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Écrire un avisso far so good, although there are parts that seem unnecessary in the story, you update regularly, the progress of the story is fine, I like that the character is not white-haired, he is a Shimura, Naruto as a story has many mistakes, I hope that you can fill those script holes.
The story as of now... Its fine for now. There are some minor grammatical mistakes but its doable for now///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Great Story and idea, Although 4th chapter confused me a bit, reading it a second time cleared my doubts, I just wanted to ask what was that with Itachi there as Itachi didn't even join ANBU when the Kyuubi attacked
so far so good, although there are parts that seem unnecessary in the story, you update regularly, the progress of the story is fine, I like that the character is not white-haired, he is a Shimura, Naruto as a story has many mistakes, I hope that you can fill those script holes.
The story as of now... Its fine for now. There are some minor grammatical mistakes but its doable for now///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Great Story and idea, Although 4th chapter confused me a bit, reading it a second time cleared my doubts, I just wanted to ask what was that with Itachi there as Itachi didn't even join ANBU when the Kyuubi attacked