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A very well written novel, if it were paperback, I would not hesitate to buy it. The writing quality is 5 stars, and currently, I cannot remember any grammar mistakes. In my opinion, the story development is a bit slow, but it is worth it. When I think about what the next chapter might have in it, I want to stay longer. Character design, I think, is very good, I can clearly see the personalities that the author has intended. However, it does feel that others don't get sufficient "screen" time, and it makes the story feel just a smidge empty. Looking at the latest chapter uploads, the stability is perfect. The worle background is incredible, I did not read the lore chapter right after a few premium chapters, but I have no doubt it was good. Even without it, I feel that I know enough about the world to imagine it quite clearly. I beg of you, dear author, do not give up on this unless you want to reserve a spot in my gem graveyard.
Is this dropped or what? I did read some of the chapters but later noticed that the last chapter was posted 2 months ago. so I am afraid continue onward.
there thing that should never be in villain story romanece harem and Poison and this the main character is at much anti her o hes'snot evil nor neutral evil neutral evil mc is always thinking about his benefits but this just jumps on whatever the author gives on people who are against him but neutral evil mc will go even against anyone who helped for his benefits by killing them stealing from them but this one is just killing his enemies which are Nobles i will say his leaning towards being hero not villain also he's making pawn which is usually one time use into something important to the mc and guess what that pawn is a woman which end up in romance neutral evil mc doesn't have time for romance
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i really like this novel but i have noticed that there are a couple mistakes like Aaron grows to 3 meters but the 2.5 meter tall guy is slightly taller than him tf?
The story is cool and there is interesting thing but some point made me a little unsure. There is a very good potentiel to the story but the author did some mistake, I think. Firstly, I don’t really understand the power of the character, I mean he arrived in a world and enslave a girl but no mage who are ancient monster could see it. The MC is intelligent but he put a rune on a noble girl who have a grandfather who could look if she has a contract and could kill him if he see it. Secondly, the mc is the most lucky men, he arrived to a place who organised at this exact moment a completion to enter a school, just after he arrived in the school they discover a ruin that could lead to his home world… I understand that you need to make events to progress in the story but you can make time elipse (the mc could have wait and train before the competition). You can also make that the mc force the situation like: by his presence and journey he creates a ripple that makes the ruin appears which it’s why the ruin will be next to where he appears… Also,during the exam, they literally stole a superb boat from the noble and everyone consider it’s normal that they keep it. I mean if I was the father of the noble girl, I would come and take back my boat. I mean it should be extremely expensive so I ll not care about convention. If power made law, the father can act as he please! I just feel that the world is custom made for the mc. People around him are just about his power, thing happen when the mc need it, I mean he acts like he is the strongest person in the world? Ok, sorry that I complain a lot but I feel that the book could really be good if you manage to rectifie this point because character are cool and seem complex. The plan of the mc where intelligent and I like the rules that you put!
Spoiler de révélation
I gotta that this book is actually a great read that gives everything in the right amounts, I would also highly recommend his latest book Project Galactica
The cover looks like overlord and his tower, awesome. 😁 will read 1 day after finishing other novels on my list 👍🤣
All was good and all untill the scene in the tavern. Provoking and killing others for no reason. Those killed also behaving in an absolutely stupid manner. If that’s the writing quality of the series, then I’m out
its good what can i say? the world at surface level seems like any other but again that's just surface level, the more u find out about it the more interesting the world of Pesia is and all its lost history is, grammar? Perfect i barley spot any mistakes, Character development? also exceptional i feel like they're real people and they have their own agendas and things they want do do which they do do and those agendas change if their environment change's, its a versatile world where an action could change the outcome of what someone else would want, the mc in general? also perfect, i mean he does what he wants to, he doesn't care about what people think of him and he doesn't care about how his actions seem to others ''good or bad'' since he doesn't care about what u think and feel, he only does what he wants to do he does not care whats in his way and he will do the VERY best of his capabilities to do it.
the book is absolutely amazing and still towards the beginning of the book but i was wondering if he will eventually have a relationship if not thats fine i was just curious?
