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[Reviewed on: 24-01-2022] [Reading status: 7 chapters] Let me first praise the author for constructing smooth flow of the narration. It starts off wonderfully with the gruesome scene of a psychiatric ward, however the character development begins from an amazing point where we have sympathy for the female lead and a deeply rooted hatred for her father. Although the mysterious tone which revolves around every character keeps the readers interesting, and hooked because it gives off a separate and visible screen time to each character. Moving onto the male lead, the character appears to be an interesting supernatural being, what piqued interest in the initial chapters is the revelation "MC knew about the female lead." Nonetheless, a well crafted and well-thought book! Eager to see the author pumping out plenty of successful books! ❤
This is a very well written book.I love that's its different from the usual werewolves books.When I started this book I read it all in one day.I just couldn't wait to see what happened next.
If you enjoy reading about horrible people doing horrible things to other horrible people with no world building or character depth, just someone's harley quinn OC being abused and going ♤~*cRaZy*~♤ while constantly forgetting what a baseball bat is called, this story is for you. And by that, I mean this story sucks and is for no one, don't waste your time.
I was surprised with this story but i am living it so far. Adrik and Leia 😍 can't wait to jeep reading it
I love that this story was a bit different than others. Yes, like other stories, it has several different characters to love and hate. You still have the main characters to root for; but, this one takes different turns than the usual story line. Very nice.....thank you for the wonderful adventure!
it's good to read,this book has 18 but it's okay if you are a open minded person.The flow of the story are smooth and the characters are so fine,and I would like to thank the author for making this kind of novel.....I hope that you will make more stories
One of the best stories I’ve read, trust me you’ll love it. it’s awesome and intriguing, thank you author Lily 🥰❤️❤️❤️
it was really interesting and fun the Novel word is really understandable and enjoyable
The story's writing is decent. But the story's narrative lacks any excitement that might inspire the reader's enthusiasm. makes one want to stop reading the book in the middle. When reading a novel, unless it is comedic (which this is not), people must be able to hunger for more of the storylines (wanting to know what will happen next). In other words, this is just my own perspective, and I can only speak for myself based on my experience reading more than 100 novels, which I greatly enjoy doing.
I really love the book I like the structure, writings and the character I would have like to read further but I don't have money to pay for the remaining chapters I stop at 42 author can you help me please am in love with the story
This book is so awesome and the first book I have ever commented on. it's so mind gripping and intriguing from the start and not a single chapter is dull. there is so much going on, that you can't help but anticipate each chapter. I read it in one day and now that I caught up and expecting the next chapter with excitement. I couldn't help but leave a review cause this book deserves. KUDOS to you author for walking me through so much emotion. kiaaaa!!!!
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I am loving this book the storyline is amazing the character development amazing I love how is a developing plot and it doesn't rush into it I think the writing is a 10
I love the book.. 😊 So far the best I've read about werewolves.. And unique also.. Can't wait for new chapters and for the book to finish.. Hopefully there will be a bulk upload of chapters..
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nice story.....well written...characters interactions written nicely................. ........................................................
A strong female lead we got here. Ah I love the stories with strong and independent fls. Read onya few chapters so far but I wish she stays that way. The good thing is that ML too seems to be good until now. Grammatical errors minimilisatic so far. A great read for those who like to read werewolf stories. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
What I like about this novel is that the main heroine is not someone passive and timid. She is a strong-willed person ready to act and get the things she wants by herself, however hard it might be. Leia's life is not easy, and as a result, she is a tough young woman. That makes her relationship dynamic with the werewolf alpha, who is a dominating ruler by nature, more interesting. The writing itself has room for improvement, but it delivers everything it needs to deliver, while the story itself has a lot of twists and turns. Another thing is that evil characters are really, really hateful, which makes you really want to see them get what they deserve. The author did a good job!
It is a well-written novel. I didn't even realize I was getting into the story while reading it. the main plot is sad but so successful. I do not like the romance genre as an action fan but liked this one. waiting for the next chapters.
okay so here I m6 review after reading up till the locked chapters. Thos novel is pure difference from what see in webnovel here. now why do o say that . 1. It is very original and very relatable, because I'm the first few chapters , she suffered quite a lot that I found myself crying at some part, but as I read , I saw how it was making Leia a stronger woman, and I have no doubt that there will be revenge in the end. 2. when she got sold off, things began to change. I don't wanna be a spoiler..so I will just recommend you guys to keep reading and just see how different the hook is. this is actually the first book I have written a review on and it's because Its very relatable. am a picky kind of reader. you guys should just read (keep tissues nearby) you will need it at some point. but then you guys will get to the awesome part were real thing happened. yep you guys will.
Thrilling interesting captivating and intriguing, the characters are well selected, each release unleash a new spell of suspense, keep it up author
Ahem! ^-^ Author here. Am giving myself five stars because I believe this is the best book I have written so far. I don't, I felt like all my hard work, patience, emotions, and thoughts were poured out into this one book. I took my time, slowly and carefully wrote this book to try and reach readers' expectations. Grammar is not perfect but I believe it's not bad either. I write then correct, upload, and still proofread it. English is not my first nor my second, but my third. But am sure my grammar isn't bad, but not perfect. Greatest thanks and appreciation to you guys that will read. I am so happy and grateful. I love you guys^-^ Ahem *cough* if y'all have questions, criticism, praise, anything ya confused about, please let me know under here okiii. I will be very happy to discuss it. Thank youuuuuuu
[Reviewed on: 24-01-2022] [Reading status: 7 chapters] Let me first praise the author for constructing smooth flow of the narration. It starts off wonderfully with the gruesome scene of a psychiatric ward, however the character development begins from an amazing point where we have sympathy for the female lead and a deeply rooted hatred for her father. Although the mysterious tone which revolves around every character keeps the readers interesting, and hooked because it gives off a separate and visible screen time to each character. Moving onto the male lead, the character appears to be an interesting supernatural being, what piqued interest in the initial chapters is the revelation "MC knew about the female lead." Nonetheless, a well crafted and well-thought book! Eager to see the author pumping out plenty of successful books! ❤
This is a very well written book.I love that's its different from the usual werewolves books.When I started this book I read it all in one day.I just couldn't wait to see what happened next.
