Reviews of Self insert into the world of (Naruto) by Kagetanehiruko - Webnovel

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ankur_verma_1930

Great Story and idea, Although 4th chapter confused me a bit, reading it a second time cleared my doubts, I just wanted to ask what was that with Itachi there as Itachi didn't even join ANBU when the Kyuubi attacked

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SagaLF11

so far so good, although there are parts that seem unnecessary in the story, you update regularly, the progress of the story is fine, I like that the character is not white-haired, he is a Shimura, Naruto as a story has many mistakes, I hope that you can fill those script holes.

2yr
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PhanTom

The story as of now... Its fine for now. There are some minor grammatical mistakes but its doable for now///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

2yr
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Gd_Sys

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2yr
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ankur_verma_1930

Great Story and idea, Although 4th chapter confused me a bit, reading it a second time cleared my doubts, I just wanted to ask what was that with Itachi there as Itachi didn't even join ANBU when the Kyuubi attacked

2yr
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SagaLF11

so far so good, although there are parts that seem unnecessary in the story, you update regularly, the progress of the story is fine, I like that the character is not white-haired, he is a Shimura, Naruto as a story has many mistakes, I hope that you can fill those script holes.

2yr
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PhanTom

The story as of now... Its fine for now. There are some minor grammatical mistakes but its doable for now///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

2yr
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Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

2yr
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