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Boring. No dialogue what so ever he is just. the story is from 3rd person's pov. it's like I found itachi I took his eyes, I went to nagato took his eyes, I went to toneri took his eyes wait a minute toneri doesn't have eyes. just replace eyes with sacred gear and DNA. it just boring story.
this is a good fanfic and i like the storyline.. keep the spirit of the author and i will support your work.. I'm waiting for the continuation of the story
it's a very good fanfic I am on chapter 9 and it is wonderful please continue the great work and complete the novel I will daily give you my voting stones thanks 😇
Хорошо написано, продолжай в том же духе. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Boring. No dialogue what so ever he is just. the story is from 3rd person's pov. it's like I found itachi I took his eyes, I went to nagato took his eyes, I went to toneri took his eyes wait a minute toneri doesn't have eyes. just replace eyes with sacred gear and DNA. it just boring story.
this is a good fanfic and i like the storyline.. keep the spirit of the author and i will support your work.. I'm waiting for the continuation of the story
it's a very good fanfic I am on chapter 9 and it is wonderful please continue the great work and complete the novel I will daily give you my voting stones thanks 😇
Хорошо написано, продолжай в том же духе. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
what happen to 'I Can Travel All Dimension'? 🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔🤔