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a person that only copies but does not understand,if you want to read something that makes sense read Revered insanity (not a fanfic)
Hello author just wanted to say hello and are tou alright you haven't been uploading chapters pf other stories
Amazing novel, one where the story lore is deep and it gets crazy. A lot of worlds combine, nt a lot of detail in each but great use of it. Overall 5 stars man.
Really Interestin story with a cool, intelligent, villain mc. while it does have a lot of problems with the main characters consistency and dumb choices it is still a good read if you want a compelling villain main character.
This is one of the first ff I have read that made me care about universes I didn't really care for and for waifus I didn't really ever like. The characters are a step above in this one and just for that I would recommend this, but also the story is just great. I just wish the ending epilogue was a tad bit longer. I would of liked to see everyone just happy for a little longer but I will just imagine that is what happened.
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The story is ok, but the mc had some of his braincells nuked right when the star wars arc started, he suddenly loses his ruthlessness, he is unable to kill people when in the previous arc he was able to kill innocent children. He makes the most stupid mistakes when in the prev arc he didn't make a single one, if you wanted to make him mistake prone you should of done so from the beginning, not make him nigh perfect and super calculating then nuke his IQ He completely loses the maniac vibe he gave off, the vibe I stayed for, his personality flip flops constantly and it gets annoying, everything else is good tho
All in all I liked the stroy, it had a great flow and was enjoyable, However my only real complaint was with the ending. I liked the little twist with the one clone Rebelling (kind of) but something just didn't sit well with me. I think it was because it felt like something that the origanl (I cant spell lol) should of seen coming since he had all of ricks smarts it seems like it was avoidable (does this make since? I'm not good with explaining things). But like i said other then the very end I enjoyed this and i feel like there should be more stories like this (IE someone somehow gets ricks tech or knows how to make it).
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This is so good that even though I lost what chapter I was on I'm still going to re-read it from the beginning. If you want a real, quality reply. Check for my earlier one. I'll probably post another reply once I get past the arf I was in before hand
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Gets terrible around 300. Love the magicians part and have been trudging through all the adopting like 400 kids and getting wives like they’re Pokémon
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Mc is just an emotional wreckage. He tries to act like he doesnt cares but deep down he is just a little kid trying to act cool. Nearly everything in starwars could be prevented only if he forced his wife to talk a little. Or Just, I dont know, font aproach an enemy without double tapping? And his future self says wanda fixed him or something. Meaning that he Will be a Lil cry baby untill the marvel universe. Spoiler but might needed to know: And I dont know how to feel about his future self doing what he did to his Girls. I mean, I would be Fine if that parts were at the end of the fic Just so it can end in a good ending but it was a mistake to put it when our perspective was younger mc. It felt like he just got c*cked
When I saw this fic that had a lot of chapters, I wanted to read it, but then Mc was he appeared out of nowhere in the Rick and Morty universe. He's a normal person out of nowhere and the villain comes out because that always happens in the Webnovel fics, but then I didn't like it very much because, like, he had no reason to go out killing everyone and just turn into a psychopath out of nowhere, but the author ended it, I'll go give five stars, but I haven't read the fic (Google translator)
Finally, my investment in keeping this my library give me 300+ chapter. Nice, time to binge read it. *currently sad cat dance is famous* *qidian/wn almost kill their platform on fanfic side of things*
My final review for this fiction. When I came looking for copper I found gold- no it was actually vibranium all under a lake of naquadah all wrapped up nicely in vespene gas Ahem what I recommend and want from the author is to share this masterpiece on other websites, not all bookworms(internet bookworms?) roam webnovel and there's an entire flock of sheep that have to be shepherd(ed?), that have to taste the sweet honey of your hard work. Regardless I'm proud of the author and proud to have been part of this wonderful journey through the multiverse.
I really like the story but I find it hard to read and just plane bad starting around the magicians arc. I REALLY hated the harem aspect and how an EXTREMELY smart super genius who is easily manipulating a lot of people at the same time finds it EXTREMELY hard to even slightly understand the thinking of his gf (the one from arifureta). I personally don't like the magicians arc but the rest was good. I also feel like his childhood dream of being a god was kinda just added in their to explain his desire for power. PS I stopped reading on chapter 307
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This is nice, and the Magician Arc has been awesome, though I might be biased since I loved Magician when the first season came out. The only problem is the MC's dickishness, is that a word? Meh, whatever. I just feel like there are several deaths in the series that could be avoided, and the MC's attempt at humiliating Panacea is just ridiculous. Sure, it's a response in line with his personality and actions thus far, but at the same time, Panacea wasn't obligated to help him, not to mention the possible repercurssions working on Offee's brain might as an untrained parahuman might have. It's already established in Worm that some people react poorly to brain-alteration and mind control. As for the next fic you'll write, I'm not telling you to do anything here, but I really hope it's the Magician fanfic. Jay's obssession with science makes the whole magic thing seem kinda redundant at this point, but I still think it's the best Arc. Alright, night.
