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First the concept of the story is truly a breath of fresh air, but I do not know how the story has such an overall good rating. Yes, it's decent,but the writing quality is poor at best. There are a lot of gaps in the wording that just plain don't make sense. It also is obvious that the author isn't native English speaker because the translation is shoddy. Don't trust all the reviews they're just heeping praise with no criticism to help the author fix the mistakes which shows they're probably mostly paid reviews. Some may not but I'm not multilingual so I don't understand most of the reviews.
Oh my, God! I know there's something Sofia hide... Haaaaaa! Oke! Stay cool😏 It's oke! It's oke... Right! Nico! I know you have a big plans for this! So... Show me that you can make Sofia more, more, more, more than regret😁😁 hihihi... btw... i like this story, Sistah ❤❤
this story about dutche and her love, so romantic. i not yet this story since i am 23 years old[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Wow English story... the story just soo amazing... 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 with good plot and storyline... Fighting author 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪
waww this story excellent!! very nice thanks author cause you make this novel. fighting author, 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥💐 🔥
an interesting story with a mainstream plot and good language style. Good job, Thor! Can't wait to read the next part. Fightingg! 😍😍😍😍
Good story. I really like every description made by the author. In my opinion, the theme chosen is very unique, it makes the reader can be immersed in it
I can say that the novel draw my interest. The novel was typical Indonesia's romance story but the plot to uncover mystery of MC's wife is something unique. It make me curious and teased me to continue reading the next chapter. I can't wait to know the end. The novel have a few grammar errors and hard to digest paragraph but I'm sure, it will improved as the chapters keep growing. Lastly, keep the spirit up, Ayu_Kristin. We, the readers, cheers for you.
Semangat menulis terus, kak. Aku belum baca sekarang tapi dari blurbnya udah menarik dan bakal aku baca kalau udah ada waktu luang nantinya. semangat terus kak[img=faceslap][img=recommend]
Just reading the synopsis already guessed this story would be sad.😢😢😢 I put it on the shelf first! I like it! Cheers, Author! 😊😊😊😚😚😚
This novel is so cool! Highly recommended for someone who likes mystery genre. Okay, waiting for the next part, Sis! 🔥❤️[img=update][img=exp]
Suka banget sama ceritanya yang menghanyutkan dan bikin baper, bener2 cocok buat pacaan saat dirumah aja yang entah kapan akan berakhir ini. Lanjut ya thor I like it so much muach much
cool story, always addictive and can't stop reading. the presentation really makes me drift with the content of the story which is really that good
Mantap jiwa thor!! Meski aku agak kesulitan dalam membaca cerita bahasa English tapi dengan bantuan translete aku jadi tahu alur dalam cerita. sukses selalu thor
I finally found this story. many plots are so surprising to me. I can no longer imagine how that perfect life can change in a matter of time
Walaupun baca sambil terjemahin, tapi ceritanya beneran bagus. Karakternya juga kuat, pokoknya suka banget sama alurnya. Ditunggu lanjutannya, ya.
This is an amazing and understandable chapter, I really enjoyed it Sis, waiting for the next one[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The first part was to arouse the curiosity of the reader, nice job for the writer. I hope you get an update on that part soon. I can't wait. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is very good and interesting, the depiction of the characters is made as if real and don't forget the extraordinary quality of the writing❤️❤️❤️
Nice story, I like it 🤩🤩🤩. Di tunggu up selanjutnya Thor, tiap bab semakin membuat penasaran. Nggak nyesel baca ini, up nya yang banyak ya Thor.
sukaaaaaaa bngetttt sama alur ceritanyaaaa. semangat buat penulisnya. recommended banget pokonya, di tunggu chapter selanjutnya🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Keren banget, suka ... Ceritanya bikin aku hanyut terbawa arus ... Karakternya kuat banget, ga sia2 aku mampir ke sini, aaaaa lop lop pokoknya ❤️
waduuuuh.. kereeeen bgtt. sebenrnya ceritanya menariik tp saya aja yg oon english nya..haha..tpi saya baca pkk google translet koq..haha semngtt thor nulisnya..
ceritanya menarik banget untuk dibaca, meskipun aku nggak pinter bahasa Inggris hihi 😁tapi penggunaan kata²nya disini sangat mudah dipahami bikin penasaran sama kelanjutannya. Di tunggu next nya ya kakak author Semangattt🥰🥰
it's quite interesting to read. i love how yo to describe the character. keep going, thor. 🥰🥰🥰 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
wow... this a good story. I can't stop reading it. this is very interesting and perfectly. fighting for author 😘❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
story which interesting, good concep, plot cool. The writing also neat and attractive, continue keep going ther, spirit. next Thor. thanks.
The story is cool, it makes the reader feel like the plot is really interesting. Go straight to my collection, continue thor.. still curious ya..
I AM SORRY i am not a fan of NTR I mean I know there's not proper NTR here but i don't like even a hint of it in my reading preference and i don't mean it only from a male character liking pov but also if it's female main character based as I have little psychopathic tendency i like when even if mc does found out then he make her life miserable instantly and not just play with her games. I mean like what's stopping me from shooting a 7mm in both of there's body on my own property. i am rich, just make them vanish from the world i Mean like this World doesn't have mana or ki,qi or any supernatural element to save her or him from me I mean death serve all well and what is there that money can't solve. And don't take me seriously that's how I am. So sorry if it hurts somebody.
