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According to this fan fiction, it's a bit rushed, friends, and a lot of Pokemon being caught are annoying...............………….....................................................………ಠ︵ಠ
So far it's enjoyable Recommend To new reader..................... ............................................. ............................................. Here author gold bar so don't drop
fun reading the story ........................................................................................................ ..................................................................................................................................................
Fun reading...........................................................................................................................................................................................................
This Fanfic would have rocked if the author had not made MC too much OP in the starting. There is a lot of chilché in this Fanfic, which can be ignored honestly. But the second main problem is the needlessly adding girls to MC'S harem. Like in just staring 10 or so chapters, MC already have 4 girls! Writing Quality is ok. Some minor mistakes which can be ignored easily. Story development. This is one of this story's downfall. Too much harem memebers and MC becomes OP too soon. Like he becomes OP in the first chapter! I would have loved this Fanfic if the MC was strong and grows stronger progressively. He should have given a few opponents who he was defeated by but he trains and gets stronger and beats them. Character Design. This is kinda ok'ish. Updating Stability. Good. World Background. This Fanfic have quite a lot of anime mixed up. Which can be good as well as disastrous for this Fanfic. But still, this mix-up made MC get more girls in his harem... OVERALL: This book is good for harem lovers with a slice of life vibe where MC is OP from the start and there are no enemies that can face him Also there is a Pokemon catching harem, which toned this Fanfic down. So read it if you like too easy Pokemon harem with slice of life where MC is OP and there is nothing much for MC to do in his world...
OK first, this ff looks too op but who doesn't love op mc right ? But author san, u should at least give us (readers) hints of which anime or comic characters or world is this? Will whatever... I hope I see it until complete not until dropping😏
MC starts with a well used gacha system that he then merges with a gamer system and some how becomes transcendent super god from super human in like 3 chapters. No context, poor flow and a pacing that goes from 10 to lightspeed within 2 chapters.
don't drop or ill drop your reincarnated girl in the ovaries /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
it's good, i can't give specific details because there were only 4 chapter now but its enjoyable for me......................................
so far I'm really enjoying it it just keeps getting better and better after every chapter some spelling mistakes but it's ok because you only get one every chapter I hope everyone else will enjoy this as much as I am and I hope this goes a long ways and if like to send my best wishes to the auther because you nailed it my guy I was hooked on the bio right away such original idea for a novel the the chaps are long and it doesn't feel forced if you question to read or not I'll stop you there give a read font judge it right away if you don't give it a try I'll break your Nico Nico knee caps
Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!!
I just started reading. And before you complain, I think it's shirty. First of all, the MC revealed the system as early as chapter 1. That sucks, but I can understand that even though I'm still mad about it. Second, write on the synopsis that you're not an English native. I had so much expectation from this when I read the synopsis, but when I got to reading it the spellings, or grammar and vocabulary in general, just made me cringe. The story itself is not a problem, but the way you use large letters so often makes me think you're 11-15 years old. Learn english the proper way first before you start writing. I'm going to continue reading this and will change this rating when I think it's appropriate.
According to this fan fiction, it's a bit rushed, friends, and a lot of Pokemon being caught are annoying...............………….....................................................………ಠ︵ಠ
So far it's enjoyable Recommend To new reader..................... ............................................. ............................................. Here author gold bar so don't drop
fun reading the story ........................................................................................................ ..................................................................................................................................................
Fun reading...........................................................................................................................................................................................................
This Fanfic would have rocked if the author had not made MC too much OP in the starting. There is a lot of chilché in this Fanfic, which can be ignored honestly. But the second main problem is the needlessly adding girls to MC'S harem. Like in just staring 10 or so chapters, MC already have 4 girls! Writing Quality is ok. Some minor mistakes which can be ignored easily. Story development. This is one of this story's downfall. Too much harem memebers and MC becomes OP too soon. Like he becomes OP in the first chapter! I would have loved this Fanfic if the MC was strong and grows stronger progressively. He should have given a few opponents who he was defeated by but he trains and gets stronger and beats them. Character Design. This is kinda ok'ish. Updating Stability. Good. World Background. This Fanfic have quite a lot of anime mixed up. Which can be good as well as disastrous for this Fanfic. But still, this mix-up made MC get more girls in his harem... OVERALL: This book is good for harem lovers with a slice of life vibe where MC is OP from the start and there are no enemies that can face him Also there is a Pokemon catching harem, which toned this Fanfic down. So read it if you like too easy Pokemon harem with slice of life where MC is OP and there is nothing much for MC to do in his world...
OK first, this ff looks too op but who doesn't love op mc right ? But author san, u should at least give us (readers) hints of which anime or comic characters or world is this? Will whatever... I hope I see it until complete not until dropping😏
MC starts with a well used gacha system that he then merges with a gamer system and some how becomes transcendent super god from super human in like 3 chapters. No context, poor flow and a pacing that goes from 10 to lightspeed within 2 chapters.
don't drop or ill drop your reincarnated girl in the ovaries /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
it's good, i can't give specific details because there were only 4 chapter now but its enjoyable for me......................................
so far I'm really enjoying it it just keeps getting better and better after every chapter some spelling mistakes but it's ok because you only get one every chapter I hope everyone else will enjoy this as much as I am and I hope this goes a long ways and if like to send my best wishes to the auther because you nailed it my guy I was hooked on the bio right away such original idea for a novel the the chaps are long and it doesn't feel forced if you question to read or not I'll stop you there give a read font judge it right away if you don't give it a try I'll break your Nico Nico knee caps
Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!! Gacha!!!!!
I just started reading. And before you complain, I think it's shirty. First of all, the MC revealed the system as early as chapter 1. That sucks, but I can understand that even though I'm still mad about it. Second, write on the synopsis that you're not an English native. I had so much expectation from this when I read the synopsis, but when I got to reading it the spellings, or grammar and vocabulary in general, just made me cringe. The story itself is not a problem, but the way you use large letters so often makes me think you're 11-15 years old. Learn english the proper way first before you start writing. I'm going to continue reading this and will change this rating when I think it's appropriate.