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JosieGan has been doing an excellent job so far with this novel. Regarding the character design I have read a few novels involving the reincarnated immortal plot and many authors for some reason like making their MC's absolute clowns after reincarnating. The author did a great job even though MC maintains his memories/abilities he's not some GigaChad rushing into stupidly danger. He tactically thinks things through and plans accordingly. As for the writing quality considering the author isn't a native English speaker and English is his third or fourth chosen language I have had no issues following the authors writings. The only issue I came across are a few errors on the pronouns but I have noticed that those errors are slowly beginning to reduce. JosieGan pumps out two to three chapters daily. While frequently updating his other two books that are free which I highly recommended everyone to check out because they are great as well. As far World Background so far they are the typical continent's (North, South, West, East, and Central) but the author goes into detail throughout the novel explaining it so it becomes clear. There will be no 15-30 chapters spent explaining how it works.
Is there any continuation after they go to the upper realm? Since i know that he will become the ruler of his own universe since it was already mentioned at the other novel. I just want you to finished it till the end 🥹
barbaro como terminas la novela incompleta.... asi no... fuera de eso buena novela, pero de verdad dejaste a uno enganchado cuando se supone que empezará lo bueno
Just finished it, personally I liked it even though it got some minor spelling mistake it’s not that bad. Currently I don’t know the status of the 2nd book but hopefully I get to read it soon. Anyways thanks for the good read!🤝
Its a really good book, my only problem is that, like most of other harems, any other male is not allowed to be happy, at least in the first half of the book, at least the cousin shouldnt have died and much less, a virgin, it could even be good for the plot that the aunt gave herself to Tian after he rescued Xia Han and in the next book getting him the gf he wanted. But anyhow, I'm still waiting for the next book of Xia Tian
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At last I just finished reading yesterday and I hope can look forward your next adventure in saving his lovers relatives and his own mom & dad and defeat all his enemies and Fate. Well done keep up your work I’m looking forward and all the best.
I really liked this novel and honestly I can't wait to read the rest of their adventure in the higher kingdom.
No suelo poner a las novelas tanta puntuacion, pero esta se lo merece. Voy por el capitulo 339 y hasta el momento me gusta bastante la historia, personalmente a pesar de que el autor compara su novela por debajo de dual cultivator creo que esta es mejor para mi opinion en cuanto a firmar un contrato y que los seguidores se enfaden problema de ellos. Aun asi debo decir que para mi opinion desvaloraliza demasiado la opinion de los lectores. Independientemente de si tienen razon o no es la opinion de cada uno y deberia respetarse aunque luego abandonen o no la novela, cada uno tiene su opinion y su forma de ver la vida y se deberia aceptar como creador de contenido que eres y no solo lo haces para ti sino tambien para los lectores segun tu propia reseña y ya que estas escribiendo en una web para que otros lean tu novela. Mi sincera opinion lo digo porque he leido algunos comentarios dentro de la novela al final de cada pagina que personalmente por asi decirlo me llamo un poco la atencion para un creador de contenido que escribe para sus lectores y pide sus opiniones, pero luego las rechaza. Perdon si ofendo y sigue asi buena novela.
Actually it's a bit strange, why this novel and Joseigan's other works were not included in the WBO best category, instead other novels with bad storylines were included.
Author, I think someone is copying your novel. He changed names but the entire story is same. Novel name is "Dual Cultivation with system" by MythicalCreatures.
I've read the first twenty chapters and I feel like he will become his wife's dog and the whole story becomes about how he can pleases her
Ran Qing and Wann Xinruo please and the others. Aside from that I really recommend this novel, the flow of the story is very nice, not too fast not too slow.
I'm really liking the story so far, the only thing i hope you do is to not overdo it with all of the extra women. Maybe keep it at like 20 and just improve on their development, that would definitely make the story much better. Having to many women would make it hard to keep up and remember them all and it makes their love way to shallow
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Happy new year author thank you for bringing us Chapter of your novel many blessings and have a good time this day December 31 Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm
I have only given 5 stars to four novels so far...Your novel is awesome bro...........................................Keep Doinggg....................
The Novel synopsis make me see future almost limitless face slapping and trouble because MC Low key wannabe and too many plothole, so if you want to Read it with comfort go offline your brain and just enjoy with delusion that every chapter is positive way of thinking
If you're into dual cultivation su yang novel,you would definitely love this as this novel ngl is alot more better as the story pacing + development have been really well done plus all the girls that was introduced into the harem have well written character setting + background story. 10/10 story that you won't regret reading!
Although the growth of his harem is still a bit too fast. At least, the women have their own back stories. Overall, this rewrite is much better than the original version.
This is a treasure I found while randomly browsing the platform. If you like harem novels and MC-centric novels, read it now. My only complaint is that the romance doesn't develop much. Events unfold very quickly.
umm will the mc revive his past wife as well? considering her corpse still in the same univese ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
story is great. good world building, good character growth, updated everyday or other day 1 or 2 chapters. Story is addictive keeps you wanting more of it. cultivation and harem with multiple bloodlines. readers will not be disappointed with the work of the authors and story.
Author here. Dual cultivation? Big harem? Gentle but cruel? System? Illicit relationships? This novel contains everything, please take a peek. I hope you all enjoy it.
