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The plot is good and interesting to read. Till now the story is good. Waiting for Zach and Eunice to know the real Alice and get together. But at critical point, you stopped updating. That's so bad . Once you start a story,you should complete it. Since you decided to release a story, so don't stop updating or giving long breaks. I am sure many readers are waiting for the update. So please respond to this review and release new chapters.
it was a nice start but then I got confused with the characters. The story seems about their misunderstanding but the characters looks stupid, they are supposed to be smart since they are CEO's? I don't know how to explain it well. There is no updates as well, so I wouldn't recommend this novel.
The novel is good but i want to know if the author Is dropping this book. Waiting for a reply👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀
I was first attracted to this story by its name, then its synopsis. I like the story so far and the foreshadowing, and how the ml's thoughts were revealed but if I were her I honestly would not get back with probably after knowing I won't blame him as much for his neglect and failure to give a sense of security. Maybe that's just me being petty and holding a grudge but, he likes her and it wouldn't be stretching it to say that he's been waiting for her and the reason why he put himself in that position with Alice(the cousin, he was rumored to have a romantic affair with) was all for the princess she made to him(which has not been revealed yet). Yet 1)he did not make her feel like he truly loved her, 2)he hid the truth from her(that he never denied the rumors, at first, because he was just trying to protect Alice from the older men who wanted to take advantage of her, when she first joined the entertainment industry), 3) that he had always been interested in marrying her and starting a family with her, and from my personal evaluation of what I've read up to chapter 18 is 4) he did NOT protect her well enough, not from his CP fans*vomit* criticisms, not from the media that painted her out to be a homewrecker and NOT from *crazy* Alice. I feel like even if the author were to come back and start updating again I would read til the end but I would genuinely not be satisfied if she just got back together with him after realizing his true feelings, I mean there should be a reason why she was reborn with the memories of how much she had to give up and suffer in turn to be with him. AND... THAT IS MY (UNPOPULAR) OPINION. But I also remembered that the author added in the synopsis that this was an entry for a prompt, "Getting Back Together", so....... *sigh* we'll see. Or not depending on if the author decides to continue this story or not, since there hasn't been an update in a month.
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the story is actually nice I like the development and also how the things have been kept clear from the first chapter.I love the story and would like to see more of it
looks promising. just hope it get update daily. keep it up please. thank you.....................................................................
This novel is very promising. And I am looking forward to reading more. Just slow updates but I support the author. Hope you guys try reading this. I'm sure you will fall in love with the storyline too.
I must say everything about this book is just wonderful I love ❤️ The fl char acter and i cant wait for more updates 😍🥰😍🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😋🥰😘🥰😋😋😋😋😋😋
Totally loved the story so far ,the way the FL has matured , focussing of here near and dear ones is written too well. the first impression was that Eunice ia actually the third party but after reading Zach feelings I am too disappointed in him, he failed her. I hope he is able to cherish her and give her a happy life . also, waiting for the other love stories.
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Great interpretation of getting-back-together using the trope of travelling back into the past! Story is full of twist and turns and it's easy to get immersed into. Other than the eventual romance, family and friendships and the mystery of her car accident will easily hook in readers! A worthy winner of WPC #237!
IS A GOOD HISTORY BUT NEED MORE ACTION, IS A GOOD HISTORY BUT NEED MORE ACTION, LOVE AND developing.
This is the third book I'm reviewing. And I believe this book has a lot of potential. I've read the Chapters till now and all I have to say is you rock.... Keep working on it Author. 😌. And can you please give us a glimpse of what happened after Eunice died in her past life. And please make Zack regain his past memories so that he'll cherish her. And yeah make Eunice stronger then ever so she'll br able go protect her loved ones from Alice. Waiting for Victor and Eugene loves story. 😋😋😋. .
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Page Turner! A must read novel. I can't wait for things to happen in favor of Eunice. I wonder how things turned upside-down. The writer just made it so exciting 😍
This is the 2nd book by this author that I've read. Both are interesting. however both stories are left midway by the author. From waiting for days till months & finally I give up waiting. the 1st book, I've used many fast pass to unlock many chapters. Only to have the story hanging in the middle. I didn't realize this was the same author. Well, at least I haven't spend any fast passes on this book. I think there should be a guideline for Web Novel. Authors should upload only stories that they can finish. Please don't leave readers hanging like this :(
The plot is good and interesting to read. Till now the story is good. Waiting for Zach and Eunice to know the real Alice and get together. But at critical point, you stopped updating. That's so bad . Once you start a story,you should complete it. Since you decided to release a story, so don't stop updating or giving long breaks. I am sure many readers are waiting for the update. So please respond to this review and release new chapters.
it was a nice start but then I got confused with the characters. The story seems about their misunderstanding but the characters looks stupid, they are supposed to be smart since they are CEO's? I don't know how to explain it well. There is no updates as well, so I wouldn't recommend this novel.
