36Critiques
4.59
- Qualité de l’écriture
- Stabilité des mises à jour
- Développement de l’histoire
- Conception des personnages
- Contexte du monde
Partagez vos pensées avec les autres
Écrire un avis
The quality and pacing of story is really good..i dont mind reading 1000 more chapters without break if the story is just as smooth like this as it is now. Only time i feel like this when i am reading Fate destroying Emperor.
good............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
it was obvious that there will always be a delay in the final moment... typical reader-bait plot, author treating the reader like a fish... I've seen many xinxias like this. You have to read until the end for a total romantic dishonor. Besides that this mc is pretty disgusting, if you analyze well, he won everything for free without effort, and still doesn't have much personality, despite being in the category of romances nominated for men, it's clearer a female domination with a dubious emaciated mc .
bro do you still wish to continue or not did you died 😑......................................................need next chap...................
Ah pasado mucho tiempo ojalá le reanuden es muy buena novela Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm
Great story....good characters, interesting world, it's on hiatus but worth the read..................................................................
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Author I am on 15th chapter right now and I must say, I am loving it but you are not updating new chapters...is this novel dropped? if so I'll stop reading it now. I'll wait for response before continuing.
What happened that no more updates were uploaded by the author, the novel is good, well, I hope to see one more chapter of it, I did not stop writing it, it is good
i like the novel very much it is very good you can give a try in this novel i am sure you will like it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
An novel with an 1000th years virginity, how stupid can be this novel i Vander, i can't read something so stupid, is illogical mmjmmmmjj mmjmmmmjj mmjmmmmjj mmjmmmmjj mmjmmmmjj mmjmmmmjj
honestly incredibly difficult to get through. I like the concept but the execution is truly horrendous. it needs much polishing in order to be decent
Отличный роман , отличное начало ! Мне очень понравились. Когда читал только не нравилось что гг такой слабый , но походу развития сюжета он становится более жестоким что мне очень нравится (смахивает на свою жену) . Пожалуйста не бросайте этот роман
It's a well-written story, and the main characters are satisfactorily developed, however, the number of chapters seems to be unsatisfactory for the author to be able to extract the full potential of what has been presented so far (until chapter 40, which is where I left off) . There are also some uncomfortable little points to read, but hard to imagine, like the fact that the protagonist has been a virgin for 100,000 years, or simply the age of the characters (the youngest so far is 400 years old), the protagonist is 100,000 and his wife 200.00... I can only imagine an elderly couple, even if they look young. In the end the story is good, the negative points are small and don't interfere with the experience, I just wish it was a story with a bigger development (and with more chapters!), but anyway I'll keep reading until the end, until now I recommend it!
...................................................................................................................................................................
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I have only left a few reviews on my journey on this site...i try not to read new novels or any novel that doesnt have few hundred chapter's. I will say im glad i picked this one up good read so far..
You will regret not reading novel as its a masterpiece author has written great characters and novel plot flows very nicely and as long as the author continues like this his novel will be one of the best
What can I say this novel has great potential what can I review its great for me I wish you Author good luck and hope more people read this cuz they are going to miss a very good novel I RECOMMEND THIS TO ANYONE DON'T PASS BY SUCH A TREASURE Don't stop writing or Imma kill you im really enjoying this [img=update] only if i had money to send some gifts 😧
This is an awesome and interesting book with a good premise and great characters. I'm hooked to it I must say and Hope the author continue with the flow.
First 'real' review here. First of all. Writing Quality: There are a few mistakes here and there, but overall it is readable with little to no difficulty. The mistakes are not that common either, but even then one could read the novel without issue. So 4 * is a good rating. Stability of Updates: So far I have seen 1-2 chapters per day, which is consistent. Nothing bad about that. Story Development: Typical cultivation novel, but even then the power realms ain't the same bs as 'body tempering' or some bs. The realms are huge and the apex realm is called 'Grand Paragon' not some bs. The apex realm in novel can literally make the heavenly laws shake and welcome 'its ruler.' So I have no issue with this either. Character Design: MC ain't bland, he has a life story and is nothing about that 'control my own fate' bs. He knows he is weak and isn't actively trying to find a way to cultivate because he knows he can't. Or can he? The wife is the most adorable thing I have read, she is cold to others but very overprotective over her husband. Their relationship develops quite well with a lot of funny interactions. The other side characters are also pretty interesting. They have their own role to play, and although there is some mystery to some characters it is slowly revealed. World Background: FANTASTIC!! Different Universes or 'realms' are part of the novel. Each universe has its own things and of course they are at odds with each other. The Empire and world is greatly worked on. How the apex cultivators control the universes and protect them is also great. I really have no issue with the novel besides the short chapters and occasional grammar mistake. Keep it up!
I love this so far I saw you said there was no yandere tag why not add that in to the description I was kinda getting that vibe from her but I wasn’t positive until I checked? I love it though!
I really like the novel its way different from the rest. The only part I don't like is where the mc sometimes gets scared of his wife and she has also beaten him once, I hope as the novel progresses mc become the dominant one. I don't mind if FL is the dominant one but if she beats the mc and mc is a simp, that is a big NO. That's just my opinion but overall if you ignore this the novel is great .
I only wanted to check it out because of the title and cover but it surprisingly isn't bad orcliche at all. The book has a great potential but it's still pretty early to judge.
