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i wanted so bad to like this book, but even after half and skipping some that was just plan cringe i still couldnt like it. Pls re do this book or make a new one
To start of, the MC is chaotic evil from chapter 1 until chapter 210(where i gave up). His personality is horrid and he throws himself a pity party any chance he gets. There’s no character development or any redeemable characteristic in the Mc, he has his bright moments but they only seem bright because of his extremely high levels of stupidity. The system is the thing i liked the most in this novel aswell as the move pools shown. If you want an MC that just does whatever he wants with basically no bottom line you’ll like this fic. (He r@pes a human later on) If you can get through all of that, The story itself is good, interesting premise and he gets some interesting Pokémon as his reincarnations.
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Just finished the story after a good few days of binge reading and I can say that there were definitely many ups and downs throughout the story; regardless of saying this I can definitely say that it kept me interested throughout. There is a lot of content and hard work put into the creation of this story, which I can appreciate. On the other hand, what could be improved on is the points in the story where, I would say important, characters are suddenly nowhere to be found without knowing what they're doing (e.g sparkakus in the ending volumes or when aurora is all of a sudden against Mike, which does get explained after was rather spontaneous). The ending was a part of the authors own style but I would've hoped for a more fleshed out ending but it is acceptable, not to be rude or anything, but I felt that it was quite abrupt. Overall, it was a good read and I hope to see further works from yourself in the future. Thanks for the good work![img=recommend]
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I don't know what to say this first chapter and I can't understand anything then I try to read more but my head hurts
honestly it was fine in the first half of the story but after that it just goes downhill. I feel like the mc is getting weaker as time goes, he loses most of his fights and his personality is becoming worse plus the story is making less sense
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I'm liking the story that if I don't know if the joint is carried by the author or me while I read it, filling filling filling filling filling
the beginning of the story is very good but the longer the plot gets weirder and harder to understand......... ......................................................................................................................................................... ..........
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quite a nice story, like one you won't usually find. little bit of furry stuff, but still in a acceptable range. Mc has a unique personality, but the only thing I don't like are the grammar mistakes the fact the power system is hard to comprehend. otherwise, it's a good read.
Why does this have a harem tag if the MC is gonna reincarnate as a Pokemon? spoil me please . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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Warning warning warning. Other characters In the story know of his reincarnation and he is also pushed around by stronger people and abusivsive thots. 👎👎👎👎👎
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
Welp, I am losing braincells reading this, I regret listening to those 5star reviews lol I wonder why they like this? I can only describe the interaction in this story in two words 'Ooga Booga', you will understad once you try reading it.
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I loved the unique stein and the comedy is pretty funny. but the fic is full of grammatical mistakes and break the immersion most of the times. other than the mc all other character are extremely annoying and make difultty to read without hating them,the worse are the AI that make me want to stop read in many times because of her but because she don't appear to much it's tolerable. the one most irritating is risa she is extremely bossy, rude and annoying and for some reason mc take her as his mate( I nearly stopped read in here) another thing I dont like is how much time mc waste being a ratatta completely unecessary author could simple skip but not he goes and make a complete complex plot for mc first life as ratatta I found this extremely unbelievable how high is the level and potential of useles Pokemon like ratatta line and sparrow line even more so when we're talking about the begining of the fic, author already to much information in to little time making a exhaustive read. I really hope he edit and Smith out the chapter and many ridiculous thing that happen. something like a Pokemon with the power to strength the soul and even choose the talent of his offspring should be something coming from a lousy ambipom and a conspirance to kill Pokemon of route all in the first 15 chapters of the fanfic.
Nice fanfic where you can find a funny if a bit psychotic secondary characters. The story doesn't follow the norm of pokémon fanfics (trainers and gyms) and is set (in the time of the review) in the past, so you get surprises.
Histoire très amusante, MC pas cheat avec un système inutile. Le MC est un rattatac, et va travail dur pendant longtemps pour s'entraîner. J'aime beaucoup et ai hâte de voir la suite. Continuez comme ça.