The novel is good but i want to know if the author Is dropping this book. Waiting for a reply👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀👀
I was first attracted to this story by its name, then its synopsis. I like the story so far and the foreshadowing, and how the ml's thoughts were revealed but if I were her I honestly would not get back with probably after knowing I won't blame him as much for his neglect and failure to give a sense of security. Maybe that's just me being petty and holding a grudge but, he likes her and it wouldn't be stretching it to say that he's been waiting for her and the reason why he put himself in that position with Alice(the cousin, he was rumored to have a romantic affair with) was all for the princess she made to him(which has not been revealed yet). Yet 1)he did not make her feel like he truly loved her, 2)he hid the truth from her(that he never denied the rumors, at first, because he was just trying to protect Alice from the older men who wanted to take advantage of her, when she first joined the entertainment industry), 3) that he had always been interested in marrying her and starting a family with her, and from my personal evaluation of what I've read up to chapter 18 is 4) he did NOT protect her well enough, not from his CP fans*vomit* criticisms, not from the media that painted her out to be a homewrecker and NOT from *crazy* Alice. I feel like even if the author were to come back and start updating again I would read til the end but I would genuinely not be satisfied if she just got back together with him after realizing his true feelings, I mean there should be a reason why she was reborn with the memories of how much she had to give up and suffer in turn to be with him. AND... THAT IS MY (UNPOPULAR) OPINION. But I also remembered that the author added in the synopsis that this was an entry for a prompt, "Getting Back Together", so....... *sigh* we'll see. Or not depending on if the author decides to continue this story or not, since there hasn't been an update in a month.
Spoiler de révélation the story is actually nice I like the development and also how the things have been kept clear from the first chapter.I love the story and would like to see more of it
looks promising. just hope it get update daily. keep it up please. thank you.....................................................................
This novel is very promising. And I am looking forward to reading more. Just slow updates but I support the author. Hope you guys try reading this. I'm sure you will fall in love with the storyline too.
I must say everything about this book is just wonderful I love ❤️ The fl char acter and i cant wait for more updates 😍🥰😍🥰🥰🥰🥰😘😋🥰😘🥰😋😋😋😋😋😋
Totally loved the story so far ,the way the FL has matured , focussing of here near and dear ones is written too well. the first impression was that Eunice ia actually the third party but after reading Zach feelings I am too disappointed in him, he failed her. I hope he is able to cherish her and give her a happy life . also, waiting for the other love stories.
Spoiler de révélation Great interpretation of getting-back-together using the trope of travelling back into the past! Story is full of twist and turns and it's easy to get immersed into. Other than the eventual romance, family and friendships and the mystery of her car accident will easily hook in readers! A worthy winner of WPC #237!
IS A GOOD HISTORY BUT NEED MORE ACTION, IS A GOOD HISTORY BUT NEED MORE ACTION, LOVE AND developing.
This is the third book I'm reviewing. And I believe this book has a lot of potential. I've read the Chapters till now and all I have to say is you rock.... Keep working on it Author. 😌. And can you please give us a glimpse of what happened after Eunice died in her past life. And please make Zack regain his past memories so that he'll cherish her. And yeah make Eunice stronger then ever so she'll br able go protect her loved ones from Alice. Waiting for Victor and Eugene loves story. 😋😋😋. .
Spoiler de révélation Page Turner! A must read novel. I can't wait for things to happen in favor of Eunice. I wonder how things turned upside-down. The writer just made it so exciting 😍
This is the 2nd book by this author that I've read. Both are interesting. however both stories are left midway by the author. From waiting for days till months & finally I give up waiting. the 1st book, I've used many fast pass to unlock many chapters. Only to have the story hanging in the middle. I didn't realize this was the same author. Well, at least I haven't spend any fast passes on this book. I think there should be a guideline for Web Novel. Authors should upload only stories that they can finish. Please don't leave readers hanging like this :(