So far the novel is very good, some scenes funny, some involving discoveries. I can say that if the author doesn't give up, he has very high potential to be a good book
Nice [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] I'm looking forward to the next chapters with much anticipation. [img=update]
This is a good novel, a Great novel I dare say. A completely original idea or so I think. Well executed by this author the writing an imagery are very descriptive and I am excited for further development
Hey i am here again with new id but is this still dropped hey author when will you continue this one it’s been two years since this one is in my reading of old id can you please continue or tell me us if it’s going to drop
The quality and pacing of story is really good..i dont mind reading 1000 more chapters without break if the story is just as smooth like this as it is now. Only time i feel like this when i am reading Fate destroying Emperor.
good............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
it was obvious that there will always be a delay in the final moment... typical reader-bait plot, author treating the reader like a fish... I've seen many xinxias like this. You have to read until the end for a total romantic dishonor. Besides that this mc is pretty disgusting, if you analyze well, he won everything for free without effort, and still doesn't have much personality, despite being in the category of romances nominated for men, it's clearer a female domination with a dubious emaciated mc .
bro do you still wish to continue or not did you died 😑......................................................need next chap...................
Ah pasado mucho tiempo ojalá le reanuden es muy buena novela Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm
Great story....good characters, interesting world, it's on hiatus but worth the read..................................................................
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Author I am on 15th chapter right now and I must say, I am loving it but you are not updating new chapters...is this novel dropped? if so I'll stop reading it now. I'll wait for response before continuing.
What happened that no more updates were uploaded by the author, the novel is good, well, I hope to see one more chapter of it, I did not stop writing it, it is good
i like the novel very much it is very good you can give a try in this novel i am sure you will like it ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
An novel with an 1000th years virginity, how stupid can be this novel i Vander, i can't read something so stupid, is illogical mmjmmmmjj mmjmmmmjj mmjmmmmjj mmjmmmmjj mmjmmmmjj mmjmmmmjj
honestly incredibly difficult to get through. I like the concept but the execution is truly horrendous. it needs much polishing in order to be decent
Отличный роман , отличное начало ! Мне очень понравились. Когда читал только не нравилось что гг такой слабый , но походу развития сюжета он становится более жестоким что мне очень нравится (смахивает на свою жену) . Пожалуйста не бросайте этот роман
It's a well-written story, and the main characters are satisfactorily developed, however, the number of chapters seems to be unsatisfactory for the author to be able to extract the full potential of what has been presented so far (until chapter 40, which is where I left off) . There are also some uncomfortable little points to read, but hard to imagine, like the fact that the protagonist has been a virgin for 100,000 years, or simply the age of the characters (the youngest so far is 400 years old), the protagonist is 100,000 and his wife 200.00... I can only imagine an elderly couple, even if they look young. In the end the story is good, the negative points are small and don't interfere with the experience, I just wish it was a story with a bigger development (and with more chapters!), but anyway I'll keep reading until the end, until now I recommend it!
...................................................................................................................................................................
Love the story so far, thanks.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I have only left a few reviews on my journey on this site...i try not to read new novels or any novel that doesnt have few hundred chapter's. I will say im glad i picked this one up good read so far..
You will regret not reading novel as its a masterpiece author has written great characters and novel plot flows very nicely and as long as the author continues like this his novel will be one of the best
What can I say this novel has great potential what can I review its great for me I wish you Author good luck and hope more people read this cuz they are going to miss a very good novel I RECOMMEND THIS TO ANYONE DON'T PASS BY SUCH A TREASURE Don't stop writing or Imma kill you im really enjoying this [img=update] only if i had money to send some gifts 😧
This is an awesome and interesting book with a good premise and great characters. I'm hooked to it I must say and Hope the author continue with the flow.
First 'real' review here. First of all. Writing Quality: There are a few mistakes here and there, but overall it is readable with little to no difficulty. The mistakes are not that common either, but even then one could read the novel without issue. So 4 * is a good rating. Stability of Updates: So far I have seen 1-2 chapters per day, which is consistent. Nothing bad about that. Story Development: Typical cultivation novel, but even then the power realms ain't the same bs as 'body tempering' or some bs. The realms are huge and the apex realm is called 'Grand Paragon' not some bs. The apex realm in novel can literally make the heavenly laws shake and welcome 'its ruler.' So I have no issue with this either. Character Design: MC ain't bland, he has a life story and is nothing about that 'control my own fate' bs. He knows he is weak and isn't actively trying to find a way to cultivate because he knows he can't. Or can he? The wife is the most adorable thing I have read, she is cold to others but very overprotective over her husband. Their relationship develops quite well with a lot of funny interactions. The other side characters are also pretty interesting. They have their own role to play, and although there is some mystery to some characters it is slowly revealed. World Background: FANTASTIC!! Different Universes or 'realms' are part of the novel. Each universe has its own things and of course they are at odds with each other. The Empire and world is greatly worked on. How the apex cultivators control the universes and protect them is also great. I really have no issue with the novel besides the short chapters and occasional grammar mistake. Keep it up!
I love this so far I saw you said there was no yandere tag why not add that in to the description I was kinda getting that vibe from her but I wasn’t positive until I checked? I love it though!
I really like the novel its way different from the rest. The only part I don't like is where the mc sometimes gets scared of his wife and she has also beaten him once, I hope as the novel progresses mc become the dominant one. I don't mind if FL is the dominant one but if she beats the mc and mc is a simp, that is a big NO. That's just my opinion but overall if you ignore this the novel is great .
I only wanted to check it out because of the title and cover but it surprisingly isn't bad orcliche at all. The book has a great potential but it's still pretty early to judge.
So far the novel is very good, some scenes funny, some involving discoveries. I can say that if the author doesn't give up, he has very high potential to be a good book
Nice [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] I'm looking forward to the next chapters with much anticipation. [img=update]
This is a good novel, a Great novel I dare say. A completely original idea or so I think. Well executed by this author the writing an imagery are very descriptive and I am excited for further development
Hey i am here again with new id but is this still dropped hey author when will you continue this one it’s been two years since this one is in my reading of old id can you please continue or tell me us if it’s going to drop