Story Development especially in the beginning wasn't great, if you got a problem with a character too bad it likely wont change and the writing quality isn't that bad. Would I recommend you read this, yh it's my story, of course I'll tell you to read it. If there's anything truly worth remembered would be individuals. Don't look at it just from one perspective as this story will show you some from plenty, especially the MC
i wanted so bad to like this book, but even after half and skipping some that was just plan cringe i still couldnt like it. Pls re do this book or make a new one
To start of, the MC is chaotic evil from chapter 1 until chapter 210(where i gave up). His personality is horrid and he throws himself a pity party any chance he gets. There’s no character development or any redeemable characteristic in the Mc, he has his bright moments but they only seem bright because of his extremely high levels of stupidity. The system is the thing i liked the most in this novel aswell as the move pools shown. If you want an MC that just does whatever he wants with basically no bottom line you’ll like this fic. (He r@pes a human later on) If you can get through all of that, The story itself is good, interesting premise and he gets some interesting Pokémon as his reincarnations.
Spoiler de révélation Just finished the story after a good few days of binge reading and I can say that there were definitely many ups and downs throughout the story; regardless of saying this I can definitely say that it kept me interested throughout. There is a lot of content and hard work put into the creation of this story, which I can appreciate. On the other hand, what could be improved on is the points in the story where, I would say important, characters are suddenly nowhere to be found without knowing what they're doing (e.g sparkakus in the ending volumes or when aurora is all of a sudden against Mike, which does get explained after was rather spontaneous). The ending was a part of the authors own style but I would've hoped for a more fleshed out ending but it is acceptable, not to be rude or anything, but I felt that it was quite abrupt. Overall, it was a good read and I hope to see further works from yourself in the future. Thanks for the good work![img=recommend]
Spoiler de révélation I don't know what to say this first chapter and I can't understand anything then I try to read more but my head hurts
honestly it was fine in the first half of the story but after that it just goes downhill. I feel like the mc is getting weaker as time goes, he loses most of his fights and his personality is becoming worse plus the story is making less sense
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I'm liking the story that if I don't know if the joint is carried by the author or me while I read it, filling filling filling filling filling
the beginning of the story is very good but the longer the plot gets weirder and harder to understand......... ......................................................................................................................................................... ..........
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quite a nice story, like one you won't usually find. little bit of furry stuff, but still in a acceptable range. Mc has a unique personality, but the only thing I don't like are the grammar mistakes the fact the power system is hard to comprehend. otherwise, it's a good read.
Why does this have a harem tag if the MC is gonna reincarnate as a Pokemon? spoil me please . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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Spoiler de révélation Warning warning warning. Other characters In the story know of his reincarnation and he is also pushed around by stronger people and abusivsive thots. 👎👎👎👎👎
Say hello to the one who... Hello!! Are we going to review this? Yes, we are!! Can we just give it 5-star and left? No!! But we just did... LOL!!
Welp, I am losing braincells reading this, I regret listening to those 5star reviews lol I wonder why they like this? I can only describe the interaction in this story in two words 'Ooga Booga', you will understad once you try reading it.
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Doing this so the FF will get on the leader board will delete when there is 11 reviews
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I loved the unique stein and the comedy is pretty funny. but the fic is full of grammatical mistakes and break the immersion most of the times. other than the mc all other character are extremely annoying and make difultty to read without hating them,the worse are the AI that make me want to stop read in many times because of her but because she don't appear to much it's tolerable. the one most irritating is risa she is extremely bossy, rude and annoying and for some reason mc take her as his mate( I nearly stopped read in here) another thing I dont like is how much time mc waste being a ratatta completely unecessary author could simple skip but not he goes and make a complete complex plot for mc first life as ratatta I found this extremely unbelievable how high is the level and potential of useles Pokemon like ratatta line and sparrow line even more so when we're talking about the begining of the fic, author already to much information in to little time making a exhaustive read. I really hope he edit and Smith out the chapter and many ridiculous thing that happen. something like a Pokemon with the power to strength the soul and even choose the talent of his offspring should be something coming from a lousy ambipom and a conspirance to kill Pokemon of route all in the first 15 chapters of the fanfic.
Nice fanfic where you can find a funny if a bit psychotic secondary characters. The story doesn't follow the norm of pokémon fanfics (trainers and gyms) and is set (in the time of the review) in the past, so you get surprises.
Histoire très amusante, MC pas cheat avec un système inutile. Le MC est un rattatac, et va travail dur pendant longtemps pour s'entraîner. J'aime beaucoup et ai hâte de voir la suite. Continuez comme ça.
Story Development especially in the beginning wasn't great, if you got a problem with a character too bad it likely wont change and the writing quality isn't that bad. Would I recommend you read this, yh it's my story, of course I'll tell you to read it. If there's anything truly worth remembered would be individuals. Don't look at it just from one perspective as this story will show you some from plenty, especially the MC