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A very interesting concept - what would happen if other worldly people would invade our earth? The story picks up slowly as it starts with information about the world. but it is clear that it was unavoidable. And then the story picks up the pace and readers are sucked into Tenku's life. Good job author, keep writing.
So im only a few chapters in but i feel i can already give my toughts on the story. The writing quality is great and the Author maganes to pull you in the world he creates almost since the first paragraph. Also i genuinely love the concept behind this, and the story in general. The reason for the 4 stars instead of 5, however, its due to some pacing issues i notice but that is just me nitpicking. I absolutely reccomend this novel to anyone that likes this types of stories. I will definitely continue reading and will add it to my collection aswell.
Hello webnovel readers. This novel is my second work on this platform. Please give your rating and review in the comments section if you enjoy it. Of course, you don't need to talk about my grammar because I know it's far from good. That's why I keep trying every day to improve it. Your criticism will help me improve my novel to be better and make me more enthusiastic about writing the next chapters. Thanks! Happy reading!
Okay. So far, so good. Monsters, Systems, action and adventure... Just my type of book. I'm adding this to my Library😍😍😍
A very interesting concept - what would happen if other worldly people would invade our earth? The story picks up slowly as it starts with information about the world. but it is clear that it was unavoidable. And then the story picks up the pace and readers are sucked into Tenku's life. Good job author, keep writing.
So im only a few chapters in but i feel i can already give my toughts on the story. The writing quality is great and the Author maganes to pull you in the world he creates almost since the first paragraph. Also i genuinely love the concept behind this, and the story in general. The reason for the 4 stars instead of 5, however, its due to some pacing issues i notice but that is just me nitpicking. I absolutely reccomend this novel to anyone that likes this types of stories. I will definitely continue reading and will add it to my collection aswell.
Hello webnovel readers. This novel is my second work on this platform. Please give your rating and review in the comments section if you enjoy it. Of course, you don't need to talk about my grammar because I know it's far from good. That's why I keep trying every day to improve it. Your criticism will help me improve my novel to be better and make me more enthusiastic about writing the next chapters. Thanks! Happy reading!
Okay. So far, so good. Monsters, Systems, action and adventure... Just my type of book. I'm adding this to my Library😍😍😍