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I like your story, Keep going guys🔥 I'm waiting for the next update It may start off lacking, but each advanced chapter gets pretty good and better.
I was really inot this book, one of the few good ones on here. sad that he stopped writing.
when is the next chapter update??? author, I curse you not to have a lovelife for making me wait for the new chapter. ……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................
A good story keep up the good work.................................................... ............................................. ....................... ...
I like the story ......................................................................................................................................
Waiting for more chapters ......................................................................................................................................
I really like where you are going with this and hope you don’t drop thanks [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Waiting for more chapters ......................................................................................................................................
absolutely love the concept, and that the character is actually trying to utilize his abilities to the limit instead of half@$$ing it. please dont just randomly drop out of nowhere like so many stories out there
This is one of the very first novels I have read on the web, and by far the most interesting one. It is a system type that has an amazing plot and detailed explanation of each system's skills. I also like how the main character is portrayed as having the weakest system and becoming stronger by utilizing it properly.[img=update]
I like your story, Keep going guys🔥 I'm waiting for the next update It may start off lacking, but each advanced chapter gets pretty good and better.
I was really inot this book, one of the few good ones on here. sad that he stopped writing.
when is the next chapter update??? author, I curse you not to have a lovelife for making me wait for the new chapter. ……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................……....................................
A good story keep up the good work.................................................... ............................................. ....................... ...
I like the story ......................................................................................................................................
Waiting for more chapters ......................................................................................................................................
I really like where you are going with this and hope you don’t drop thanks [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Waiting for more chapters ......................................................................................................................................
absolutely love the concept, and that the character is actually trying to utilize his abilities to the limit instead of half@$$ing it. please dont just randomly drop out of nowhere like so many stories out there
This is one of the very first novels I have read on the web, and by far the most interesting one. It is a system type that has an amazing plot and detailed explanation of each system's skills. I also like how the main character is portrayed as having the weakest system and becoming stronger by utilizing it properly.[img=update]