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Everything is amazing just the grammar think of it as a ltm because it’s translated from another language to English but it’s a emotional fun time book. And I hope the author comes back to finish it.
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this is the kind of novel story I really want to read always..but what happened to the author.. I finished reading this last chapter the moment it got posted..if you're wondering why 5 stars just read it carefully and understand it, I promise you won't regret it.
I won’t lie the authors writting evolves after a while I read most of the chapters and yes those beginning chapters are long wordy and painful to read but I enjoyed evedythinh after also you might wanna Make some changes because of webnovels winc*st rules
So unfortunately I don't like the type of work with tragedy and mystery. I generally read to have fun, so I prefer something more light and fun, I've cried a lot in the 35 chapters I've read, not to mention that I read right at the beginning that his sister is going to be killed. What makes me sad about this work is that it is very well written. I'm going to give it a 5* rating because although it's not to my particular taste, the work itself is very good, so if you have a strong mind and like mystery, war, conspiracies and character growth you'll love this novel. I recommend reading it if you like this genre.
The authors' choice of transmigration and immaturity doesn't go along well together. A grown man acting all childish doesn't go along that's all.Also the development, till 16 chapters not even a day has passed. Thousands of words and yet only some progress. Loads of fillers in it, that doesn't contribute anything to the plot.I hope the author edits and paces their work properly in the future.
i know this is tragedy and i hope its talking about his sister that happens in the 30-50 chapters and wish no more. questions is, does any of his family and lovers will be u know like his sisters tragedy in the future????????? base on the foreshadows happening to him like the bodies of dead females scattered around him especially some with the face of his mother and families if im not wrong. my view, after the overdramatic, childishly ch. 1-50 it became excellent is all i can say, but still the early chapters leave a bitter taste could have done better with some edit like the mc's childishness (age 9 but act like 4-6 y old) and the death of his sister.
my only regret about this is that I wish I had read this sooner!!! Love every bit of this. THANK YOU, AUTHOR!!! looking forward to future updates
MC is cringe, I'm 35 chapters in and MC keeps giving off sissy vibes... a grown man having a kids body and he couldn't be the dominant personality...
finally author is back :D pls if you can realese more chapters thankyou .............................................................................
The writing is fine. But I didn't start reading this story expecting a tragedy. If you want to write a tragedy that's fine, but mark it as such.
Amazing! I realy like it. Characters fill alive and real and worldbuilding is perfect with good romance and action Pls realese moreeee Thanks i realy like your work im not very good with english so.... yeah if you saw any mistake sorry 😅 good luck
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Димон из Норильска, сочувствую этому добряку. Про ругательства на русском полностью согласен, не могу представить свою жизнь без них, на английском только факин щиты и это убивает меня. Автор ублюдок из-за убийства сводной сестры главного героя, но я до сих пор читаю это и после. Роман мне нравится, ставлю 5/5
spoilers ahead I have reached chapter 297, and the story is going very well, in particular the interactions between Christian and his daughter Helen, they are the best, I hope and continue like this.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It would be pretty nice if Mac was a child of 10 years old, and here is a mature personality of 24 years old, he is a stacky personality in chapter 1-3, had to clean up all his thoughts after renkarnations and start acting and a stacky family effect taboo, (it would be nice)but not fate.(Personally, I have no pretensions, well, the plot is not in my taste)
I would like to know because almost all the romances in this inverted world style the MC is small and effeminate I'm not being sexist or anything with chistas lol but when I imagine the MC in these in these worlds i see in the best example i can give WW of paragon of sin which is said as a totally masculine beauty without having a face as "as beautiful as a woman" or because who makes romance d this team likes androgynous MC 🤔
if u expect to find a relaxing and smutty read looking at the synopsis, then ur totally wrong.. the story is full of DRAMA and complicated stuff..i have crossed 100 chapters so far and tbh i skipped most of the details in the chapters as the reason i gave already, it was full of unnecessary drama.. the story may start which may make the mc look intelligent and always on control with the situations around him..but later he just turns into a sitting lamb being pushed around and beaten according to wishes of the bigger heads ,where the mc just accepts his fate.. i guess he would overcome it and make them pay for their sins in the future, but i couldn't continue further for now as it just got too annoying for me to bare..because I'm not really a fan of stories where they make the mc wait and suffer to only get their revenge years later.. i will remove this biased review once I get to know how it turns out in the end if the revenge arc satisfies me...i was just really tempted to submit all my one sided ramblings from all the annoying complications in a story where i wanted to njoy reading
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This novel is amazing, I think it's my favorite novel, keep it up.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The novel is amazing. But im just saying some things that the mc missed in the Vatican - that being the Chronovisor (witch is real mind you just hidden extremely well) it can basically see the past. The minutes of the trials against the Knights Templar - is i believe the second thing he missed but im not sure. And other things (idk think further of this you're self)
recuerdo los primeros capitulos nunca me gustaron me salte al capitulo 50 pero no entendia nada hoy en dia espero con impaciencia el proximo capitulo asi que sigue como escribes autor sou un gran fanatico de tu trabajo esto lo digo de corazon
A very long winded story that takes 50 chapters to basically progress to nothing. Author describes things in detail adding way too much filler(in my opinion) Characters are very edgy and repeat things and do the same thing 3 times in a chapter. Honestly the idea is good but the execution leaves a bitter taste and a migraine
I liked this review, but Webnovel removed it. I don't know how many stars he gave, but I'll give 4 based on his words. Lately Webnovel is debugging a lot of comments and tags, it's annoying.
