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don't waste time on this. the mc is an idiot. he is a regressor from 10 yrs in the future. he busts out the first day and becomes op before other eathers can even get out of the tutorial. he gets 400% bonus xp the does absolutely nothing.... his mom runs something like a crime syndicate. He tells her he's from the future and tells her what happens and she does nothing... she doesn't tell anyone in her organization about what's coming and tge mc does nothing to help her or anyone else to level and the author pulls out a thesaurus and describes every situation in multiple ways... It's totally boring, awesome concept but screwed up on the delivery. it's also a copy of other novels of the same style, so it's a meh. It's not even worth toilet reading.
obvious copy paste from 3 different manga and manhwa so far with small references to others. once solo leveling popped up I dipped. not even 30 chapters in.
Bro you hyped the book to an unexpected level and in the next second you dropped it to the abyse I am utterly disappointed ☹️ 😩😩😩😩
It feels like you mashed together parts of the power system of Solo Leveling, Magi The Labyrnth of Magic, and One Piece all together. I won't go into the unneeded long-winded descriptions because I feel other reviewers have pointed that out already. What I will say is that I enjoyed the slight progression of the novel for what it tried to do. I'm aware that there is going to be a rewrite eventually. When it will be I have absolutely no ideas, but I look forward to it nonetheless. Score 6.9 out of 10 Personal Score 6.9 out of 10 It's a nice novel but I can understand why people would get annoyed at the descriptions.
I think this is one of the only times I’ve given such a bad review. I’m just mad at the novel seeming like it has potential but ruining it from even chapter 1 -horrible writing quality(unnecessary repeating of what is said to bloat chapters)(the writing style is also awful since it is all just monologue after monologue) there is literally no emphasis on what is happening, so we are 25 chapters through and he has done almost nothing, he has just woken up for his second day. -adding wayyy tooo many anime “inspirations” that it makes the power system a mess(btw it is even blatantly copying people and powers from anime’s) The worse part of it is the combination of powers from each anime apparently Nen is mana and can be combined with devil fruits to produce an explosion reaction Devil fruits-forbidden fruit Blackbeard- forgot his alternate name Monkey d dragon- something d something Haki-forgot something about soul attacks Shadow monarch-dark sovereign Djinn from magi-djinn from magi Nen hxh- Nen Overlord Black clover books-black clover books Etc these are just the ones on top of my head
I read as long as I could, but when the storyline was so similar to Solo Levelling, I quit, no originality, no skill. Sorry to be blunt, but when it is obvious that the author has plagiarised, readers must make a stand.
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nothing against the story, but the way of writing irritates me, like every chapter emphasizing the same things, the unshakable determination... keeping putting these things in makes me lose patience with the story
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1) uses themes and elememts from different books/videogames. Really disgusting how he is butchering their stories to be put in his. Lazy.Unimaginative.
This novel is clearly written by AI, namely chatgpt. I didn't know that webnovel allows such tricks. You shouldn't be an AI specialist to see this.
(3 2 1 3 2)/5=2.2this is a more reasonable member of the wish fulfillment genre.The in**st might do it for some of the readers.---------------------------6---------------------------------that's all I can say in favor of this novel.---------------------------6---------------------------------you could say it's original in stealing ideas from so many more sources than other novels seem to have. but it just does not seem that original to this reader. In addition, the cultural scenes do not seem well done.---------------------------6---------------------------------so,as I am admittedly here for the culture for than the rest.---------------------------6---------------------------------the story failed to convince me to stay.i do not recommend
I will say it is nice merge between different animes... First One Piece then Magi, The Labyrinth of Magic...
every sentence is followed by pic related drivel, interestingly enough this filler driver almost never has any mistakes, hmm. so can you stop this author. your grammar and writing quility is at best 1-2 stars and magically this filth is atleast 4. I don't know if you are copy pasting it from somewhere or using ai but its nothing more than padding. so please stop
It's one of the best stories that I have read and it's well written with good plot and story development. Thanks for everything, your time, hard work,etc.