If you enjoy reading about horrible people doing horrible things to other horrible people with no world building or character depth, just someone's harley quinn OC being abused and going ♤~*cRaZy*~♤ while constantly forgetting what a baseball bat is called, this story is for you. And by that, I mean this story sucks and is for no one, don't waste your time.
I was surprised with this story but i am living it so far. Adrik and Leia 😍 can't wait to jeep reading it
I love that this story was a bit different than others. Yes, like other stories, it has several different characters to love and hate. You still have the main characters to root for; but, this one takes different turns than the usual story line. Very nice.....thank you for the wonderful adventure!
it's good to read,this book has 18 but it's okay if you are a open minded person.The flow of the story are smooth and the characters are so fine,and I would like to thank the author for making this kind of novel.....I hope that you will make more stories
One of the best stories I’ve read, trust me you’ll love it. it’s awesome and intriguing, thank you author Lily 🥰❤️❤️❤️
it was really interesting and fun the Novel word is really understandable and enjoyable
The story's writing is decent. But the story's narrative lacks any excitement that might inspire the reader's enthusiasm. makes one want to stop reading the book in the middle. When reading a novel, unless it is comedic (which this is not), people must be able to hunger for more of the storylines (wanting to know what will happen next). In other words, this is just my own perspective, and I can only speak for myself based on my experience reading more than 100 novels, which I greatly enjoy doing.
I really love the book I like the structure, writings and the character I would have like to read further but I don't have money to pay for the remaining chapters I stop at 42 author can you help me please am in love with the story
This book is so awesome and the first book I have ever commented on. it's so mind gripping and intriguing from the start and not a single chapter is dull. there is so much going on, that you can't help but anticipate each chapter. I read it in one day and now that I caught up and expecting the next chapter with excitement. I couldn't help but leave a review cause this book deserves. KUDOS to you author for walking me through so much emotion. kiaaaa!!!!
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I am loving this book the storyline is amazing the character development amazing I love how is a developing plot and it doesn't rush into it I think the writing is a 10
I love the book.. 😊 So far the best I've read about werewolves.. And unique also.. Can't wait for new chapters and for the book to finish.. Hopefully there will be a bulk upload of chapters..
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nice story.....well written...characters interactions written nicely................. ........................................................
A strong female lead we got here. Ah I love the stories with strong and independent fls. Read onya few chapters so far but I wish she stays that way. The good thing is that ML too seems to be good until now. Grammatical errors minimilisatic so far. A great read for those who like to read werewolf stories. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
What I like about this novel is that the main heroine is not someone passive and timid. She is a strong-willed person ready to act and get the things she wants by herself, however hard it might be. Leia's life is not easy, and as a result, she is a tough young woman. That makes her relationship dynamic with the werewolf alpha, who is a dominating ruler by nature, more interesting. The writing itself has room for improvement, but it delivers everything it needs to deliver, while the story itself has a lot of twists and turns. Another thing is that evil characters are really, really hateful, which makes you really want to see them get what they deserve. The author did a good job!
It is a well-written novel. I didn't even realize I was getting into the story while reading it. the main plot is sad but so successful. I do not like the romance genre as an action fan but liked this one. waiting for the next chapters.
okay so here I m6 review after reading up till the locked chapters. Thos novel is pure difference from what see in webnovel here. now why do o say that . 1. It is very original and very relatable, because I'm the first few chapters , she suffered quite a lot that I found myself crying at some part, but as I read , I saw how it was making Leia a stronger woman, and I have no doubt that there will be revenge in the end. 2. when she got sold off, things began to change. I don't wanna be a spoiler..so I will just recommend you guys to keep reading and just see how different the hook is. this is actually the first book I have written a review on and it's because Its very relatable. am a picky kind of reader. you guys should just read (keep tissues nearby) you will need it at some point. but then you guys will get to the awesome part were real thing happened. yep you guys will.
Thrilling interesting captivating and intriguing, the characters are well selected, each release unleash a new spell of suspense, keep it up author
Ahem! ^-^ Author here. Am giving myself five stars because I believe this is the best book I have written so far. I don't, I felt like all my hard work, patience, emotions, and thoughts were poured out into this one book. I took my time, slowly and carefully wrote this book to try and reach readers' expectations. Grammar is not perfect but I believe it's not bad either. I write then correct, upload, and still proofread it. English is not my first nor my second, but my third. But am sure my grammar isn't bad, but not perfect. Greatest thanks and appreciation to you guys that will read. I am so happy and grateful. I love you guys^-^ Ahem *cough* if y'all have questions, criticism, praise, anything ya confused about, please let me know under here okiii. I will be very happy to discuss it. Thank youuuuuuu