I've been reading this since it was still only 50 chaps, and wow has it come a long way and will continue to go a long way for times to come, I definitely recommend checking this novel out.
Review till chapter 18 Focus on the why than the what the character reacts to stimuli. The read was a childish forcing edge lord behavior. The beginning chapters are too lackluster and peaceful. Chaos is a writers best friend. The mcs insentives for progress are also lackluster. There is no sense of urging or worry. Work on that.
Will he have a wife in the future? /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
In which chapter will Aaron get rid of his weakness which is Luna Mana ؟؟🤔🤔🤔🤔 And In which chapter will he develop and advance again?? 🤔🤔🤔
is King Of Limbo a kingdom bulding ? is King Of Limbo a kingdom bulding ? is King Of Limbo a kingdom bulding ? is King Of Limbo a kingdom bulding ?
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this is a must read novel .. y'all gata try it and add it to your library..... 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Never trust a novel that purports to have an evil mc if it has alot of good reviews. Writing quality is good minus the few typos in every chapter and updates are consistent. The world setting is the usual high fantasy genre with elves, dwarves beastmen etc. The limbo has potential but it has yet to be explored. The plot is good and somewhat engaging but the issue I cannot overlook is the fact that the mc is supposedly neutral evil. When you look at all the events that occur through that lense it doesnt really satisfy my desire as an evil mc fan and it feels like the novel is ripping me off. Also the sheer existence of rules is antithetical to the concept of neutral evil morality and should automatically disqualify the mc as some of them are in direct conflict with the alignment. Tldr it feels like im reading one of those cheap mangas, where everything the mc does is justified, and on the morally right side even tho we are told he doesnt care. Everything that the mc does for the most part is reactionary, hes not actively seeking out solutions. He wants information, a group of adventures make trouble for him and try to kill him, so he slaughters them all and gets what he wants from the last one alive before killing them. Why does he agree to join the academy? Because some mage tells him its the only way to cure his mana overload problem. The idea that its a good place to grow stronger is only a passing thought to him. Nobles come after him because of his ranking, so now he has a reason to strip them of their resources so he can get a head start when arriving at the academy. There are also odd situations that arise here and there which I can only describe as poison. Remember those adventurers he killed. A boy who is also an adventurer attacks him but all he gets is a minor injury unlike everyone else who died. The reason? Mc thought he wasnt worth killing as he got what he needed. But what about previously when u were fighting them for the sake of fighting and did not have a thought to get information? A pregnant couple ask mc for a spot in line ahed of him cause the women has been in the sun all day. Lo and behold the guy behind mc insults him, to which mc breaks his jaw and tells him to leave, offering the couple the spot. Why? What benefit does that bring mc? A young girl escorts the mc around town and asks for 1 bronze coin, he giver her 2 silvers. Again why? And these were all situations in just the first 14 chapters. Im dissapointed cause the author can write but as far as I read which is 14 chapters skimming to 50 its false advertising. Shuda just made the mc antihero and there would have been no problem.
I'm only 50 chapters in and I like it very very much I had some mixed feelings about it in the beginning but it's all good now I definitely recommend it
This is simply amazing... the writing quality isn't perfect, the update (not sure. but since I started reading yesterday and I'm at chapter 101 right now ), story development (the work is very detailed but not too much (not in an annoying way), and the author doesn't waste time on unimportant details, Character design (the author has been shedding light on the characters personalities, and said there would be more detailed explanations on their pasts as the story goes), world background (this doesn't just focuses on one small continent in a planet, where the characters think only one continent exists on their planet...lol, It's way more detailed)... to sum it up, this is a hidden gem
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3 words: A Hidden Gem..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
A very well written novel, if it were paperback, I would not hesitate to buy it. The writing quality is 5 stars, and currently, I cannot remember any grammar mistakes. In my opinion, the story development is a bit slow, but it is worth it. When I think about what the next chapter might have in it, I want to stay longer. Character design, I think, is very good, I can clearly see the personalities that the author has intended. However, it does feel that others don't get sufficient "screen" time, and it makes the story feel just a smidge empty. Looking at the latest chapter uploads, the stability is perfect. The worle background is incredible, I did not read the lore chapter right after a few premium chapters, but I have no doubt it was good. Even without it, I feel that I know enough about the world to imagine it quite clearly. I beg of you, dear author, do not give up on this unless you want to reserve a spot in my gem graveyard.
