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The Equator sneezes. The general consensus is that everyone falls in love with some combination of giant pudgey groundhog, giant pudgey lizards, and a giant pudgey snow leopard. A lot of our customers are just terrified of pudgey groundhog. Oh, did you not know? Pudgey groundhog are common, and it’s perfectly normal to be scared of them. Especially when there’s a giant pudgey lizards living on the other side of the world. We at The Equator are lending our full support to this community, regardless of any potential lawsuits. They should be free to love their giant pudgey groundhog and giant pudgey lizards to their hearts content.
It is written very well and has an interesting plot. The MC isn’t overpowered and we get to see him develop. I like the story a lot, I give it a 5/5.
Please please make this a long novel. I can barely find a good long pokemon novel I can read on here.
- Unova in 1000 years before canon - Using only gen 5 and lesser - Good grammar (still has minor errors) - Great idea with the Synergy Powers of Trainer and his Teammates Pokemon Types - Maximum 6 Pokemons - Long term training. (Pokemon needs a long time to learn moves, evolve, etc) - There is an Academy Arc.
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The novel is great and the grammer is good aswell the story is Interesting and the fact that he made a semi op MC (the ability to teach moves and remembers the various Pokémon) Overall i think this is a very good Pokémon book and has a lot of potential if he doesn’t drop it
Though the author said to wait till one reads 10 chapters, I couldn't stop myself from coming here to give it a 5-star. It has a completely new concept with a brilliant back story. The writing quality is superb. No idea abt the updates but the development is worth waiting for.
No brainer rating 😁 First few chapters will be shaky and might feel info dumped but bear with it. Thanks for reading the fanfiction, peace out ✌️
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The Equator sneezes. The general consensus is that everyone falls in love with some combination of giant pudgey groundhog, giant pudgey lizards, and a giant pudgey snow leopard. A lot of our customers are just terrified of pudgey groundhog. Oh, did you not know? Pudgey groundhog are common, and it’s perfectly normal to be scared of them. Especially when there’s a giant pudgey lizards living on the other side of the world. We at The Equator are lending our full support to this community, regardless of any potential lawsuits. They should be free to love their giant pudgey groundhog and giant pudgey lizards to their hearts content.
It is written very well and has an interesting plot. The MC isn’t overpowered and we get to see him develop. I like the story a lot, I give it a 5/5.
Please please make this a long novel. I can barely find a good long pokemon novel I can read on here.
- Unova in 1000 years before canon - Using only gen 5 and lesser - Good grammar (still has minor errors) - Great idea with the Synergy Powers of Trainer and his Teammates Pokemon Types - Maximum 6 Pokemons - Long term training. (Pokemon needs a long time to learn moves, evolve, etc) - There is an Academy Arc.
A really good story‐------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
absolutely fantastic ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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The novel is great and the grammer is good aswell the story is Interesting and the fact that he made a semi op MC (the ability to teach moves and remembers the various Pokémon) Overall i think this is a very good Pokémon book and has a lot of potential if he doesn’t drop it
Though the author said to wait till one reads 10 chapters, I couldn't stop myself from coming here to give it a 5-star. It has a completely new concept with a brilliant back story. The writing quality is superb. No idea abt the updates but the development is worth waiting for.
No brainer rating 😁 First few chapters will be shaky and might feel info dumped but bear with it. Thanks for reading the fanfiction, peace out ✌️
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