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- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
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I like the setting of the world and the characters, also the pacing is nice it's not too slow or too fast. The writing quality needs to improve though-I recommend the Grammarly app it helps with simple punctuation and synonyms. If the writing quality improves I'm sure many people and I would enjoy this novel.
I like the setting of the world and the characters, also the pacing is nice it's not too slow or too fast. The writing quality needs to improve though-I recommend the Grammarly app it helps with simple punctuation and synonyms. If the writing quality improves I'm sure many people and I would enjoy this novel.