'll tell you that most readers are not looking for another harem, or another system, or another reincarnation. it can have a system but why? you could reason the reincarnation on anything, this makes the story more interesting and adds some mystery if you want. oh the mc needs a guide in his path to power? then the story is not going to be as good as it can be, theres no point in anything when the system solves all problems. I see novels try to limit what a system can do instead of just getting rid of the idea of a system. and honestly there's probably some merit, some good ideas, some potential in these system novels but I've literally never in my life finished a system novel other than I'm really a superstar, and it does the system well enough that I forget it's technically a system novel. you could also do a system like the Oracle paths, like a sci-fi thing and it's cool, but a magical unexplained system that makes the Mc a slave to the path of missions and quests and whatever else is so lame and forgettable compared to maybe an ancient god looking for entertainment so it reincarnates some unfortunate soul, and that's if you have to have a reincarnation. sorry it's a long rant review, no hate to you author, I couldn't do what you do I only wish for better things to read, and hey I'll check out this novel and give a powestone since this review is kinda uncalled for
eu ia ler isso mas vi que escreve outras duas história, ugh... eu queria entender porque os autores sempre fazem isso, porque não terminei logo a primeira história e depois escrever outra? eu tenho certeza que cedo ou tarde você vai desistir por ficar sobrecarregado
I haven't even started reading it but in synopsis is stated that mc is an elf. I LOVE ELFS! But there are not many novels with elf mc so 5 stars just for that reason.
Good system. good starting, Lot of things right with this novel. I really liked the way that the characters were introduced
mhh what is there to say. its a nice read, the world development takes good solid steps progressively. the characters seem powerful i hope they get more in the plot line i will follow up on the book its rather good.
It's a very good book. The MC the isn't as perfect as I thought but it's still very interesting. I hope author picks up update speed again.
This is a very good story, love where the author is going with the story. Great job author keep it.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great attention to detail and awesome system!!!! The world-building is solid and I can see the effort put into every chapter. Thank you for the good read author, I'll be waiting for future chapters
A successful system implementation. World background is loaded very strongly in details. I think it is nice to add different races as allies of the good. I liked this one.
Amazing novel! Loving the start so far and how detailed it is, especially how it dives into the story and the *ahem, I shouldn't spoil stuff right away*. And also, the chapter titles are immaculate. Can't wait to read more, keep up the incredible work!
i am trying this out guys wish me luck ps:can someone recomend me novels where MC is a god and op
Okay readers, listen up. This is my third book an it's an WPC entry. Losing is no longer allowed. Ahem. So, you should leave a power stone and review after reading so I can get you even better content. What to expect in the book: Antihero MC: Ruthless, sadistic and merciless MC who will not let any of his enemies live. OP MC: Overpowered mc that trained and fought to acquire his power. Harem: C'mon, a true king must have-ahem-multiple women by his side.(Hope my parents never find this book) Okay, I hope y'all give this book a try!
का आनंद ले रहा था जब तक कि उसने लड़की को बचाना शुरू नहीं किया, फिर एक और लड़की आती है और वह उसके लिए पागल हो जाता है और साजिश वास्तव में उसके साथ मजबूर महसूस करती है जो बुरे लोगों को बचाती है जो उसे चोट पहुंचाना चाहते हैं लेकिन वह दूसरे को मारता है जैसे हम जानते हैं कि क्या