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most reviews are just spam, you can read and lose your brain cells but i have tried and i gave up, never understand why always make mc beta like that.
nice harem good mc nice fights nice backstory good world-building good characters good writing good grammar so in conclusions just go read it
Yoo! I've binging to this until chapter, This quite pleasant to read. Easy to read, since English ain't my mother tongue. But anyway, Imma catch up with latest chapter within a day, at this rate. Keep it foxy.
honest review. The MC is more like a retard for me. A brainless king transmigrated into a body of a boy. he's just stupid! he already knows he's transmigrated but he still can't get over of being a king! he can't read his situation! he doesn't even have a plan. I only read upto chapter 5. I don't know what happened to the later chapters but, I hate this type of MC. ....,............................................................................................................................... and the characters. there's not much of an impact! sigh. I hope it developed to the later chapters. try this. this is just my review upto chapter 5. wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwqqwwwwwweeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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¡Este libro está lleno de aventuras! En términos de construcción del mundo, creo que es bastante colorido. A juzgar por los primeros capítulos, ¡estoy seguro de que los siguientes capítulos estarán llenos de suspenso y acción! La historia también tiene un buen ritmo. Buen trabajo y por favor continúa[img=recomendar]
me encanta tiene un fondo muy grande la historia y tiene gran potencial en las combinaciones que puede aser la historia también el personaje principal es débil pero con un solo ataque absoluto la historia tiene una buena trama de aren
Exp sect Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehejehehehehehehehejehehejehejejejejejejejejjejejejejejejjejehehejejejehejejjejejejejejejej hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehejehehehehehehehejehehejehejejejejejejejejjejejejejejejjejehehejejejehejejjejejejejejejej
Saludos Autor eh visto los comentarios de esta novela así que mañana comienza ah verla se ve que es nueva aquí en la webnovel así que por los comentarios se ve que es buena comensare ah verla ya que me llamó la atención del MC que es débil pero sus waifus son fuertes uwu espero seguir esta novela con los lectores y :$ que también sea larga la historia :v saludos
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This book is full of adventures! In terms of world-building, I think it is quite colorful. Judging by the first few chapters, I am sure the succeeding chapters will be full of suspense and action! The story also has nice pacing. Good job and please continue [img=recommend]
The author never fails to amaze me with his works. This one is one of the best written book of the author and I relaly like how the story progresses, The harem is beautifully potrayed and I like the characters.
Hmm. So, I'm being honest here. In my view, this story is interesting. Also, the character design and the way the story is ongoing are fascinating to the extent that it grabs readers' attention. I'm not going to give any spoilers because it would be better if you read it. In the end, good work, writer, for this wonderful work.
I must say you authors are really inspiring, i myself i'm an author, the story is really interesting i just hope that someday i make a story as good and captivating as yours is.
Well, there's nothing much to say as everyone knows about the appreciable, quality chapters author provides in his all distinct novels. All I want to say is to shower PS and comments and get this author to TOP ASAP!!
The author is head driven to give everyone content so I expect updates to be frequent and plentiful. The development is steady and you arent thrown a lot of character at first but you get to learn about each on in a progressive fashion that makes it easy to make connections. The character design and world building is typical for this type of novel, however it seems to have its own little corner of excitement and humor to enjoy. The only thing I can see I have a problem with is with the flow and transitions are were hard for me to catch requiring me to re read some sections to grasp what was going on after I felt lost. But with all novels on WebNovel, they arent all being masterfully written by top authors and edited by a full team to catch eash issue so I still recommend this novel 100% if you like a leveling system.
incredible, I #@#@ recommend it xD ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸
Hi... Author here. So, there’s not much to say because it is only the first 5 Chaps. Hope you guys love reading it as much as I love writing it. Goodbye
Okay, guys... Now that I have written 51 chapters, I think I have an idea about the story. So... Here are some things that you could expect from this story, 1) The MC’s personality is mostly trash, but as he develops, his personality becomes much better. 2) Do not expect an OP MC. This MC is literally a ‘non-leveling’ mage. How he handles things... Well... In the middle of the book, stuff happens and he manages to find his own ways in this, transmigrated life. 3) The characters... Well, in this book, the story focuses on many characters instead of just the MC. So, get ready to read some chaps where MC doesn’t even show up! 4) Harem. The Harem in this book is... I don’t know what to say. Guess it’s going well because no one actually told me any errors in it. (Don’t expect MC to have 3 or 2 girls only... And! He has his reasons for this!) 5) I can only release 12 - 17 chapters because this book is a bit hard to plot with the many characters and the arcs. So... You’re in for a long ride. I try my best to keep the immersion of the readers, so I hope you guys like it. If you see any errors, do let me know in the comments! Also... I am trying to be a full-time author so I need all the support I can get from all the readers :’> Also... Do not judge the book from the first 20 or so chapters. Read past 40 before you drop. At first look, the MC seems stupid but he’s not actually. [Spoiler] It’s just some mental damage. Do enjoy the read everyone. I hope there’s something that every one of you likes in the book, because it may have many colors.
