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You couldn’t get anything right son of sloth is supposed to be lazy and you had him saving people and partisapating in a tournament terrible character design you havent updated in 5 months and he supposed to be Based around his pub but most of this is outside of it.
Im not surprised that it got dropped. All the author done is just say whatever he want no story in a story what a joke
I’ve read the first 13 chapters but I didn’t really vibe with it. So little was going on that I was bored out of my mind and only continued to see if anything would change. Aside from the few memes here and there I didn’t really find anything compelling… Author, I hope you continue writing and improving your craft.
I think it's a good novel. I just hope it dosent get abandoned like most fanfic's. .
Its pretty early so there is not much to review but non the less. I really look forward to seeing this progress! It is your first novel so I cant wait to see where you take it.
I say great i give 4 star just cus i havent read many omniversal shope kinda stuff and it interesting tho chapd too short but no hate tho its amezing in my opinion tho i relle read anything that i find funny
You couldn’t get anything right son of sloth is supposed to be lazy and you had him saving people and partisapating in a tournament terrible character design you havent updated in 5 months and he supposed to be Based around his pub but most of this is outside of it.
Im not surprised that it got dropped. All the author done is just say whatever he want no story in a story what a joke
I’ve read the first 13 chapters but I didn’t really vibe with it. So little was going on that I was bored out of my mind and only continued to see if anything would change. Aside from the few memes here and there I didn’t really find anything compelling… Author, I hope you continue writing and improving your craft.
I think it's a good novel. I just hope it dosent get abandoned like most fanfic's. .
Its pretty early so there is not much to review but non the less. I really look forward to seeing this progress! It is your first novel so I cant wait to see where you take it.
I say great i give 4 star just cus i havent read many omniversal shope kinda stuff and it interesting tho chapd too short but no hate tho its amezing in my opinion tho i relle read anything that i find funny