If you love good writing of the darkest kind this ones the book for you, with twists and turns you'll be surprised at what dark deeds the mc will go through to achieve his goals. It of course being so dark isn't for the faint of heart. The writing is so good I read way past my comfort zone. Unfortunately I couldn't continue maybe someday, probably not though, just too dam dark.
review 2star first then read 🤣 then give 5 nice story by the way also i sometimes hate the MC personality but overall good novel keepup the good work author[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really like this fanfic, it's well done and not too predictable, even when the author tells everyone ahead of time what he's going to do. Looking forward to the next chapter.
It’s just another typical story about an unfeeling psychopath going around murdering people and stealing their powers. That’s really about it.
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A significant improvement over the authors first work while reading this you can really see the author progress through out the chapters it's a great feeling
Ehh it's good but I drop this novel on worm story bc I don't know about worm nothing)) but it's good before worm I give 4 stars and good luck for you!))
the story was starting well with mc manipulator, he takes rick's memories and goes into the multiverse and tries to get stronger even though ruthless he kills various people for his safety but then towards star wars he becomes handicapped and stupid he keeps making mistakes, the story it is prolonged and there are stupid moments in history such as it no longer kills people in difficulty but then kills at random, there are moments that particular technologies appear and it is not known where mc got the materials to build them or various things, from sending that mc try to get stronger has become a story where he tries to save everyone and make a big scene like a megalomaniac saying or look what they did what happened there etc ..., making fun of everything and everyone just to lengthen the chapters, mc really has some problem with children every second must be the means by lengthening the story or making scenes for no reason, the author from his initial premise was too influenced by the comments of the people and lost the original purpose of the story, good start but horrible development
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I'm putting it 5 out of 5 for now because haven't read it yet but where can I find the worm novel and heroes I'm watching it so I know what is going on which session are you doing it on.
Overall it's a fun to read if u could ignore mc and anf his illogical thinking with unstable mind.. one second he kills kid next second he feels pity.. and too much forced plot just so mc could have character development.. and his power ups? Sadly no flashed out his powers relying too much on external technology and maybe author don't have exact knowledge of superpowers . Author made mc too op only to nerf him at the last arc.. overall if you can bear emotional drama and inconsistency and dumb thing and only focus on power fantasy story it's good
Spoiler de révélation a person that only copies but does not understand,if you want to read something that makes sense read Revered insanity (not a fanfic)
Hello author just wanted to say hello and are tou alright you haven't been uploading chapters pf other stories
Amazing novel, one where the story lore is deep and it gets crazy. A lot of worlds combine, nt a lot of detail in each but great use of it. Overall 5 stars man.
Really Interestin story with a cool, intelligent, villain mc. while it does have a lot of problems with the main characters consistency and dumb choices it is still a good read if you want a compelling villain main character.
This is one of the first ff I have read that made me care about universes I didn't really care for and for waifus I didn't really ever like. The characters are a step above in this one and just for that I would recommend this, but also the story is just great. I just wish the ending epilogue was a tad bit longer. I would of liked to see everyone just happy for a little longer but I will just imagine that is what happened.
Spoiler de révélation The story is ok, but the mc had some of his braincells nuked right when the star wars arc started, he suddenly loses his ruthlessness, he is unable to kill people when in the previous arc he was able to kill innocent children. He makes the most stupid mistakes when in the prev arc he didn't make a single one, if you wanted to make him mistake prone you should of done so from the beginning, not make him nigh perfect and super calculating then nuke his IQ He completely loses the maniac vibe he gave off, the vibe I stayed for, his personality flip flops constantly and it gets annoying, everything else is good tho
All in all I liked the stroy, it had a great flow and was enjoyable, However my only real complaint was with the ending. I liked the little twist with the one clone Rebelling (kind of) but something just didn't sit well with me. I think it was because it felt like something that the origanl (I cant spell lol) should of seen coming since he had all of ricks smarts it seems like it was avoidable (does this make since? I'm not good with explaining things). But like i said other then the very end I enjoyed this and i feel like there should be more stories like this (IE someone somehow gets ricks tech or knows how to make it).
