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So far it has been oddly chill for me, which felt relaxing. The first ten or so chapters are more of an introduction and everything feels nicely paced. Good work Author!
I read up to chapter 50 (the paywall) and it's really good so far I really want to read more but cannot justify spending that type of money on webnovel. so I guess I'm dropping here. I recommend this if you have the 20 something dollars to buy the rest of it.
Rushed. Thats the biggest probelm. MC gets everything handet to him at the Start. SSS+ abilty, all the girls and huge plot armor. The characters all feel bland and there is literally no world building what so ever. Dropped at chapter 80.
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5 chapters in and it's already amazing. I came for the yanderes but it's way much more than just that. It has an actual story and doesn't just focus on the characters. Amazing read overall
Great story I still remember when it had only 28 chapters ach time run soo fast but I stared to read your another work and waiting for more chapter
love the way this story is going and the plot and character development is great I'm definitely adding this book to my library, keep up the good work author❤️
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Author, this novel is over? or did you give it a rushed ending? I say this because it has few chapters :c I await your reply soon, to know if it is worth reading or not xd Thanks for your time :v
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Sky! Sky! Sky! Sky! Sky! Sky! - Clearly the best girl by far. Although my issue with her is that she seems too good to be true. Too good to be true characters undoubtly always have something that is later revealed to go "Ah, I knew she was too good to be true." Which would make it so the MC doesn't take the final gap into accepting her, causing drama. What do you think Author? There's no way Sky wins so easily despite how perfect she is as a yandere. Too predictable! Emma is pretty interesting and if the author takes her route it can be really amazing or at least for development. From a complete stuck-up, privileged sociopath to someone who completely reforms and understands her sins. Not asking for a complete reform, but she has some much potential to make it so that she becomes a very likable as a character. As for Ashly.... yeah um.... yeah uh... anyone but her please. I really hope you don't turn the mc into a crazy masochist. From normal conventions, she would be considered the main girl. Plz no no no no no. Overall- Enjoyable. Nothing amazing, though Emma really could be amazing. It's decent! I hope the author makes it so there would be only 1 winner. As a story about yanderes, it doesn't make sense for such psychopaths to share. So please don't! Keep up the good work!
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Author, I have yet to read your novel ! But I want to ask you how you Named your novel, What the meaning of your novel's name. "Yandere 😂"🙏
haven’ even read it but i saw yandere so already 5 star but is there actually any yandere, just looking at the chapter tittles i don’t see any signs of yanderes
Writing quality is amazing and though he will never correct anything he generally won't have to. Story Development is okay. Certain things I question (Ashly being one of them.) While others are quite well done (Emma and sky.) Character design. Lemme just say. Ashly makes me want to have her grow some balls so I can put them under a hydraulic press. Everyone else is well done. Although mc can feel a little bland sometimes. The actual designs are cool such as water hair in the newer chps. Updates come pretty fast. This might be my last post here if I can't keep up. World is still in need of building. But it feels a little bland and mundane. Nothing super new here. Overall a good novel. World building is a bit weak but the characters are compelling. **** Ashly though.
Really like this story and would love if it does not get dropped. Regarding the story, all Charakter have there own charm, and I will not write more regarding that. The only thing which is missing a little, is some background chapters about the past of the mc with the girls, to explain there obsession with the mc.
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I have been following since the beginning! I am hooked! So many surprising twists and plot points- please keep going I want to see how this turns out!!
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Looks great so far, only chaps in and I'm already hooked! Hope there will be many more chaps to enjoy since reading is a joy of life for me!!! Good luck author and keep up the good work ;)
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TO ALL MY READERS! I LOVE YOU! YOU'RE AMAZING AND I WANNA SMOOCH YOU ON THE MOUTH! ok maybe not.. BUT I MIGHT! JUST YOU WAIT! I'M GONNA KEEP WRITING K BYEE
in my opinion the big paragraphs are one of the reasons it is annoying to read. they should have wrote smaller so it would pick interest of reader more easily
So far it has been oddly chill for me, which felt relaxing. The first ten or so chapters are more of an introduction and everything feels nicely paced. Good work Author!