Is this dropped or what? I did read some of the chapters but later noticed that the last chapter was posted 2 months ago. so I am afraid continue onward.
there thing that should never be in villain story romanece harem and Poison and this the main character is at much anti her o hes'snot evil nor neutral evil neutral evil mc is always thinking about his benefits but this just jumps on whatever the author gives on people who are against him but neutral evil mc will go even against anyone who helped for his benefits by killing them stealing from them but this one is just killing his enemies which are Nobles i will say his leaning towards being hero not villain also he's making pawn which is usually one time use into something important to the mc and guess what that pawn is a woman which end up in romance neutral evil mc doesn't have time for romance
Good world and perfect mc [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
i really like this novel but i have noticed that there are a couple mistakes like Aaron grows to 3 meters but the 2.5 meter tall guy is slightly taller than him tf?
The story is cool and there is interesting thing but some point made me a little unsure. There is a very good potentiel to the story but the author did some mistake, I think. Firstly, I don’t really understand the power of the character, I mean he arrived in a world and enslave a girl but no mage who are ancient monster could see it. The MC is intelligent but he put a rune on a noble girl who have a grandfather who could look if she has a contract and could kill him if he see it. Secondly, the mc is the most lucky men, he arrived to a place who organised at this exact moment a completion to enter a school, just after he arrived in the school they discover a ruin that could lead to his home world… I understand that you need to make events to progress in the story but you can make time elipse (the mc could have wait and train before the competition). You can also make that the mc force the situation like: by his presence and journey he creates a ripple that makes the ruin appears which it’s why the ruin will be next to where he appears… Also,during the exam, they literally stole a superb boat from the noble and everyone consider it’s normal that they keep it. I mean if I was the father of the noble girl, I would come and take back my boat. I mean it should be extremely expensive so I ll not care about convention. If power made law, the father can act as he please! I just feel that the world is custom made for the mc. People around him are just about his power, thing happen when the mc need it, I mean he acts like he is the strongest person in the world? Ok, sorry that I complain a lot but I feel that the book could really be good if you manage to rectifie this point because character are cool and seem complex. The plan of the mc where intelligent and I like the rules that you put!
Spoiler de révélation I gotta that this book is actually a great read that gives everything in the right amounts, I would also highly recommend his latest book Project Galactica
The cover looks like overlord and his tower, awesome. 😁 will read 1 day after finishing other novels on my list 👍🤣
All was good and all untill the scene in the tavern. Provoking and killing others for no reason. Those killed also behaving in an absolutely stupid manner. If that’s the writing quality of the series, then I’m out
its good what can i say? the world at surface level seems like any other but again that's just surface level, the more u find out about it the more interesting the world of Pesia is and all its lost history is, grammar? Perfect i barley spot any mistakes, Character development? also exceptional i feel like they're real people and they have their own agendas and things they want do do which they do do and those agendas change if their environment change's, its a versatile world where an action could change the outcome of what someone else would want, the mc in general? also perfect, i mean he does what he wants to, he doesn't care about what people think of him and he doesn't care about how his actions seem to others ''good or bad'' since he doesn't care about what u think and feel, he only does what he wants to do he does not care whats in his way and he will do the VERY best of his capabilities to do it.
the book is absolutely amazing and still towards the beginning of the book but i was wondering if he will eventually have a relationship if not thats fine i was just curious?