Chap 6 Review. Novel started cool, with a cool, even if overused ideea buuut, this is where things go slightly awry. Mc starts to use his knowledge of future, to get OP, when suddenly we are thrown into readin a One Piece fanfic. He almost copy-paste so much, to the point he can be "sued" for copywriting. The way MC is intoduced into his new powers, which were nothing but Phoenix-Phoenix, Lightning-Lightning and Light Light Devil Fruits)which are named Forbidden Fruits btw) is soo cringy and weird. He proves an excelent level of mastery for something he never experienced, one shotting everything and everyone. There is no training arc , so to speak, which should be necessary for every "return to past situation", when MC was nothing but an average joe in his past life.
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Chap 6 Review. Novel started cool, with a cool, even if overused ideea buuut, this is where things go slightly awry. Mc starts to use his knowledge of future, to get OP, when suddenly we are thrown into readin a One Piece fanfic. He almost copy-paste so much, to the point he can be "sued" for copywriting. The way MC is intoduced into his new powers, which were nothing but Phoenix-Phoenix, Lightning-Lightning and Light Light Devil Fruits)which are named Forbidden Fruits btw) is soo cringy and weird. He proves an excelent level of mastery for something he never experienced, one shotting everything and everyone. There is no training arc , so to speak, which should be necessary for every "return to past situation", when MC was nothing but an average joe in his past life.
I truly admire your work author, I finally found a novel where the characters have a soul. Every character have some sort of originality to it, you can actually feel them. They’re not just some empty shell they are REAL!! And that’s what kept me hooked. Overall great story, you have emotionally captivated me 🍵
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Novel is overall really good I’m just surpised that webnovel agreed to make it premium as it blatantly has stuff in that could get copy righted if the someone really wanted to have it removed
I'm really enjoying it. Sometimes, different parts can seem drawn out a bit, but it's nothing that really hurts the story or anything. Other than that, I have zero complaints. Top tier
heeee author-san this power stone is definitely not a bribe for more chapters but still don't tell anyone okay if not then💀💀🔪🔪😇 goodbye 😇
keep up the good work ill support the best i can also hopefully he can get strong before the apocalypse i hope the story doesnt end when the apacalypse comes and theres in depth hunting when the apocalypse comes aswell as many many chapters in the future
nice story about op mc. how on earth is it by the same author of heavenly harem sect????? its like winrar suddenly become free and open source.... impossible to imagine
don't waste time on this. the mc is an idiot. he is a regressor from 10 yrs in the future. he busts out the first day and becomes op before other eathers can even get out of the tutorial. he gets 400% bonus xp the does absolutely nothing.... his mom runs something like a crime syndicate. He tells her he's from the future and tells her what happens and she does nothing... she doesn't tell anyone in her organization about what's coming and tge mc does nothing to help her or anyone else to level and the author pulls out a thesaurus and describes every situation in multiple ways... It's totally boring, awesome concept but screwed up on the delivery. it's also a copy of other novels of the same style, so it's a meh. It's not even worth toilet reading.
obvious copy paste from 3 different manga and manhwa so far with small references to others. once solo leveling popped up I dipped. not even 30 chapters in.
Bro you hyped the book to an unexpected level and in the next second you dropped it to the abyse I am utterly disappointed ☹️ 😩😩😩😩
It feels like you mashed together parts of the power system of Solo Leveling, Magi The Labyrnth of Magic, and One Piece all together. I won't go into the unneeded long-winded descriptions because I feel other reviewers have pointed that out already. What I will say is that I enjoyed the slight progression of the novel for what it tried to do. I'm aware that there is going to be a rewrite eventually. When it will be I have absolutely no ideas, but I look forward to it nonetheless. Score 6.9 out of 10 Personal Score 6.9 out of 10 It's a nice novel but I can understand why people would get annoyed at the descriptions.
I think this is one of the only times I’ve given such a bad review. I’m just mad at the novel seeming like it has potential but ruining it from even chapter 1 -horrible writing quality(unnecessary repeating of what is said to bloat chapters)(the writing style is also awful since it is all just monologue after monologue) there is literally no emphasis on what is happening, so we are 25 chapters through and he has done almost nothing, he has just woken up for his second day. -adding wayyy tooo many anime “inspirations” that it makes the power system a mess(btw it is even blatantly copying people and powers from anime’s) The worse part of it is the combination of powers from each anime apparently Nen is mana and can be combined with devil fruits to produce an explosion reaction Devil fruits-forbidden fruit Blackbeard- forgot his alternate name Monkey d dragon- something d something Haki-forgot something about soul attacks Shadow monarch-dark sovereign Djinn from magi-djinn from magi Nen hxh- Nen Overlord Black clover books-black clover books Etc these are just the ones on top of my head
I read as long as I could, but when the storyline was so similar to Solo Levelling, I quit, no originality, no skill. Sorry to be blunt, but when it is obvious that the author has plagiarised, readers must make a stand.
