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Love the build up, and speed of the story. The action is fun and believable. The comedy side of things is alittle flat. And maybe alittle more then a passing glance at the downtime is needed to show not tell the bond shared with his pokemon.
Writing Quality: Excellent Story Development: Excellent Character: Good Update: Less update but super long chapters World: As expected of Pokemon Overall: Satisfied
This is a wonderful fan fiction, I enjoy the attention to details and the slow pace of the story.
Pls update soon 🙏 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
More, give me more!!! Anyways, I really enjoyed reading the story, good tone, pace, and grammar really makes this a great read. I'm glad I foudn this! Thanks, hope you update soon!![img=update]
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An amazing story with lots of potential to come, with the lineup of pokemon and the knowledge this can go very far.also the way the world is talked about you can fill the the care put into development!
Amazing story. I love the writing style and mc. Also how dianthia's ralts developed a phobia of feebas. So please keep up the good work and update soon thanks
did u drop this?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I really liked your fanfic and am looking forward to reading more of it ......so please update next chapters faster with less gap between them ...really looking forward to it
Approximately 50k + words in while reviewing. Review: Writing quality is amongst the best you can find on this site. Story development seems great as of now but can't be sure from here on. Character development is the biggest plus point as even the side characters like MC's dad and mom seemed three dimensional. Update stability is also good, I mean you can never complain if one chapter has 5k+ words. World background is also good as we are seeing the story in the Kalos area, an area where not many fanfictions dwell into. My Worries: MC seems to get everything with literally no effort and a lack of an antagonist or at least a suspense to things might bore some readers after a certain point of time. Not started the journey but is already at the level where he can beat people who have more than 6 or 7 badges, so I wonder if the book will end with just 30 chapters in. At the pace the story is going and how op the MC might get by the age of 10, there will be no need to continue the story after a certain point in time. These are my concerns Author, for now, it's a five star for its great quality but will change it after 20 chapters in.
I’m looking forward to the pathway you set for your mc. This story is engaging. I rate it five stars in the hope you continue to completion.
its really good but i don't want to write a lot so, each chapter is very long and extensive----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Aunque la historia es bastante nueva,la recomiendo ya que es mejor que las tipicas hisrias que van haciendo time skips y no cuentan demasiado de lo que paso o que de una no te muestran el pasado del prota y durante la historia te la van contando de a poco (todas las historia que lei de ese tipo no me gustaron)
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I haven't read it im just giving five stars for snarky synopsis, ...........................................................................
Good start, added to the library for follow-up, I'm waiting for more chapters. advice not to name the team he is going to assemble, helps people to know which pokemon he has without getting confused, another advice would be to leave the team limited to 6 pokemons, easier to manage their personalities...
Great stuff. I hope you got a release schedule because I crave for more ....................................... ............................
Even though i know there is nothing thats much thicker than delia's ***, i should atleast probably give it a try. .
continue with this great fanfic author, i loved the story, so far i found the chapters very good, and a very good read, i'm waiting for more
Es un de los mejores fanfiction de pokémon, me gusto el protagonista y la manera en que interactúan con otros personajes, su historia familiar es interesante, además los pokemon que consiguió fueron buenos y se les dio un buen desarrollo a la historia de estos,cosas como el porque son diferentes o la razón del porque los consiguió fue muy bien explicado. Los capítulos tardan mucho en ser publicados, pero son compensados por el tamaño de cada capítulo, cada capítulo es como 3 o 5 capítulos de algunos autores. ☆4.6
Love the build up, and speed of the story. The action is fun and believable. The comedy side of things is alittle flat. And maybe alittle more then a passing glance at the downtime is needed to show not tell the bond shared with his pokemon.
Writing Quality: Excellent Story Development: Excellent Character: Good Update: Less update but super long chapters World: As expected of Pokemon Overall: Satisfied
This is a wonderful fan fiction, I enjoy the attention to details and the slow pace of the story.
Pls update soon 🙏 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
More, give me more!!! Anyways, I really enjoyed reading the story, good tone, pace, and grammar really makes this a great read. I'm glad I foudn this! Thanks, hope you update soon!![img=update]
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An amazing story with lots of potential to come, with the lineup of pokemon and the knowledge this can go very far.also the way the world is talked about you can fill the the care put into development!
Amazing story. I love the writing style and mc. Also how dianthia's ralts developed a phobia of feebas. So please keep up the good work and update soon thanks
did u drop this?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I really liked your fanfic and am looking forward to reading more of it ......so please update next chapters faster with less gap between them ...really looking forward to it
Approximately 50k + words in while reviewing. Review: Writing quality is amongst the best you can find on this site. Story development seems great as of now but can't be sure from here on. Character development is the biggest plus point as even the side characters like MC's dad and mom seemed three dimensional. Update stability is also good, I mean you can never complain if one chapter has 5k+ words. World background is also good as we are seeing the story in the Kalos area, an area where not many fanfictions dwell into. My Worries: MC seems to get everything with literally no effort and a lack of an antagonist or at least a suspense to things might bore some readers after a certain point of time. Not started the journey but is already at the level where he can beat people who have more than 6 or 7 badges, so I wonder if the book will end with just 30 chapters in. At the pace the story is going and how op the MC might get by the age of 10, there will be no need to continue the story after a certain point in time. These are my concerns Author, for now, it's a five star for its great quality but will change it after 20 chapters in.
I’m looking forward to the pathway you set for your mc. This story is engaging. I rate it five stars in the hope you continue to completion.
its really good but i don't want to write a lot so, each chapter is very long and extensive----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Aunque la historia es bastante nueva,la recomiendo ya que es mejor que las tipicas hisrias que van haciendo time skips y no cuentan demasiado de lo que paso o que de una no te muestran el pasado del prota y durante la historia te la van contando de a poco (todas las historia que lei de ese tipo no me gustaron)
Spoiler de révélation I haven't read it im just giving five stars for snarky synopsis, ...........................................................................
Good start, added to the library for follow-up, I'm waiting for more chapters. advice not to name the team he is going to assemble, helps people to know which pokemon he has without getting confused, another advice would be to leave the team limited to 6 pokemons, easier to manage their personalities...
Great stuff. I hope you got a release schedule because I crave for more ....................................... ............................
Even though i know there is nothing thats much thicker than delia's ***, i should atleast probably give it a try. .
continue with this great fanfic author, i loved the story, so far i found the chapters very good, and a very good read, i'm waiting for more
Es un de los mejores fanfiction de pokémon, me gusto el protagonista y la manera en que interactúan con otros personajes, su historia familiar es interesante, además los pokemon que consiguió fueron buenos y se les dio un buen desarrollo a la historia de estos,cosas como el porque son diferentes o la razón del porque los consiguió fue muy bien explicado. Los capítulos tardan mucho en ser publicados, pero son compensados por el tamaño de cada capítulo, cada capítulo es como 3 o 5 capítulos de algunos autores. ☆4.6