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lousy protagonist the story has no spark the concept with which he plays only works if there are charismatic characters or complex situations this story is the justification for why they do so many kiritos
don't get me wrong author I like the concept of the story, it's just something about it just feels, wrong like it's hindering me from fully enjoying such novel. novel has potential minimal grammar mistakes and readable, it's good but not everyone will like it
I don't like the main character. No offense author, but, uh, if this is made after you, then you're a bit dumb. I don't enjoy such mcs. Blergh blah blah
This is good, the mc did act dumb for not choosing a cheat, but the mcs actions are abit more realistic, like seriously if something can kill won't you consider running away?
lousy protagonist the story has no spark the concept with which he plays only works if there are charismatic characters or complex situations this story is the justification for why they do so many kiritos
don't get me wrong author I like the concept of the story, it's just something about it just feels, wrong like it's hindering me from fully enjoying such novel. novel has potential minimal grammar mistakes and readable, it's good but not everyone will like it
I don't like the main character. No offense author, but, uh, if this is made after you, then you're a bit dumb. I don't enjoy such mcs. Blergh blah blah
This is good, the mc did act dumb for not choosing a cheat, but the mcs actions are abit more realistic, like seriously if something can kill won't you consider running away?