I read up to chapter 50 (the paywall) and it's really good so far I really want to read more but cannot justify spending that type of money on webnovel. so I guess I'm dropping here. I recommend this if you have the 20 something dollars to buy the rest of it.
Rushed. Thats the biggest probelm. MC gets everything handet to him at the Start. SSS+ abilty, all the girls and huge plot armor. The characters all feel bland and there is literally no world building what so ever. Dropped at chapter 80.
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5 chapters in and it's already amazing. I came for the yanderes but it's way much more than just that. It has an actual story and doesn't just focus on the characters. Amazing read overall
Great story I still remember when it had only 28 chapters ach time run soo fast but I stared to read your another work and waiting for more chapter
love the way this story is going and the plot and character development is great I'm definitely adding this book to my library, keep up the good work author❤️
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Author, this novel is over? or did you give it a rushed ending? I say this because it has few chapters :c I await your reply soon, to know if it is worth reading or not xd Thanks for your time :v
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Sky! Sky! Sky! Sky! Sky! Sky! - Clearly the best girl by far. Although my issue with her is that she seems too good to be true. Too good to be true characters undoubtly always have something that is later revealed to go "Ah, I knew she was too good to be true." Which would make it so the MC doesn't take the final gap into accepting her, causing drama. What do you think Author? There's no way Sky wins so easily despite how perfect she is as a yandere. Too predictable! Emma is pretty interesting and if the author takes her route it can be really amazing or at least for development. From a complete stuck-up, privileged sociopath to someone who completely reforms and understands her sins. Not asking for a complete reform, but she has some much potential to make it so that she becomes a very likable as a character. As for Ashly.... yeah um.... yeah uh... anyone but her please. I really hope you don't turn the mc into a crazy masochist. From normal conventions, she would be considered the main girl. Plz no no no no no. Overall- Enjoyable. Nothing amazing, though Emma really could be amazing. It's decent! I hope the author makes it so there would be only 1 winner. As a story about yanderes, it doesn't make sense for such psychopaths to share. So please don't! Keep up the good work!
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Author, I have yet to read your novel ! But I want to ask you how you Named your novel, What the meaning of your novel's name. "Yandere 😂"🙏
haven’ even read it but i saw yandere so already 5 star but is there actually any yandere, just looking at the chapter tittles i don’t see any signs of yanderes
Writing quality is amazing and though he will never correct anything he generally won't have to. Story Development is okay. Certain things I question (Ashly being one of them.) While others are quite well done (Emma and sky.) Character design. Lemme just say. Ashly makes me want to have her grow some balls so I can put them under a hydraulic press. Everyone else is well done. Although mc can feel a little bland sometimes. The actual designs are cool such as water hair in the newer chps. Updates come pretty fast. This might be my last post here if I can't keep up. World is still in need of building. But it feels a little bland and mundane. Nothing super new here. Overall a good novel. World building is a bit weak but the characters are compelling. **** Ashly though.
Really like this story and would love if it does not get dropped. Regarding the story, all Charakter have there own charm, and I will not write more regarding that. The only thing which is missing a little, is some background chapters about the past of the mc with the girls, to explain there obsession with the mc.
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I have been following since the beginning! I am hooked! So many surprising twists and plot points- please keep going I want to see how this turns out!!
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Spoiler de révélation Looks great so far, only chaps in and I'm already hooked! Hope there will be many more chaps to enjoy since reading is a joy of life for me!!! Good luck author and keep up the good work ;)
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TO ALL MY READERS! I LOVE YOU! YOU'RE AMAZING AND I WANNA SMOOCH YOU ON THE MOUTH! ok maybe not.. BUT I MIGHT! JUST YOU WAIT! I'M GONNA KEEP WRITING K BYEE
in my opinion the big paragraphs are one of the reasons it is annoying to read. they should have wrote smaller so it would pick interest of reader more easily