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most reviews are just spam, you can read and lose your brain cells but i have tried and i gave up, never understand why always make mc beta like that.
nice harem good mc nice fights nice backstory good world-building good characters good writing good grammar so in conclusions just go read it
Yoo! I've binging to this until chapter, This quite pleasant to read. Easy to read, since English ain't my mother tongue. But anyway, Imma catch up with latest chapter within a day, at this rate. Keep it foxy.
honest review. The MC is more like a retard for me. A brainless king transmigrated into a body of a boy. he's just stupid! he already knows he's transmigrated but he still can't get over of being a king! he can't read his situation! he doesn't even have a plan. I only read upto chapter 5. I don't know what happened to the later chapters but, I hate this type of MC. ....,............................................................................................................................... and the characters. there's not much of an impact! sigh. I hope it developed to the later chapters. try this. this is just my review upto chapter 5. wwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwqqwwwwwweeeewwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
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¡Este libro está lleno de aventuras! En términos de construcción del mundo, creo que es bastante colorido. A juzgar por los primeros capítulos, ¡estoy seguro de que los siguientes capítulos estarán llenos de suspenso y acción! La historia también tiene un buen ritmo. Buen trabajo y por favor continúa[img=recomendar]
me encanta tiene un fondo muy grande la historia y tiene gran potencial en las combinaciones que puede aser la historia también el personaje principal es débil pero con un solo ataque absoluto la historia tiene una buena trama de aren
Exp sect Hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehejehehehehehehehejehehejehejejejejejejejejjejejejejejejjejehehejejejehejejjejejejejejejej hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehehejehehehehehehehejehehejehejejejejejejejejjejejejejejejjejehehejejejehejejjejejejejejejej
Saludos Autor eh visto los comentarios de esta novela así que mañana comienza ah verla se ve que es nueva aquí en la webnovel así que por los comentarios se ve que es buena comensare ah verla ya que me llamó la atención del MC que es débil pero sus waifus son fuertes uwu espero seguir esta novela con los lectores y :$ que también sea larga la historia :v saludos
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This book is full of adventures! In terms of world-building, I think it is quite colorful. Judging by the first few chapters, I am sure the succeeding chapters will be full of suspense and action! The story also has nice pacing. Good job and please continue [img=recommend]
The author never fails to amaze me with his works. This one is one of the best written book of the author and I relaly like how the story progresses, The harem is beautifully potrayed and I like the characters.
Hmm. So, I'm being honest here. In my view, this story is interesting. Also, the character design and the way the story is ongoing are fascinating to the extent that it grabs readers' attention. I'm not going to give any spoilers because it would be better if you read it. In the end, good work, writer, for this wonderful work.
I must say you authors are really inspiring, i myself i'm an author, the story is really interesting i just hope that someday i make a story as good and captivating as yours is.
Well, there's nothing much to say as everyone knows about the appreciable, quality chapters author provides in his all distinct novels. All I want to say is to shower PS and comments and get this author to TOP ASAP!!
The author is head driven to give everyone content so I expect updates to be frequent and plentiful. The development is steady and you arent thrown a lot of character at first but you get to learn about each on in a progressive fashion that makes it easy to make connections. The character design and world building is typical for this type of novel, however it seems to have its own little corner of excitement and humor to enjoy. The only thing I can see I have a problem with is with the flow and transitions are were hard for me to catch requiring me to re read some sections to grasp what was going on after I felt lost. But with all novels on WebNovel, they arent all being masterfully written by top authors and edited by a full team to catch eash issue so I still recommend this novel 100% if you like a leveling system.
incredible, I #@#@ recommend it xD ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸ ⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸⸸
Hi... Author here. So, there’s not much to say because it is only the first 5 Chaps. Hope you guys love reading it as much as I love writing it. Goodbye
Okay, guys... Now that I have written 51 chapters, I think I have an idea about the story. So... Here are some things that you could expect from this story, 1) The MC’s personality is mostly trash, but as he develops, his personality becomes much better. 2) Do not expect an OP MC. This MC is literally a ‘non-leveling’ mage. How he handles things... Well... In the middle of the book, stuff happens and he manages to find his own ways in this, transmigrated life. 3) The characters... Well, in this book, the story focuses on many characters instead of just the MC. So, get ready to read some chaps where MC doesn’t even show up! 4) Harem. The Harem in this book is... I don’t know what to say. Guess it’s going well because no one actually told me any errors in it. (Don’t expect MC to have 3 or 2 girls only... And! He has his reasons for this!) 5) I can only release 12 - 17 chapters because this book is a bit hard to plot with the many characters and the arcs. So... You’re in for a long ride. I try my best to keep the immersion of the readers, so I hope you guys like it. If you see any errors, do let me know in the comments! Also... I am trying to be a full-time author so I need all the support I can get from all the readers :’> Also... Do not judge the book from the first 20 or so chapters. Read past 40 before you drop. At first look, the MC seems stupid but he’s not actually. [Spoiler] It’s just some mental damage. Do enjoy the read everyone. I hope there’s something that every one of you likes in the book, because it may have many colors.