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Chapitre 13: Reboot draft Important Please Read!!!!

Power is absolute in this absurd world of ours. While people yearn for love, respect and loyalty. I yearn for power cause it is from power you can inspire loyalty, from power you can breed respect and it is from power you can attain and protect love.

Power is the only truth that matters in this world of ours. If you are strong you can do anything and can gain anything. I wish to attain that power that instils great fear in the hearts of my enemy. And to attain such said power if I need to do or say anything I shall do it. I will become whole and I will be powerful.

Los Angeles

I was walking down the streets of L.A. in search of a woman who could help me find the solution to my problem. I was looking for a shop run by a woman named Elisa. She ran a voodoo shop. I can't believe how gullible people can be here it's honestly amusing to see.

I got a call from my lovely little sister, I picked it up and she said "How much time is it going to take Chris? I am getting bored with her."

I chuckled and said, "I thought you liked to hang around her?"

She scoffed and said, "I didn't say that, I merely stated that she is tolerable."

I laughed and said, "It won't take much longer just entertain for friend for a while."

She said "Fine, but please be quick."

I smiled and said, "I will be, Bye." I cut the call and was still looking for it, where is this damn place.

I finally found the shop after a little bit of struggle. I entered the shop and I saw a woman at the counter and she smiled and said: "What can I help you with today sweetheart?"

I smiled and I walked towards her and said "I am looking for a solution to my very tedious problem… and I have heard you are very gifted in the ways of magic."

She smiled and she said, "Absolutely, what is the problem?"

I smiled and said "You see my father is a vampire, the first of his kind and my mother was a werewolf generations old. They met fell in love had me. I am supposed to be a true hybrid but for some reason my father curses me and now I am stuck with just the vampire part."

She looked tense but she swept it with a laugh and said "That is a nice story you have."

I chuckled and said "Yeah, but it is still incomplete though, you see the witches that cursed me were your ancestors. So now you are going to help me find the solution to my problem."

She looked at me with resolve and she said "Get out of here."

I smiled and said, "Oh, now no need to be so afraid… come on helping me and I release you and your daughter."

She looked at me and then suddenly I had a head-splitting pain. It felt like someone was squishing my brain. I dropped to my knees and she said "Where is she?"

I groaned in pain but smiled and said "You will never see her if you don't help me. I have orders to kill her."

She stopped and I felt relief. I took in some deep breaths and I got up and dusted my clothes and I walked to her and I said: "Now I am a man of my word help me and I release you and your daughter."

She scoffed and she went inside, I followed her in and it was oddly decorated with old books and dried animal parts it truly looked like a witch's den. She opened up some books and she said "The solution you are looking for is old and will take me time to find."

I shrugged my shoulders and said, "Take as much time you want… but the problem is there is a timer on that killing command of mine so you might want to hurry…."

She looked pissed and I sat down on a chair and waited for results. She started to do her witchy voodoo, she lit candles and burnt some herbs and chanted some stuff. The candles that were lit were burning like a damn flame thrower she got up and she asked the witches of the past about this and they were talking to her in their weird way.

After a few seconds, the candles were snuffed out and she looked at me and said "I have the answers you need."

I smiled and said, "Let me guess you want your daughter first?" She said nothing but looked at me and I sighed and called my sister, she picked it up and said "Mary, bring the girl home."

I cut the call and I looked at her and said "Happy? Now my answers."

She nodded and she said, "The curse was placed on you using your mother's blood, the curse can only be broken if you can find yourself a true alpha and…" My sister entered the shop with her daughter and she wanted to go see her daughter but I came in front of her and said, "And?"

She looked at me and told me what else was needed to complete the ritual. I looked at her and I thought that she was messing with me I said "And where do you suppose I will find a damn true alpha, those don't just roam around in the wild like willy nilly."

She looked at me and said, "What do want me to say?" She tried to go so I grabbed her by the throat and I picked her up and she started to choke. I looked at her and I said "I will not be duped by the likes of you! Now tell me the truth!"

Her daughter walked in she looked at me, she wanted to do something but Mary grabbed her from behind and placed her hands on her throat. She was confused and I said to the woman "Now tell me the truth or she dies."

She looked at her daughter and said "The true alpha will appear where the Nemeton is in years to come the alpha will be there. You can get him then."

I let go of her and she falls on her ass I smiled and said: "Now was that so hard?"

She coughed and gasped for air and got up and said, "Now let go of her?"

I raised my hands and said "Whatever you say, love. Release her." Mary ripped her throat and she screamed and fell down on the floor and I said to her "I told you I am a man of my word. I told you I would release you both and now I shall fulfil my promise."

She looked at me and I kicked her head off. Blood splattered and Mary said to me "Was that really necessary?"

I turned to her and said, "See I knew you liked her."

She scoffed and I threw her my handkerchief to wipe off the blood and she caught it and said "I meant the method Chris… her nasty bits are all over my dress now."

We were walking out of the shop and I chuckled and said, "I am sorry. How about I take you somewhere nice?"

She was excited she took my hand and said "You are forgiven."

She asked, "Where are we going now?"

I looked at her and said, "A town called Beacon Hills… we will have to spend some time there."

She looked upset and I said, "You will enjoy it I promise."

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Hey guys this is an early draft for the reboot. This Chris is more like a combination of Elijah and Klaus. The other brother is Kole. Mary is more like an obedient little sister and a little like Rebekah. The love interest in the beginning is Allison but that doesn't pan out. This is the first option for the reboot.

Second option is a werewolf type of system. Where the wolf will be more like a La Bête du Gévaudan. The mc will be like an oc he won't have knowledge of the plot and will also slowly uncover his abilities and power. The love interest is not decided in both of them.

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ok, i was reading and it seems that to create something like the beast the mc would either

a. need to be born with it. which will defeat the whole learning about his powers.

b. turned into that which is equally chalenging

so what if I make a different kind of wolf that is equally as powerfull as the beast but his powers activate by

1. killing someone

2. When he is at a certain stage of life.

let me know.


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