Spoiler de révélation nothing against the story, but the way of writing irritates me, like every chapter emphasizing the same things, the unshakable determination... keeping putting these things in makes me lose patience with the story
here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse
1) uses themes and elememts from different books/videogames. Really disgusting how he is butchering their stories to be put in his. Lazy.Unimaginative.
This novel is clearly written by AI, namely chatgpt. I didn't know that webnovel allows such tricks. You shouldn't be an AI specialist to see this.
(3 2 1 3 2)/5=2.2this is a more reasonable member of the wish fulfillment genre.The in**st might do it for some of the readers.---------------------------6---------------------------------that's all I can say in favor of this novel.---------------------------6---------------------------------you could say it's original in stealing ideas from so many more sources than other novels seem to have. but it just does not seem that original to this reader. In addition, the cultural scenes do not seem well done.---------------------------6---------------------------------so,as I am admittedly here for the culture for than the rest.---------------------------6---------------------------------the story failed to convince me to stay.i do not recommend
I will say it is nice merge between different animes... First One Piece then Magi, The Labyrinth of Magic...
every sentence is followed by pic related drivel, interestingly enough this filler driver almost never has any mistakes, hmm. so can you stop this author. your grammar and writing quility is at best 1-2 stars and magically this filth is atleast 4. I don't know if you are copy pasting it from somewhere or using ai but its nothing more than padding. so please stop
It's one of the best stories that I have read and it's well written with good plot and story development. Thanks for everything, your time, hard work,etc.
Chap 6 Review. Novel started cool, with a cool, even if overused ideea buuut, this is where things go slightly awry. Mc starts to use his knowledge of future, to get OP, when suddenly we are thrown into readin a One Piece fanfic. He almost copy-paste so much, to the point he can be "sued" for copywriting. The way MC is intoduced into his new powers, which were nothing but Phoenix-Phoenix, Lightning-Lightning and Light Light Devil Fruits)which are named Forbidden Fruits btw) is soo cringy and weird. He proves an excelent level of mastery for something he never experienced, one shotting everything and everyone. There is no training arc , so to speak, which should be necessary for every "return to past situation", when MC was nothing but an average joe in his past life.
Spoiler de révélation Chap 6 Review. Novel started cool, with a cool, even if overused ideea buuut, this is where things go slightly awry. Mc starts to use his knowledge of future, to get OP, when suddenly we are thrown into readin a One Piece fanfic. He almost copy-paste so much, to the point he can be "sued" for copywriting. The way MC is intoduced into his new powers, which were nothing but Phoenix-Phoenix, Lightning-Lightning and Light Light Devil Fruits)which are named Forbidden Fruits btw) is soo cringy and weird. He proves an excelent level of mastery for something he never experienced, one shotting everything and everyone. There is no training arc , so to speak, which should be necessary for every "return to past situation", when MC was nothing but an average joe in his past life.
I truly admire your work author, I finally found a novel where the characters have a soul. Every character have some sort of originality to it, you can actually feel them. They’re not just some empty shell they are REAL!! And that’s what kept me hooked. Overall great story, you have emotionally captivated me 🍵
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Novel is overall really good I’m just surpised that webnovel agreed to make it premium as it blatantly has stuff in that could get copy righted if the someone really wanted to have it removed
I'm really enjoying it. Sometimes, different parts can seem drawn out a bit, but it's nothing that really hurts the story or anything. Other than that, I have zero complaints. Top tier
heeee author-san this power stone is definitely not a bribe for more chapters but still don't tell anyone okay if not then💀💀🔪🔪😇 goodbye 😇
keep up the good work ill support the best i can also hopefully he can get strong before the apocalypse i hope the story doesnt end when the apacalypse comes and theres in depth hunting when the apocalypse comes aswell as many many chapters in the future
nice story about op mc. how on earth is it by the same author of heavenly harem sect????? its like winrar suddenly become free and open source.... impossible to imagine