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good at first but disappointed on how the story will led to. good at first but disappointed on how the story will led to. good at first but disappointed on how the story will led to.
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to tell you the truth i Don't like this kind of good deeds.................. ....... ....... i like the antihero type. this is not the dish of most of readers although it is a harem & r18 ......
“Doing nothing is very hard to do… you never know when you’re finished.” "Dear Life: will you at least start using lube?"...................
You dropped the other book? Rise of a villian? Why? Please cjbtinue it, the chapters dont have to be long. This stupid 140 words thing sef
don't read if you don't like idiotic mc who can't controll his urges. r18novels usually try too hard to be cool and this book falls under that category
This novel is great and I can't understand how it isn't popular yet. Everything about it is currently really good. The characters while they can seem a little shallow the novel just hasn't had enough time to explore them yet. The story is interesting and you learn slowly about the world while reading. The only thing ut really is lacking is introducing a power system. Updating stability is great with 1 chapter every day.
This is all autotext from my phone. I’m not gonna be scared to sleep in bed until tomorrow I can do that tomorrow if you need anything else or if I’ll get a call when
I really liked the set-up of the world. Now while the synopsis has suggested a little of how the world works, in actuality, it's much more interesting and humorous. Will suggest for those who like urban novels like return of the immortal cultivator and strongest abandoned son. While different from the above this novel is good enough to get there.
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Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
its a shame that you dropped this "sigh" what a shame😭😭😭 hopefully you will go back to this😢🥺 but that's just me being wishful😢🥺 please finish this novel
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good at first but disappointed on how the story will led to. good at first but disappointed on how the story will led to. good at first but disappointed on how the story will led to.
Spoiler de révélation to tell you the truth i Don't like this kind of good deeds.................. ....... ....... i like the antihero type. this is not the dish of most of readers although it is a harem & r18 ......
“Doing nothing is very hard to do… you never know when you’re finished.” "Dear Life: will you at least start using lube?"...................
You dropped the other book? Rise of a villian? Why? Please cjbtinue it, the chapters dont have to be long. This stupid 140 words thing sef
don't read if you don't like idiotic mc who can't controll his urges. r18novels usually try too hard to be cool and this book falls under that category
This novel is great and I can't understand how it isn't popular yet. Everything about it is currently really good. The characters while they can seem a little shallow the novel just hasn't had enough time to explore them yet. The story is interesting and you learn slowly about the world while reading. The only thing ut really is lacking is introducing a power system. Updating stability is great with 1 chapter every day.
This is all autotext from my phone. I’m not gonna be scared to sleep in bed until tomorrow I can do that tomorrow if you need anything else or if I’ll get a call when
I really liked the set-up of the world. Now while the synopsis has suggested a little of how the world works, in actuality, it's much more interesting and humorous. Will suggest for those who like urban novels like return of the immortal cultivator and strongest abandoned son. While different from the above this novel is good enough to get there.
Recommended ......................................................................................................................................................................
Hey there! Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact leozhan2020*@*gmail.com (please ignore both * when sending email). A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
its a shame that you dropped this "sigh" what a shame😭😭😭 hopefully you will go back to this😢🥺 but that's just me being wishful😢🥺 please finish this novel