The rise of the pervert primordial

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Pacifist_Warrior

~It is good, just one simple problem author, we need pic of characters for visualisation of story and stuff 'cough' segs 'cough' ..........,~😏

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Mandarin_PAPA_754

too cool mam too cool best primordial book......hats off to you the great author of this magnificent book.....your suck shall thrive on...you have my heartfelt blessings

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CapaxInfiniti

I would like to have given this story a better rating but the author writes something that could be really fun and very enjoyable and instead it turns out to feel really, really drawn and dragged out. Don't get me wrong it has some solid moments. But those moments are vastly drowned out and over shadowed by things being drawn out. For example: There is a chapter that consists basically of just asking how a couple people slept that night. I can handle things being slow paced but only if it feels natural in the writing. In this case it just feels like things are being intentionally dragged along. That said I will probably continue reading every now and then but it most certainly wouldn't be something I'd recommend to others.

LV 15

Witherdale

I am amazed. I have been continuously reading this novel…. I can’t put it down. Story is good, the scope of the universe building is good, and the characters are still being themselves is good. The only difficulty I am experiencing is the multitude of cultivation realms and remembering them. There are a lot and the names aren’t easy to remember. Otherwise, this is a terrific novel.

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HazeUniverse_1

story is great but you should use commas and punctuation marks brackets etc and make it more Readable overall it is nice I will support you with power stones so keep it up bro

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MoWuyue

its goooooooooooooooooooooodddddddd thats all.. hahaha

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Mo_Wuyue

harem harem. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. the story is awesome and there is some comedy

LV 4

Wu_Lifan

oh i just forgot to write a review to this one. .. this novel is good and the harem is nice, no one left or something like that. .. and im currently at chapter 382 or 362?

LV 4

Aster_Drage

all i will say is "its super duper good"

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T_Qin_Wushuang_T

love the work and the characters are freaking enjoyable

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Mo_Wuyue

absolutely love everything, like the characters interaction between and etch

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Op_FTW1

Probably one of my favorites on here, but in later chapters it gets extremely drawn out. Like 6 chapters of doing the business back to back to back then followed by a chapter or 2 of story movement followed by individual dates for another several chapters. I need storyline movement to keep me interested.

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daoist566y9n

best novel ever...make it 1500-2000 chapters novel please

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_Nyx_Wk_

Read till chapter 338 and so far the story is great.i like mc's personality.his interactions with harem girls are really good.there is no forced romance.also there is no yuri and ntr so far.so its perfect for my taste. The story is bit slow paced but i like the development.action scenes are also good.so overall it's a good read.5 stars for me....

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Narcii_9dar

Everything about this novel is good except the mc's progressing. I mean there so many level to the top that it will take literally 1000 chp to finish pbly. Thats why I currently stopped at 189 and waiting for at least 500 chp. Otherwise everything seems perfect to me especially the harem. I like how the girls get along so well.

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Mario_1359

autor , please promise you will complete this great story . we need to know . i fell in love with this book. please author write till the end no matter what. we need you thank you for yout effort

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Roman123

Yes, it is really refreshing, there are taboos, there is interest and much more, very pleasant reading and the ms is very pleasing, the author knows how to present, very nice, thank you.

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Mike_Ferguson_1628

I wanted to know if you were planning on releasing chapter again soon it’s been a long time since we’ve had steady chapter releases