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In no way is this a 4 star. either alot fake reviews or deleting stuff. Its so generic and cliche..only thing that makes it different is timeframe and another village other than konoha. Mc has a system plus all affinities and the combos like kekkai genkais or whatever. Has them.all. gets 5 wishes so op af and no real.growth. its boring af
Too fast with no depth. ROB gave MC 5 wishes, but MC have 7; MC finishes academy and have used 3 kekkai genkai, is it freaking normal?! He wanna be killed in two years being in ninja world? I’ve dropped that concentration of stupidity just after 1st chapter. Good luck
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Favorite fanfic I thought I would hate with the system but I didn’ I loved it’s not a slave system just wish the update speed was faster
I find the story to be interesting and while it is a bit fast paced that is understandable since it nobody wants to hear about each individual bit of training the mc does. I have a slight problem with the fact that the author doesn't understand the storyline of Naruto. He keeps saying it is the 2nd war, but the second war had Tobirama as hokage and not Hiruzen. It is still acceptable up to this point, but you really do need to go back and change that.
character design really drags this story down. its not written poorly, but.. just the premise is too bad for the story to hold weight. the mc is given the most ridiculous advantages, but still acts like he deserves/earnt his strength. he has every element affinity, can takes anyone's kekkai genkai, has a tailed beast, all while being 10 years old. its set up to make the mc a god (literally). its just too much for it to be interesting/fulfilling. he beats the sannin at 10 years old.
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Absolutely amazing, must read if you are a fan of fan fiction ,also author please make it harem , thank you for the amazing work.
I absolutely love it and mc doesn't become stronger super fast to the point he is kage level in like 1 year also lots of chapters and they come out very often.
It's bad.... very bad I don't recommend to read it, if you still read it then be ready to see, 1st dumb mc, 2nd many many many many grammar mistakes, 3rd again dumb mc because he is dumb, 4th the wishes are bad asf and 5th the mc is a bit emo in the beginning. Please, just please don't read it, It's soooooooo bad.
I liked it goes against the standard of Naruto fanfics, I use Google translator so I can't rate the writing but the story is very competent....................... ........................................mmmmm..........................................
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Have you read " Naruto : Our goal is to dig the corner of konoha " novel ???.. that has some similarities with this one ... it's about an op mc from iwa who sways people to join iwa when danzo tries to kill them like the uchiha..
13 Chapters in can't read anymore the grammar is awful, the mc is been nerfed, the timing and spacing could do with a lot of work. The story is a good idea just done badly.
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never seen someone who took on such an early setting in naruto and even made it so balanced and yet so difficult for the character! a master assassin that won't shame the greatest hitmans in naruto. the fact he's a prodigy is only adding to his potential. I must say that iwagakure is the most amazing setting you could have chosen for this story! so I'd really recommend it and I wish there was much more chapters! can't wait to read more
An amazing story, great build-up and execution. I don't really have much else to say besides, maybe short chapters but that's it............
Easily one of the greatest Naruto storis written. This story is up there with best and is definitely in the top 3. I can’t fault this story on anything the author is writing a masterpiece.
In no way is this a 4 star. either alot fake reviews or deleting stuff. Its so generic and cliche..only thing that makes it different is timeframe and another village other than konoha. Mc has a system plus all affinities and the combos like kekkai genkais or whatever. Has them.all. gets 5 wishes so op af and no real.growth. its boring af
Too fast with no depth. ROB gave MC 5 wishes, but MC have 7; MC finishes academy and have used 3 kekkai genkai, is it freaking normal?! He wanna be killed in two years being in ninja world? I’ve dropped that concentration of stupidity just after 1st chapter. Good luck
Spoiler de révélation Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo Lololololololololololololololololololololololo I didn't even give it a chance. after all, he was born in willow.
Favorite fanfic I thought I would hate with the system but I didn’ I loved it’s not a slave system just wish the update speed was faster
I find the story to be interesting and while it is a bit fast paced that is understandable since it nobody wants to hear about each individual bit of training the mc does. I have a slight problem with the fact that the author doesn't understand the storyline of Naruto. He keeps saying it is the 2nd war, but the second war had Tobirama as hokage and not Hiruzen. It is still acceptable up to this point, but you really do need to go back and change that.
character design really drags this story down. its not written poorly, but.. just the premise is too bad for the story to hold weight. the mc is given the most ridiculous advantages, but still acts like he deserves/earnt his strength. he has every element affinity, can takes anyone's kekkai genkai, has a tailed beast, all while being 10 years old. its set up to make the mc a god (literally). its just too much for it to be interesting/fulfilling. he beats the sannin at 10 years old.
It’s so good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Absolutely amazing, must read if you are a fan of fan fiction ,also author please make it harem , thank you for the amazing work.
I absolutely love it and mc doesn't become stronger super fast to the point he is kage level in like 1 year also lots of chapters and they come out very often.
It's bad.... very bad I don't recommend to read it, if you still read it then be ready to see, 1st dumb mc, 2nd many many many many grammar mistakes, 3rd again dumb mc because he is dumb, 4th the wishes are bad asf and 5th the mc is a bit emo in the beginning. Please, just please don't read it, It's soooooooo bad.
I liked it goes against the standard of Naruto fanfics, I use Google translator so I can't rate the writing but the story is very competent....................... ........................................mmmmm..........................................
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Have you read " Naruto : Our goal is to dig the corner of konoha " novel ???.. that has some similarities with this one ... it's about an op mc from iwa who sways people to join iwa when danzo tries to kill them like the uchiha..
13 Chapters in can't read anymore the grammar is awful, the mc is been nerfed, the timing and spacing could do with a lot of work. The story is a good idea just done badly.
who is his love interest 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
never seen someone who took on such an early setting in naruto and even made it so balanced and yet so difficult for the character! a master assassin that won't shame the greatest hitmans in naruto. the fact he's a prodigy is only adding to his potential. I must say that iwagakure is the most amazing setting you could have chosen for this story! so I'd really recommend it and I wish there was much more chapters! can't wait to read more
An amazing story, great build-up and execution. I don't really have much else to say besides, maybe short chapters but that's it............
Easily one of the greatest Naruto storis written. This story is up there with best and is definitely in the top 3. I can’t fault this story on anything the author is writing a masterpiece.
there are other reviews and mine are the same.