Spoiler de révélation This is so good that even though I lost what chapter I was on I'm still going to re-read it from the beginning. If you want a real, quality reply. Check for my earlier one. I'll probably post another reply once I get past the arf I was in before hand
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Gets terrible around 300. Love the magicians part and have been trudging through all the adopting like 400 kids and getting wives like they’re Pokémon
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
Mc is just an emotional wreckage. He tries to act like he doesnt cares but deep down he is just a little kid trying to act cool. Nearly everything in starwars could be prevented only if he forced his wife to talk a little. Or Just, I dont know, font aproach an enemy without double tapping? And his future self says wanda fixed him or something. Meaning that he Will be a Lil cry baby untill the marvel universe. Spoiler but might needed to know: And I dont know how to feel about his future self doing what he did to his Girls. I mean, I would be Fine if that parts were at the end of the fic Just so it can end in a good ending but it was a mistake to put it when our perspective was younger mc. It felt like he just got c*cked
When I saw this fic that had a lot of chapters, I wanted to read it, but then Mc was he appeared out of nowhere in the Rick and Morty universe. He's a normal person out of nowhere and the villain comes out because that always happens in the Webnovel fics, but then I didn't like it very much because, like, he had no reason to go out killing everyone and just turn into a psychopath out of nowhere, but the author ended it, I'll go give five stars, but I haven't read the fic (Google translator)
Finally, my investment in keeping this my library give me 300+ chapter. Nice, time to binge read it. *currently sad cat dance is famous* *qidian/wn almost kill their platform on fanfic side of things*
My final review for this fiction. When I came looking for copper I found gold- no it was actually vibranium all under a lake of naquadah all wrapped up nicely in vespene gas Ahem what I recommend and want from the author is to share this masterpiece on other websites, not all bookworms(internet bookworms?) roam webnovel and there's an entire flock of sheep that have to be shepherd(ed?), that have to taste the sweet honey of your hard work. Regardless I'm proud of the author and proud to have been part of this wonderful journey through the multiverse.
I really like the story but I find it hard to read and just plane bad starting around the magicians arc. I REALLY hated the harem aspect and how an EXTREMELY smart super genius who is easily manipulating a lot of people at the same time finds it EXTREMELY hard to even slightly understand the thinking of his gf (the one from arifureta). I personally don't like the magicians arc but the rest was good. I also feel like his childhood dream of being a god was kinda just added in their to explain his desire for power. PS I stopped reading on chapter 307
Spoiler de révélation This is nice, and the Magician Arc has been awesome, though I might be biased since I loved Magician when the first season came out. The only problem is the MC's dickishness, is that a word? Meh, whatever. I just feel like there are several deaths in the series that could be avoided, and the MC's attempt at humiliating Panacea is just ridiculous. Sure, it's a response in line with his personality and actions thus far, but at the same time, Panacea wasn't obligated to help him, not to mention the possible repercurssions working on Offee's brain might as an untrained parahuman might have. It's already established in Worm that some people react poorly to brain-alteration and mind control. As for the next fic you'll write, I'm not telling you to do anything here, but I really hope it's the Magician fanfic. Jay's obssession with science makes the whole magic thing seem kinda redundant at this point, but I still think it's the best Arc. Alright, night.
If you love good writing of the darkest kind this ones the book for you, with twists and turns you'll be surprised at what dark deeds the mc will go through to achieve his goals. It of course being so dark isn't for the faint of heart. The writing is so good I read way past my comfort zone. Unfortunately I couldn't continue maybe someday, probably not though, just too dam dark.
review 2star first then read 🤣 then give 5 nice story by the way also i sometimes hate the MC personality but overall good novel keepup the good work author[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I really like this fanfic, it's well done and not too predictable, even when the author tells everyone ahead of time what he's going to do. Looking forward to the next chapter.
It’s just another typical story about an unfeeling psychopath going around murdering people and stealing their powers. That’s really about it.
I recommend this...I am too lazy to write a review.......................................................................................................................------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,....
A significant improvement over the authors first work while reading this you can really see the author progress through out the chapters it's a great feeling
Ehh it's good but I drop this novel on worm story bc I don't know about worm nothing)) but it's good before worm I give 4 stars and good luck for you!))
the story was starting well with mc manipulator, he takes rick's memories and goes into the multiverse and tries to get stronger even though ruthless he kills various people for his safety but then towards star wars he becomes handicapped and stupid he keeps making mistakes, the story it is prolonged and there are stupid moments in history such as it no longer kills people in difficulty but then kills at random, there are moments that particular technologies appear and it is not known where mc got the materials to build them or various things, from sending that mc try to get stronger has become a story where he tries to save everyone and make a big scene like a megalomaniac saying or look what they did what happened there etc ..., making fun of everything and everyone just to lengthen the chapters, mc really has some problem with children every second must be the means by lengthening the story or making scenes for no reason, the author from his initial premise was too influenced by the comments of the people and lost the original purpose of the story, good start but horrible development
Spoiler de révélation I'm putting it 5 out of 5 for now because haven't read it yet but where can I find the worm novel and heroes I'm watching it so I know what is going on which session are you doing it on.
Overall it's a fun to read if u could ignore mc and anf his illogical thinking with unstable mind.. one second he kills kid next second he feels pity.. and too much forced plot just so mc could have character development.. and his power ups? Sadly no flashed out his powers relying too much on external technology and maybe author don't have exact knowledge of superpowers . Author made mc too op only to nerf him at the last arc.. overall if you can bear emotional drama and inconsistency and dumb thing and only focus on power fantasy story it's good
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