I've been reading this since it was still only 50 chaps, and wow has it come a long way and will continue to go a long way for times to come, I definitely recommend checking this novel out.
Review till chapter 18 Focus on the why than the what the character reacts to stimuli. The read was a childish forcing edge lord behavior. The beginning chapters are too lackluster and peaceful. Chaos is a writers best friend. The mcs insentives for progress are also lackluster. There is no sense of urging or worry. Work on that.
Will he have a wife in the future? /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
In which chapter will Aaron get rid of his weakness which is Luna Mana ؟؟🤔🤔🤔🤔 And In which chapter will he develop and advance again?? 🤔🤔🤔
is King Of Limbo a kingdom bulding ? is King Of Limbo a kingdom bulding ? is King Of Limbo a kingdom bulding ? is King Of Limbo a kingdom bulding ?
ZAMBIA??? 🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲🇿🇲
this is a must read novel .. y'all gata try it and add it to your library..... 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
Never trust a novel that purports to have an evil mc if it has alot of good reviews. Writing quality is good minus the few typos in every chapter and updates are consistent. The world setting is the usual high fantasy genre with elves, dwarves beastmen etc. The limbo has potential but it has yet to be explored. The plot is good and somewhat engaging but the issue I cannot overlook is the fact that the mc is supposedly neutral evil. When you look at all the events that occur through that lense it doesnt really satisfy my desire as an evil mc fan and it feels like the novel is ripping me off. Also the sheer existence of rules is antithetical to the concept of neutral evil morality and should automatically disqualify the mc as some of them are in direct conflict with the alignment. Tldr it feels like im reading one of those cheap mangas, where everything the mc does is justified, and on the morally right side even tho we are told he doesnt care. Everything that the mc does for the most part is reactionary, hes not actively seeking out solutions. He wants information, a group of adventures make trouble for him and try to kill him, so he slaughters them all and gets what he wants from the last one alive before killing them. Why does he agree to join the academy? Because some mage tells him its the only way to cure his mana overload problem. The idea that its a good place to grow stronger is only a passing thought to him. Nobles come after him because of his ranking, so now he has a reason to strip them of their resources so he can get a head start when arriving at the academy. There are also odd situations that arise here and there which I can only describe as poison. Remember those adventurers he killed. A boy who is also an adventurer attacks him but all he gets is a minor injury unlike everyone else who died. The reason? Mc thought he wasnt worth killing as he got what he needed. But what about previously when u were fighting them for the sake of fighting and did not have a thought to get information? A pregnant couple ask mc for a spot in line ahed of him cause the women has been in the sun all day. Lo and behold the guy behind mc insults him, to which mc breaks his jaw and tells him to leave, offering the couple the spot. Why? What benefit does that bring mc? A young girl escorts the mc around town and asks for 1 bronze coin, he giver her 2 silvers. Again why? And these were all situations in just the first 14 chapters. Im dissapointed cause the author can write but as far as I read which is 14 chapters skimming to 50 its false advertising. Shuda just made the mc antihero and there would have been no problem.
I'm only 50 chapters in and I like it very very much I had some mixed feelings about it in the beginning but it's all good now I definitely recommend it
This is simply amazing... the writing quality isn't perfect, the update (not sure. but since I started reading yesterday and I'm at chapter 101 right now ), story development (the work is very detailed but not too much (not in an annoying way), and the author doesn't waste time on unimportant details, Character design (the author has been shedding light on the characters personalities, and said there would be more detailed explanations on their pasts as the story goes), world background (this doesn't just focuses on one small continent in a planet, where the characters think only one continent exists on their planet...lol, It's way more detailed)... to sum it up, this is a hidden gem
Good stuff ———————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————-
#Masterpiece.....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
3 words: A Hidden Gem..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Very good novel talking from chapter 200 but why isn’t it getting updated