JosieGan has been doing an excellent job so far with this novel. Regarding the character design I have read a few novels involving the reincarnated immortal plot and many authors for some reason like making their MC's absolute clowns after reincarnating. The author did a great job even though MC maintains his memories/abilities he's not some GigaChad rushing into stupidly danger. He tactically thinks things through and plans accordingly. As for the writing quality considering the author isn't a native English speaker and English is his third or fourth chosen language I have had no issues following the authors writings. The only issue I came across are a few errors on the pronouns but I have noticed that those errors are slowly beginning to reduce. JosieGan pumps out two to three chapters daily. While frequently updating his other two books that are free which I highly recommended everyone to check out because they are great as well. As far World Background so far they are the typical continent's (North, South, West, East, and Central) but the author goes into detail throughout the novel explaining it so it becomes clear. There will be no 15-30 chapters spent explaining how it works.
Is there any continuation after they go to the upper realm? Since i know that he will become the ruler of his own universe since it was already mentioned at the other novel. I just want you to finished it till the end 🥹
barbaro como terminas la novela incompleta.... asi no... fuera de eso buena novela, pero de verdad dejaste a uno enganchado cuando se supone que empezará lo bueno
Just finished it, personally I liked it even though it got some minor spelling mistake it’s not that bad. Currently I don’t know the status of the 2nd book but hopefully I get to read it soon. Anyways thanks for the good read!🤝
Its a really good book, my only problem is that, like most of other harems, any other male is not allowed to be happy, at least in the first half of the book, at least the cousin shouldnt have died and much less, a virgin, it could even be good for the plot that the aunt gave herself to Tian after he rescued Xia Han and in the next book getting him the gf he wanted. But anyhow, I'm still waiting for the next book of Xia Tian
Spoiler de révélation At last I just finished reading yesterday and I hope can look forward your next adventure in saving his lovers relatives and his own mom & dad and defeat all his enemies and Fate. Well done keep up your work I’m looking forward and all the best.
I really liked this novel and honestly I can't wait to read the rest of their adventure in the higher kingdom.
No suelo poner a las novelas tanta puntuacion, pero esta se lo merece. Voy por el capitulo 339 y hasta el momento me gusta bastante la historia, personalmente a pesar de que el autor compara su novela por debajo de dual cultivator creo que esta es mejor para mi opinion en cuanto a firmar un contrato y que los seguidores se enfaden problema de ellos. Aun asi debo decir que para mi opinion desvaloraliza demasiado la opinion de los lectores. Independientemente de si tienen razon o no es la opinion de cada uno y deberia respetarse aunque luego abandonen o no la novela, cada uno tiene su opinion y su forma de ver la vida y se deberia aceptar como creador de contenido que eres y no solo lo haces para ti sino tambien para los lectores segun tu propia reseña y ya que estas escribiendo en una web para que otros lean tu novela. Mi sincera opinion lo digo porque he leido algunos comentarios dentro de la novela al final de cada pagina que personalmente por asi decirlo me llamo un poco la atencion para un creador de contenido que escribe para sus lectores y pide sus opiniones, pero luego las rechaza. Perdon si ofendo y sigue asi buena novela.
Actually it's a bit strange, why this novel and Joseigan's other works were not included in the WBO best category, instead other novels with bad storylines were included.
Author, I think someone is copying your novel. He changed names but the entire story is same. Novel name is "Dual Cultivation with system" by MythicalCreatures.
I've read the first twenty chapters and I feel like he will become his wife's dog and the whole story becomes about how he can pleases her
Ran Qing and Wann Xinruo please and the others. Aside from that I really recommend this novel, the flow of the story is very nice, not too fast not too slow.
I'm really liking the story so far, the only thing i hope you do is to not overdo it with all of the extra women. Maybe keep it at like 20 and just improve on their development, that would definitely make the story much better. Having to many women would make it hard to keep up and remember them all and it makes their love way to shallow
great story and worth reading. I am very happy to be able to read this story here. thank you [img=coins] [img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins]
i love/like this novel please keep updating i love/like this novel please keep updating i love/like this novel please keep updating i love/like this novel please keep updating
Happy new year author thank you for bringing us Chapter of your novel many blessings and have a good time this day December 31 Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm
I have only given 5 stars to four novels so far...Your novel is awesome bro...........................................Keep Doinggg....................
The Novel synopsis make me see future almost limitless face slapping and trouble because MC Low key wannabe and too many plothole, so if you want to Read it with comfort go offline your brain and just enjoy with delusion that every chapter is positive way of thinking
If you're into dual cultivation su yang novel,you would definitely love this as this novel ngl is alot more better as the story pacing + development have been really well done plus all the girls that was introduced into the harem have well written character setting + background story. 10/10 story that you won't regret reading!
Although the growth of his harem is still a bit too fast. At least, the women have their own back stories. Overall, this rewrite is much better than the original version.
This is a treasure I found while randomly browsing the platform. If you like harem novels and MC-centric novels, read it now. My only complaint is that the romance doesn't develop much. Events unfold very quickly.
umm will the mc revive his past wife as well? considering her corpse still in the same univese ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
story is great. good world building, good character growth, updated everyday or other day 1 or 2 chapters. Story is addictive keeps you wanting more of it. cultivation and harem with multiple bloodlines. readers will not be disappointed with the work of the authors and story.
Author here. Dual cultivation? Big harem? Gentle but cruel? System? Illicit relationships? This novel contains everything, please take a peek. I hope you all enjoy it.