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I really hated the first 20 chapter or so because of main female leads character. Not because of her personality more of how controlling/possessive she was over MC felt. BUT! It was a fun read :D ... well, until chapter 70 or so. I think you should've ended it there. I feel like story started to stretch to nowhere after MC and his family got overpowered abilities and they were able to train in controlled environment (aka time funcky BS). but like it was a good time pass so thanks! keep doing what you do man. Just keep up the good work.
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The only down side his the women,gamer mind and level cap Because the guy is literally an object or a gigilo to is harem and his gamer mind is manipulating him loving his harem members
I really hated the first 20 chapter or so because of main female leads character. Not because of her personality more of how controlling/possessive she was over MC felt. BUT! It was a fun read :D ... well, until chapter 70 or so. I think you should've ended it there. I feel like story started to stretch to nowhere after MC and his family got overpowered abilities and they were able to train in controlled environment (aka time funcky BS). but like it was a good time pass so thanks! keep doing what you do man. Just keep up the good work.
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The only down side his the women,gamer mind and level cap Because the guy is literally an object or a gigilo to is harem and his gamer mind is manipulating him loving his harem members