Spoiler de révélation First the concept of the story is truly a breath of fresh air, but I do not know how the story has such an overall good rating. Yes, it's decent,but the writing quality is poor at best. There are a lot of gaps in the wording that just plain don't make sense. It also is obvious that the author isn't native English speaker because the translation is shoddy. Don't trust all the reviews they're just heeping praise with no criticism to help the author fix the mistakes which shows they're probably mostly paid reviews. Some may not but I'm not multilingual so I don't understand most of the reviews.
Oh my, God! I know there's something Sofia hide... Haaaaaa! Oke! Stay cool😏 It's oke! It's oke... Right! Nico! I know you have a big plans for this! So... Show me that you can make Sofia more, more, more, more than regret😁😁 hihihi... btw... i like this story, Sistah ❤❤
this story about dutche and her love, so romantic. i not yet this story since i am 23 years old[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Wow English story... the story just soo amazing... 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩 with good plot and storyline... Fighting author 💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪💪
waww this story excellent!! very nice thanks author cause you make this novel. fighting author, 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥💐 🔥
an interesting story with a mainstream plot and good language style. Good job, Thor! Can't wait to read the next part. Fightingg! 😍😍😍😍
Good story. I really like every description made by the author. In my opinion, the theme chosen is very unique, it makes the reader can be immersed in it
I can say that the novel draw my interest. The novel was typical Indonesia's romance story but the plot to uncover mystery of MC's wife is something unique. It make me curious and teased me to continue reading the next chapter. I can't wait to know the end. The novel have a few grammar errors and hard to digest paragraph but I'm sure, it will improved as the chapters keep growing. Lastly, keep the spirit up, Ayu_Kristin. We, the readers, cheers for you.
Semangat menulis terus, kak. Aku belum baca sekarang tapi dari blurbnya udah menarik dan bakal aku baca kalau udah ada waktu luang nantinya. semangat terus kak[img=faceslap][img=recommend]
Just reading the synopsis already guessed this story would be sad.😢😢😢 I put it on the shelf first! I like it! Cheers, Author! 😊😊😊😚😚😚
This novel is so cool! Highly recommended for someone who likes mystery genre. Okay, waiting for the next part, Sis! 🔥❤️[img=update][img=exp]
Suka banget sama ceritanya yang menghanyutkan dan bikin baper, bener2 cocok buat pacaan saat dirumah aja yang entah kapan akan berakhir ini. Lanjut ya thor I like it so much muach much
cool story, always addictive and can't stop reading. the presentation really makes me drift with the content of the story which is really that good
Mantap jiwa thor!! Meski aku agak kesulitan dalam membaca cerita bahasa English tapi dengan bantuan translete aku jadi tahu alur dalam cerita. sukses selalu thor
I finally found this story. many plots are so surprising to me. I can no longer imagine how that perfect life can change in a matter of time
Walaupun baca sambil terjemahin, tapi ceritanya beneran bagus. Karakternya juga kuat, pokoknya suka banget sama alurnya. Ditunggu lanjutannya, ya.
This is an amazing and understandable chapter, I really enjoyed it Sis, waiting for the next one[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The first part was to arouse the curiosity of the reader, nice job for the writer. I hope you get an update on that part soon. I can't wait. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The story is very good and interesting, the depiction of the characters is made as if real and don't forget the extraordinary quality of the writing❤️❤️❤️
Nice story, I like it 🤩🤩🤩. Di tunggu up selanjutnya Thor, tiap bab semakin membuat penasaran. Nggak nyesel baca ini, up nya yang banyak ya Thor.
sukaaaaaaa bngetttt sama alur ceritanyaaaa. semangat buat penulisnya. recommended banget pokonya, di tunggu chapter selanjutnya🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
Keren banget, suka ... Ceritanya bikin aku hanyut terbawa arus ... Karakternya kuat banget, ga sia2 aku mampir ke sini, aaaaa lop lop pokoknya ❤️
waduuuuh.. kereeeen bgtt. sebenrnya ceritanya menariik tp saya aja yg oon english nya..haha..tpi saya baca pkk google translet koq..haha semngtt thor nulisnya..
ceritanya menarik banget untuk dibaca, meskipun aku nggak pinter bahasa Inggris hihi 😁tapi penggunaan kata²nya disini sangat mudah dipahami bikin penasaran sama kelanjutannya. Di tunggu next nya ya kakak author Semangattt🥰🥰
it's quite interesting to read. i love how yo to describe the character. keep going, thor. 🥰🥰🥰 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰
wow... this a good story. I can't stop reading it. this is very interesting and perfectly. fighting for author 😘❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
story which interesting, good concep, plot cool. The writing also neat and attractive, continue keep going ther, spirit. next Thor. thanks.
The story is cool, it makes the reader feel like the plot is really interesting. Go straight to my collection, continue thor.. still curious ya..
I AM SORRY i am not a fan of NTR I mean I know there's not proper NTR here but i don't like even a hint of it in my reading preference and i don't mean it only from a male character liking pov but also if it's female main character based as I have little psychopathic tendency i like when even if mc does found out then he make her life miserable instantly and not just play with her games. I mean like what's stopping me from shooting a 7mm in both of there's body on my own property. i am rich, just make them vanish from the world i Mean like this World doesn't have mana or ki,qi or any supernatural element to save her or him from me I mean death serve all well and what is there that money can't solve. And don't take me seriously that's how I am. So sorry if it hurts somebody.
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