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Everything is amazing just the grammar think of it as a ltm because it’s translated from another language to English but it’s a emotional fun time book. And I hope the author comes back to finish it.
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Spoiler de révélation this is the kind of novel story I really want to read always..but what happened to the author.. I finished reading this last chapter the moment it got posted..if you're wondering why 5 stars just read it carefully and understand it, I promise you won't regret it.
I won’t lie the authors writting evolves after a while I read most of the chapters and yes those beginning chapters are long wordy and painful to read but I enjoyed evedythinh after also you might wanna Make some changes because of webnovels winc*st rules
So unfortunately I don't like the type of work with tragedy and mystery. I generally read to have fun, so I prefer something more light and fun, I've cried a lot in the 35 chapters I've read, not to mention that I read right at the beginning that his sister is going to be killed. What makes me sad about this work is that it is very well written. I'm going to give it a 5* rating because although it's not to my particular taste, the work itself is very good, so if you have a strong mind and like mystery, war, conspiracies and character growth you'll love this novel. I recommend reading it if you like this genre.
The authors' choice of transmigration and immaturity doesn't go along well together. A grown man acting all childish doesn't go along that's all.Also the development, till 16 chapters not even a day has passed. Thousands of words and yet only some progress. Loads of fillers in it, that doesn't contribute anything to the plot.I hope the author edits and paces their work properly in the future.
i know this is tragedy and i hope its talking about his sister that happens in the 30-50 chapters and wish no more. questions is, does any of his family and lovers will be u know like his sisters tragedy in the future????????? base on the foreshadows happening to him like the bodies of dead females scattered around him especially some with the face of his mother and families if im not wrong. my view, after the overdramatic, childishly ch. 1-50 it became excellent is all i can say, but still the early chapters leave a bitter taste could have done better with some edit like the mc's childishness (age 9 but act like 4-6 y old) and the death of his sister.
my only regret about this is that I wish I had read this sooner!!! Love every bit of this. THANK YOU, AUTHOR!!! looking forward to future updates
MC is cringe, I'm 35 chapters in and MC keeps giving off sissy vibes... a grown man having a kids body and he couldn't be the dominant personality...
finally author is back :D pls if you can realese more chapters thankyou .............................................................................
The writing is fine. But I didn't start reading this story expecting a tragedy. If you want to write a tragedy that's fine, but mark it as such.
Amazing! I realy like it. Characters fill alive and real and worldbuilding is perfect with good romance and action Pls realese moreeee Thanks i realy like your work im not very good with english so.... yeah if you saw any mistake sorry 😅 good luck
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Димон из Норильска, сочувствую этому добряку. Про ругательства на русском полностью согласен, не могу представить свою жизнь без них, на английском только факин щиты и это убивает меня. Автор ублюдок из-за убийства сводной сестры главного героя, но я до сих пор читаю это и после. Роман мне нравится, ставлю 5/5
spoilers ahead I have reached chapter 297, and the story is going very well, in particular the interactions between Christian and his daughter Helen, they are the best, I hope and continue like this.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It would be pretty nice if Mac was a child of 10 years old, and here is a mature personality of 24 years old, he is a stacky personality in chapter 1-3, had to clean up all his thoughts after renkarnations and start acting and a stacky family effect taboo, (it would be nice)but not fate.(Personally, I have no pretensions, well, the plot is not in my taste)
I would like to know because almost all the romances in this inverted world style the MC is small and effeminate I'm not being sexist or anything with chistas lol but when I imagine the MC in these in these worlds i see in the best example i can give WW of paragon of sin which is said as a totally masculine beauty without having a face as "as beautiful as a woman" or because who makes romance d this team likes androgynous MC 🤔
if u expect to find a relaxing and smutty read looking at the synopsis, then ur totally wrong.. the story is full of DRAMA and complicated stuff..i have crossed 100 chapters so far and tbh i skipped most of the details in the chapters as the reason i gave already, it was full of unnecessary drama.. the story may start which may make the mc look intelligent and always on control with the situations around him..but later he just turns into a sitting lamb being pushed around and beaten according to wishes of the bigger heads ,where the mc just accepts his fate.. i guess he would overcome it and make them pay for their sins in the future, but i couldn't continue further for now as it just got too annoying for me to bare..because I'm not really a fan of stories where they make the mc wait and suffer to only get their revenge years later.. i will remove this biased review once I get to know how it turns out in the end if the revenge arc satisfies me...i was just really tempted to submit all my one sided ramblings from all the annoying complications in a story where i wanted to njoy reading
Spoiler de révélation This novel is amazing, I think it's my favorite novel, keep it up.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The novel is amazing. But im just saying some things that the mc missed in the Vatican - that being the Chronovisor (witch is real mind you just hidden extremely well) it can basically see the past. The minutes of the trials against the Knights Templar - is i believe the second thing he missed but im not sure. And other things (idk think further of this you're self)
recuerdo los primeros capitulos nunca me gustaron me salte al capitulo 50 pero no entendia nada hoy en dia espero con impaciencia el proximo capitulo asi que sigue como escribes autor sou un gran fanatico de tu trabajo esto lo digo de corazon
A very long winded story that takes 50 chapters to basically progress to nothing. Author describes things in detail adding way too much filler(in my opinion) Characters are very edgy and repeat things and do the same thing 3 times in a chapter. Honestly the idea is good but the execution leaves a bitter taste and a migraine
I liked this review, but Webnovel removed it. I don't know how many stars he gave, but I'll give 4 based on his words. Lately Webnovel is debugging a lot of comments and tags, it's annoying.
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