3Critiques
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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overall is nice story I hope they can update regularly. waiting for the next chapter. I hope get to enjoy it[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Great story to read. I kept wanting to read more and more from this book. The characters are interesting too. I wonder what will happen next.
Writing needs to be improved. Characters still got holes in their background story. As for the world, need to be explained more in detail. So far is good. The story is interesting and I see it updates regularly too.
overall is nice story I hope they can update regularly. waiting for the next chapter. I hope get to enjoy it[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
Great story to read. I kept wanting to read more and more from this book. The characters are interesting too. I wonder what will happen next.
Writing needs to be improved. Characters still got holes in their background story. As for the world, need to be explained more in detail. So far is good. The story is interesting and I see it updates regularly too.